KH- A New Begining

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    It is good, as always. :)
     
  2. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    Chapter 7: A New Path To Follow
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    "Destiny Islands...it sounds nice." Tom says.
    "yep, that's because it sure is." Sharix said.
    "C'mon, lets go to my place. Maybe my big brother can help you." Tom says standing up.
    "alright then." Sharix said standing up aswell.
    Tom took her by the hand and led her towards his place.

    Another day started in Destiny Islands. "Sora! breakfast!" his mother, Vallerie calls.
    "coming mother!" he says jumping out of his bed, then running towards the dinning room. He sat down on his chair.
    Vallerie sat down too and both started to eat. "Are you going to play with your friends again?" she asks after taking a spoonful.
    "yup, as alwys! Just Riku, Kairi and I!" he says.
    "but how about...that other girl?" she asks.
    "what other girl? Are you sure you didn't just dream about her?" Sora says.
    "oh..well maybe I did." Vallerie says smiling.
    "Well, bye mom I'm going to play now!" he says finishing his food and jumping out of his chair. After giving his mother a kiss he ran off and played with his friends.
    She watched him go. "I'm positive there was sanother girl." she says, then sighed. "must just be my imagination." she adds, then fixes up the table washing the dishes.
    As she was washing the dishes, little did she know she was being watched- by Risha. It had worked. Their sorrow has ened. Sharix's stay in Destiny Islands was now 'erased'- no one remembered her. Or at least never thought she had existed. Many photos were taken, though she had been erased from all of it. No trace of her existance. Sharix was gone.
    Risha smiled, it was nice to see them happy again. She walked away from her, still not being spotted then disappeared.

    "Big brother I'm home!" Tom calls.
    "about time." he says, sounding like he was from the couch.
    "look, I've made a friend too. She seems lost, can you help her?" He asks.
    Tom's brother got up. "hello, my name is Evan. I'll try to help you but how first?" he asks.
    "I'm Sharix and I've been 'torn' away from my home-Destiny Islands...by the darkness." she says.
    "oh...well, first I think it would be best to help you learn how to survive. It's dangerous out there, and sometimes the only way to get out of the situation your in is to fight. So let's start there." Evan says.
    "see I knew he'd help." Tom says proudly.
    Sharix smiled.
    "well, c'mon we should start training now- you'd have to join too Tom." Evan said.
    "yes big brother." Tom groans.
    "Don't use that tone at me." he says then noogied Tom hard.
    "hey stop lemme go!" he says trying to pull away.
    Sharix had to giggle abit for this.
    "ok, ok I'll stop." he said letting him go. "C'mon follow me." he said.
    The two followed, becoming instant friends.
    "You see my brother is a warrior-demon guy, and I'm a demon fighter thingy-mabob in training. So that's why he thinks this would be good for us."Tom explains.
    Sharix nodded understandingly. Sora, Kairi, Riku- i'm comming, so be ready for me. she thought confidently.
     
  3. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    OMGS!!! So... Risha is like another Namine?
     
  4. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    yeah..sorta..well I actually based Risha on her. :3

    Chapter 8: Will Today have any Luck?
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    a year has past and Sharix was now a fighter as well. Infact, Evan and Tom were pretty suprised, i seems as if she's been fighting ever since before. Now, she weilds a sword- two actually. Both have little black crystals attatched to it. Well technically it used to be blue. But when Sharix touched it, it somehow turned black. Though, they just ignored that. So back to the story. It was another day of practice today, she had grown stronger now. So has Tom, but they haven't beaten Evan yet. Though, things could change after a while.
    "So are you ready to loose to me again?" Evan taunts at them.
    "oh no. Our luck can change today, ya know." Sharix says.
    "yup, today's the day your going down brother!" Tom adds.
    "alright then." Evan said.
    They walked to the woods- where they'd usually train. It was nice there, you can just suddenly ambush towards them and other suprising attacks. So once they got there, usually they'd imediatley start. And that's what happened today aswell.
    Summoning her swords she got into position.
    Tom transformed into one of his demonic forms at this time.
    Evan summons his long,long sword that was huge really. Though still small enough to be handled perfectly.
    Then, the fight started. Roaming around the woods, jumping into trees, rushing up to one another and even slashing one person was part of the game. Cause you see, the woods they we're in had some kind of healing from the trees and there was a magical lake you can stay in to heal fully in just a few minuits. It indeed was a magical forest, that's another reason why they'd train there.

    Risha watched them, "they are getting better." she thought. she Continued watching them.

    Sharix and TOm finishes Evan off. They had done it! Evan falls to the floor and couldn't get up. Giving the two a thumbs up, sitting up slightly. He fell back after.
    "alright! Yea!" Tom says jumping happily.
    "we did it!" Sharix sais jumpoing aswelll.
    Evan got up with their help.
    "ok, so you've bet me this time." he said.
    "yep, we sure did!" She said happily.
    "That doesn't mean you'll win against everyone else in this world ok." Evan adds.
    "yes, we know. There can always be someone out there who's better than you."Tom says.
    "so, why don't we go home. Then we can all try and figure out were this Destiny Islands is and how'd we'll find a way there." Evan said.
    Sharix nodded smiling, they have tried to trace a path to Destiny Islands before. But nothing much helped, so their just going to try again today. They all turned and walked home together. Now, she'll be home. Soon.
     
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  6. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    Chapter 9: Another Loss
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    "well have you gotten it?" Sharix asks curiously.
    Evan shook his head. "sorry, nothing about this Destiny Islands place."
    Sharix sighed.
    "Hey maybe it's some other world." Tom says.
    "you've got to be kidding. Those are just little stories." Evan says.
    "hmph. Well, what do you think Sharix?" Tom asks turning to her
    "uh...well...yeah..I guess, maybe." she says unsurely scratching her head.
    "aha! See that's 2 against one!" Tom says.
    "actually no, she said it in an unsure tone- I know it." Evan says.
    "nu-uh." Tom sys.
    "uh-huh." Evan shot back.
    "nu-uh."
    "uh-huh."
    "nu-uh."
    "uh-huh."
    "oh man....this will be going on forever." Sharix says burrying her hands in her face, as the two brother continued to argue Sharix looked at the different maps of the world she was in. Maybe Tom was right after all- there was no Destiny Islands around here and there's no path towards it. She had second thoughts now.
    "uh-huh."
    "nu-uh."
    "GUYS!" Sharix exclaims.
    "what?!" the two say in unison.
    "look, I'm sticking with Tom's theory. Maybe it is in another world." Sharix says.
    "ha!" Tom says sticking his tongue at Evan.,
    Evan rolled his eyes. "fine- but how do we get there if you want to go home?"
    "simple." a voice suddenly said from behind.
    "what- who's there?!" Evan says alerted by the voice.
    Tom grabs his weapon, sharix does the same.
    A man and a young girl appeared. "hello." the girl said.
    Sharix stare. "they seem so familiar..." she says softly.
    "who are you?!" Evan says.
    "I am Ansem and this is Risha." the guy said.
    "hiya!" Risha said. "oh and Sharix is coming with us- to our home."
    Tom glared at them. "the only home she stays in is here....and maybe Destiny Islands too, whatever it is!"
    Risha smiled and walked towards them.
    Evan swung his weapon at her, but nothing happened.
    Tom did the same, and still nothing happened.
    Sharix just stood there- she couldn't attack, she just couldn't.
    Risha grabs her wrist "c'mon, it was nice to finally get to see you- well I've seen you before but you haven't seen me! So this is like an opportunity." she smiles and yanks Sharix away.
    "lemme go!"Sharix says trying to get away.
    Risha didn't say anything she just walked towards the portal and disappeared along with Ansem.
    "Sharix! Oh-no, she told me she was afraid this would happen again." Tom says.
    Evan sighed. "sorry bro, nothing we can do now."
    Tom nodded. "yeah...nothing."

    "who are you?!" Sharix asks.
    "how can you not know me? I'm your nobody you nut head!" Risha says.
    "n-nobody?" Sharix repeats.
    "yep!"
    "Risha come, lets go to the lab now." Ansem says.
    "yeah, c'mon Sharix." se said grabbing her wrist again and yanking her away....again.
    Sharix frowned. "again..."


    Okie...I don't know anymore- I stopped writing this story for a while so I'm not so sure if this was any good...
     
  7. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    Alright, I'm really bored so here I go again writing....:D


    Chapter 10: Another Encounter
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    "Lab assistants! We have brought in a new member!" Ansem announces.
    "M-member..?" Sharix repeats.
    "yeah, like me! Sorry you don't have much of a choice, sis...hey?! Is it alright if I call you Sis? Or should I just call you Sharix? Well?" Risha asks.
    "uh...I guess you should call me Sharix instead- I barely even know you." she says.
    "How can you be so stupid?! I promise that we'll get along instantly!" Risha says.
    "um...ok." Sharix said.
    Soon, different people came right infront of them. These must be the lab assistants... Sharix thought.
    "everyone! This is Sharix, the nobody of Risha. We will be able to complete the reports with them." Ansem says. "but first, we might aswell erase those memories of being in other worlds and encountering those old friends of hers."
    "what?!" Sharix exclaims.
    "he's just kidding, trust me." Risha reassures her.
    "Alright then, Sharix meet my lab assistants: Braig, Dilan, Neve, Leseu, Ienzo, and of course Risha- though Risha here isn't much of an assistant...just like an apparatus." Ansem says.
    "uhh....hi.." Sharix said. "will I..be able to go back to Destiny Islands?"
    "yes, after we finish the reports of course." Ansem says.
    "then alright, I'll cooperate!" Sharix said smiling.
    Risha nodded, smiling too.

    They didn't really get to start their reports just yet though, Sharix didn't really cooperate that well. The only thing on her mind that time was Destiny Islands. So that day, they we're just going to lay down all the work first. Actually, it wasn't just one day- but a few days actually. Sharix was still quite shy. Though, those few days worked. She got closer to the lab assistants- especially Risha and Ienzo. Risha and Ienzo we're close from the start actually. And welll, it looks like they've formed a triangle- now Sharix has joined in.
    "Ienzo!" Sharix calls looking for him.
    "yeah?!" Ienzo replies.
    "where are you!?" she asks.
    "I'm just- wait I'll be right there!" he says and soon walks out of his room, reading a book.
    "so...that was what you were doing..." she says. "sorry to have disturbed you."
    "It's ok, I've read this before anyway." he says. "so why'd you call?"
    "Well, I'm bored. And Risha said she'd be out for a while....I wonder where she is." Sharix says.
    "oh, so what do you want to do?" Ienzo asks.
    "um.....maybe we can..uh...I dunno. YOu think of something, your smarter!" Sharix said.
    Ienzo laughed a bit. "alright, alright. How about we just take a little stroll around outside."
    "ok then, whatever you say." Sharix said. With that the two went outside for a walk.

    Meanwhile, Risha was visiting an old friend of hers......or rather Sharix's.
    She appeared infront of a young boy. "why hello there. Your Tom right?"
    Tom turned around. "yes and your Risha right."
    "yup, sorry we had to pull Sharix away from you like that." she says.
    "I don't understand...why? hasn't she had enough? Hasn't she struggled enough in her life?" Tom says.
    "hey I already said I'm sorry! And We're going to make it easier for her, FWI!" she says.
    "oh yeah, and how is that?!" he snaps back.
    "We're taking her back to Destiny Islands once we've finished our job." Risha retorts.
    "I bet your lieing!" Tom says.
    "I am not! We are taking her back!" Risha says.
    "No your not! Liar!" Tom says.
    "your just secretly sad, mad and frustrated that you don't get to be with her anymore!" Risha says.
    "you take that back! I am not!" Tom says.
    "oh yes you are!" Risha says.
    "shut-up would you!?" Tom says.
    Risha sighed. "you know what I shouldn't have gone here. Your just ruining my day." Risha says disappearing.
    Evan suddenly comes from the door. "hey, all your shouting woke me up...was someone with you? Or where you just talking to your idiotic, weird self again?" he teases.
    Tom stuck his tongue at him. "you shut-up too." he saysand walks to his room.
    "whatever..." Evan says rolling his eyes and going back to his room for a nap."
    Arg...that fool. That fool Risha. Sh-she has no idea what the hell she's talking about. Tom thought. ..yet, in some weird way she reminds me alot of Sharix. Wnd for some reason, I think she's ri- arg! She's using some kind of spell on me I know it!!! he adds, but he knows that he only thought bout that cause he couldn't accept that he was the one lieing.