KH 2-3: Shards of Broken Destiny (Story Chapters)

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  1. zerogit Destiny Islands Resident

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    Y'know what, it HAS to be Xed. 14 keyblades and she was probably sketching something for a weapon. If Sora falls madly in love with her, it's Roxas's fault for being his other. AND IF YOU MAKE HIM FALL IN LOVE WITH XED AND XED RETURNS IT I"M GOING TO CLOG YOUR PRIVATE MESSAGES WITH JUNK!!!!!!!! DON"T THINK I WON"T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    Cool chapter, as always!! I absolutely love the boos fight, great job!! You know, I´m starting to think that Sora can be easily fooled...
    Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!!
     
  3. >Keyblader< Traverse Town Homebody

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    Nice. That's got to be Xed. I mean, who else can weild 14 keyblades at one time?
     
  4. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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    Pwnage. A great chapter like always.
     
  5. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    o.o

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    I'm n-n-not s-saying a-any t-thing....


    *is terrified*

    Thank you! :D And thank you!

    Easily fooled? pfft, you don't know the half of it!

    *gasps*

    *puts duct tape over mouth*

    I'm not saying anything. :)

    But thank you! :D

    :D Thank you!
     
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    Nixon: Yo! What Happened to us?!
    Hexon: You totaly took us out of the intro!
    Me: Guys!
    Hexon: But she took us out of the intro!
    Nixon: It just ain't right...I mean we're on cereal boxes for gods sake, We've got a contract!
    Me: GGUUUUYS!
    Both: What?!
    Me: You're in the next one...(I hope)
    Both: Oh....well, why didn't you say so?
     
  7. AkuseruVIII Banned

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    Oh! That's strange. At least all of it makes sense now. NO, seriously it does. I'm not crazy. I'm not! That aside I think this chapter was good. Nothing special, but y'know it really isn't supposed to be. I think it's spelled orichalcum though.
     
  8. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Chapter 6 Goodness :)

    CHAPTER 6! CHAPTER 6!

    Me: Hey everybody, shut up and listen to what I have to say!
    Xed: Well, aren't you being bos--
    Me: I SAID SHUT UP!!!!

    (everyone shuts up)

    Me: Thank you. I have a VERY important announcement to make, so here goes:

    Tomorrow, I'm going to my friend's house, and I'm not coming back until Friday. So, THERE WILL BE NO UPDATES FOR SOBD, BOSS BATTLES, RANDOM FACTS, OR BMTL UNTIL FRIDAY! (possibly Saturday :3)

    Everyone: Awwwww!!!
    Me: Don't worry! This chapter has a HUGE twist at the end, so you'll enjoy it! :)
    Everyone: Ok!!!

    ~Chapter 6~

    “So Donald, where are we headed?†Sora asked, turning around in his seat to look over at his companion. Donald pressed some buttons on the keypad before him.
    “We’re going to Beast’s Castle.†He announced, pulling a lever that put the Gummi ship into drive.

    (A/N – Just assume that our heroes here know the names of all the worlds, ok? Thanks!)
    Goofy scratched his head.
    “Why’re we goin’ there?†he asked. Donald shrugged.
    “I don’t know, but I just have a feeling that we should go there first.†Sora nodded.
    “Now that I think of it, I sorta have the same feeling too.†He said. Goofy raised an eyebrow.
    “Well, I have a feeling that we shouldn’t go…†Donald rolled his eyes.
    “Awww, what do you know, you big palooka?†he then pushed another button, and the Gummi ship lifted into the sky, and started to fly away from Hollow Bastion and towards their destination.

    +++

    “They are on their way to Beast’s Castle.â€

    “Duh, I knew that!â€

    “Respect your Superiors.â€

    “Whatever you say.â€

    “Because I’m not exactly pleased with your latest work, I’m assigning you a mission.â€

    “Oh Goody!â€

    “Drop the tone. You are to go to Beast’s Castle and take the place of Xaldin. He hasn’t arrived yet, so the timing in perfect.â€

    “Whatever you say.â€

    “And, Number XI, do not disappoint me.â€

    “Whatever. You know, I did have something to tell you, but I forgot what it was. Too bad, eh?â€

    “Save your foolishness for some who cares, Number XI. Now go.â€

    “Whatever you say.â€


    +++

    The Gummi ship had just started to fly away when all of the sudden, the engine started to sputter, and the ship started to shake.
    “What’s going on?!†Sora shouted over the roar of the flailing engine.
    “I don’t know!!!†Donald shouted back, pressing random buttons on the keypad. “Something’s wrong with the engine!!!†Sora shot him an annoyed look.
    “You think?!â€
    “I told you fellers we shouldn’t have gone!!†Goofy shouted. Suddenly, the ship stopped shaking.
    “Phew…†The trio breathed in relief that the pandemonium was over.

    Just then, the engine started clicking.

    “What’s that?†Sora asked. Goofy shrugged.
    “Well, that either means the engine is dying, or—“ But he was stopped short when the Gummi ship stopped moving altogether, and started to fall—

    —Right out of the sky!

    As the ship went hurtling back down towards Hollow Bastion, the three did the one thing that they could do at the time:

    “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!â€

    +++

    Riku and King Mickey were walking around in the Great Maw, observing the number of Nobodies and Heartless that still roamed the area.
    “There do seem to be less.†Riku commented, noticing that they hadn’t run into a Nobody or Heartless for the past five minutes. The King nodded.
    “Yes, the new system is doing quite…†he trailed off, noticing something. He then looked up at Riku. “Did you hear that?†Riku listened. Somewhere off in the distance he could hear the faint sound of someone screaming.
    “I hear it.†He said, raising an eyebrow. “What is it?†King Mickey shook his head.
    “I’m not—look!†h shouted suddenly, pointing up to the sky. Riku looked up and gasped at what he saw.

    Something that looked suspiciously like a Gummi ship was falling rapidly out of the sky and towards the ground somewhere off in the distance. They watched with shocked expressions as the ship disappeared into the horizon with a loud crash.

    “Isn’t that Sora’s, Donald’s, and Goofy’s Gummi ship?†Riku asked, slightly afraid of the answer. The King’s eyes widened in horror.
    “It is!†he exclaimed. “C’mon!†The two then began running as fast as they could towards the fallen ship.

    +++

    CRACK!!!

    CRASH!!!

    THUD!!!

    “Owww…â€

    Once the ship had neared the ground, the trio had jumped out of the ship, not wanting to be in it when it made contact with the ground. The three had, instead of crashing into the ground, crashed through the roof of what appeared to be an old warehouse, and then crashed into the ground. They lay on the ground in a heap, semi-conscious, moaning softly from the shocks of dull pain coursing through their bodies from the impact.

    “You know, I’ve had a lot of people drop in before, but you three were the first to introduce that to a whole new level.â€

    Sora opened his eyes and looked up to see someone leaning over him.

    “AHHH!!!†he yelled out in surprise, sitting up so quickly that his head started to spin. The figure –which turned out to be female- started laughing at Sora’s reaction. Goofy and Donald sat up as well to see what was so funny. The person then turned on a light switch, lighting up the previously dark room. The party took a moment to look at the person.

    She had long, straight, waist-length hair that was a reddish-brown color with black steaks in it. Her hair was styled in a way that covered the right side of her face. They wore a pale-rose colored top that was frayed at the top, sleeveless, with golden-yellow colored straps. The top was cut at the bottom in a triangle shape, that shoed part of her stomach. She wore baggy green pants with golden-yellow sections in the middle. She had on black and red shoes, two black and red belts around her waist, and black and red band around her right arm, and a black and red choker necklace with a black ‘T’ charm on it. She looked about Sora’s age, and was about Sora’s height.

    She smiled warmly at the party.

    “So, who are you guys?†she asked.
    “Well, I’m Sora,†Sora started, “this is Donald, and this is Goofy.†He finished, pointing to each in turn. She nodded.
    “Nice to meet ya. The name’s—“

    “Sora! Donald! Goofy!â€

    The four turned around to see Riku and King Mickey run through the door, looking worried.
    “You’re all okay!†The King exclaimed, seeing the three alive and well. Riku sighed, relived.
    “We saw your ship crash and thought—“

    “Riku?â€

    Everyone turned towards the girl, who had spoken. She looked at Riku with a questioning look in her eyes. Riku narrowed his eyes. The girl…she seemed so…familiar…

    “Raemond?â€

    Now everyone looked over at Riku, surprised. He knew her?

    The girl smiled, both shocked and excited. Riku smiled back in the same fashion.

    “NO WAY!!†They shouted simultaneously, running into each other’s arms, embracing each other in a tight hug.

    Everyone else just stood there, dumbfounded, that the two knew each other. Then, the King smiled, shocked.
    “Wait a minute, you’re Raemond?†he said. Riku and the girl pulled away, looking over at the mouse King. She shook her head, a smile still on her face.
    “No, I used to be Raemond. I’m now Xedramon. Or Xed, for short.†She said. She then looked at Riku with a hard grimace. She suddenly punched Riku on his arm, very hard.
    “Hey! What was that for?!†He shouted angrily, rubbing his now sore arm. She put her hands on her hips.
    “THAT was for ditching me at the Twilight path.†She said. Xed then punched Riku again on his arm, in the same spot. “And THAT was for worrying me half to death!†Riku raised an eyebrow at her.
    “I…worried you?†he questioned. She nodded.
    “I was scared for you…I thought something bad had happened to you…like you got hurt…and that was why you didn’t come to meet me at the Twilight path.†Riku looked down at the ground. He didn’t think he had scared her or anything.
    “I’m sorry…†he apologized. He really meant it. Xed looked down at the ground, crossing her arms.
    “So, tell me Riku…†She looked up at him.

    “Why did you ditch me?â€

    Riku opened his mouth to talk, but nothing came out. How was he supposed to tell her that he’d broken their promise to side with the Darkness once again?

    Just then, there was a soft knock on the door. Xed walked over and opened the door. At the door was a white-cloaked figure with the hood up, concealing their face.
    “Hey, come on in.†she said, with a smile. The figure walked in to see the five who were staring at him with a quizzical look. The figure chuckled.
    “It looks like everyone’s here.†Sora raised an eyebrow.
    “What’s that mean?†The figure crossed his arms and smirked under his hood.
    “It mean’s you’re all here. About time; I didn’t think you’d get here soon enough.†Xed smiled.
    “Well, let me introduce you to everyone.†She said, placing a hand on the figure’s shoulder. “This is—“
    “Sora, Donald, Goofy, King Mickey, and…Riku…†he said, saying Riku’s name with so much venom you’d be surprised that no one dropped dead at the sound of it. Everyone was shocked.
    “How do you know our names?!†Donald said, utterly shocked. The figure shook his head.
    “Doesn’t matter.†He said, walking up to Riku, and circling him, as if to examine him.
    “What are you doing?†Riku asked, raising an eyebrow.
    “Wow, you haven’t changed at all…how surprising.†The figure scoffed, ignoring his question. Xed walked over to the cloaked figure and pushed him gently.
    “Be nice.†She warned. She then turned to Riku. “There’s someone I’d like you all to meet, and for Riku to especially meet.†She said, her tone seeming to hold slight fright.

    The figure pulled down his hood.

    Everyone gasped in surprise, save for the figure and Xed.

    The figure, which was male, had spiked down hair, raven black, with pieces of it covering his eyes, his style looking exactly like Riku’s. Underneath the wisps of hair covering his face shone a pair of golden eyes, tainted with darkness and glowing mengly. His expression was fixed into an emotionless frown, adding to his cool stature.

    He…looked…

    Just like Riku…

    “Riku…†Xed said slowly, her gaze diverting away from Riku’s.

    “This is Kuxir…â€

    She took a breath, fearing the worst of Riku’s reaction.

    “Your…â€


    There was a still silence that seemed so loud; it could shatter every sound barrier imaginable.


    “…Your Heartless.â€


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    Riku: WTSBBQ?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?
    Xed: Yup.
    Sora: YOU HAVE A HEARTLESS?!?!!
    Riku: WTS?!?!?! WHY DO I HAVE A HEARTLESS!!??!
    Saix: Now THIS is what I call DRAMA!!!
    Hexen: Wow! That's a twist!!!
    Riku: *grabs Fg's collar* TELL ME WHY I HAVE A HEARTLESS NOW!!!
    Me: Nope! You haveta wait 'till Chapter 7!
    Riku: *dies of anticipation*
     
  9. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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    OMFGWFTOMJ!! >.> >.<


    PLLOOOTT TWWIISSTTT!!




    *dies*


    Though it makes sense he has a Heartless.....>.> and that means there has to be a Nobody down the line! :bounce: WOoo! Cant wait till Chp. 7


    first postness!
     
  10. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    AWESOME

    I would say something else but I value my life so I wont.

    Gah I won't be able to read any more till the 22nd of July!

    But great job!

    It's Xed!!!!!!!
     
  11. AkuseruVIII Banned

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    Damn. Speechless. No mindblow yet. I saw it coming I mean the Heartless part too but I mean come on. Knowing it's coming doesn't make it any less exciting or confusing.
     
  12. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    lol thanks! :D

    I'm not saying anything.

    Just read the next chapter..whenever that is XD

    I thank you for valuing ur life

    Thanks! :D

    lol XDDD

    thanks
     
  13. Deadmages26 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Holy :censor2:!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  14. Viroxor Traverse Town Homebody

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    I thought it was gonna be Ansem. I was like. Woah.
     
  15. ~RoadToDawn~ Destiny Islands Resident

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    woa....im speechless...ecept for....
    rikus HEARTLESS?!?!? i thought kuxir was his nobody! *faints*
    ...yup...thats all i can say....
    SEE YOU IN A WEEK!
    *dies of anticipation*
     
  16. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    *dies laughing*

    lol, nope :) He's a heartless :D

    lol Nope. He's a Heartless! I fooled all of yall! XD

    kk, c ya! :D
     
  17. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    AWSOME!!!!!!

    Really great chapter!! This is before 14th key and BMA, before Xed got separated from Kuxir, right? BTW wy is Kuxir Riku's heartless? I thought that only the stronger nobodies(like Org. XIII) were able to keep a body and add an X to their name.. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!!

    To bad you wont be able to update until Friday or Saturday...
     
  18. >Keyblader< Traverse Town Homebody

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    OMG!!! Riku has a heartless???? But that means that Riku is a nobody???
    Or is someone else????:confused:
     
  19. RikuStalker Destiny Islands Resident

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    Riku has a Heartless, Riku has a Heartless!

    Riku: STOP IT. NOW. OR I WILL DENT YOUR HEAD IN.

    Me: Aw Riku, it doesn't make you any less huggable! -huggle-

    Riku: -.-;;;;;;;; Never try to argue with a fangirl.

    Me: :D
     
  20. Viroxor Traverse Town Homebody

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    I seriously thought it was gonna be Ansem (not DiZ, Xehanort's Heartless Ansem). I wonder if Kuxir will be pissed about Sora blowing up the only other one of his kind.
     
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