KH 2-3: Shards of Broken Destiny (Story Chapters)

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  1. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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  2. keylbader_twilight Traverse Town Homebody

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    I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Hurry and post!!!
     
  3. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thank you! :D

    lol thanks :) but the next ch wont come out till tomorrow night, or saturday :) right now ima go work on a vid i've wanted to get done for a while now :D
     
  4. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Awww. I;m not a member of fanfiction.net. I can't read BMTL. T_TAnyway, good chapter! A little boring, but obviously neccecary for the story. *nods*
     
  5. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Woah! great job!

    I like it!

    It's like what actually happened in the game, but it's not.

    Great chapter! *hugs*

    fg: dont hug me
    me: why not?
    fg: i'm not a touchy-feely person
    fg: in other words, i dont like physical contact, like hugs

    Great chapter anyway!

    and the BMTL is awesome too!
     
  6. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    Hexon: Where'd that sleezy no good fangirl-boy, Axel go?
    Nixon: Oh Axel! Come here boy! *whistles*
    Me: You guys are nuts beyond my reason...and control.
     
  7. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thank you, but you don't have to be a member to read it. anyone can :)

    And yeah, i admit, this one was REALLY boring, but it was a filler :)

    The next chapters are gonna be a lot more exciting!

    thank you :)

    DONT HUG ME!!! *eyes twitches*

    and thank you :D
     
  8. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    so um are you gonna make the demon I got a boss battle for the next chapter?
     
  9. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    Cool chapter!!...I wonder how Sora will deal with 13 organization nobodies.. Anyway, keep it up!! I love the twist that your giving to the story!!
     
  10. >Keyblader< Traverse Town Homebody

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    Awesomeness. That's all I have to say.:D
     
  11. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    I like ur demon, but i can't make it a boss battle. I REALLY hope that I don't offend you when i say that he doesn't really fit into the story plot. But i think he's totally awesome!

    I'm really sorry, and I hope i didn't hurt your feelings or put you donw or anything.

    Thank you! :D

    hehe...the organization....dealing with them? XDDDDDD

    (you'll find out why i'm laughing a few chapters from now)

    and thank you :)

    oh, and here's the link to Bring Me To Life:

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3608249/1/

    This one works! ;D

    Thank ya! :D:D:D
     
  12. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanks for the link. I really wanted to read your other story.

    PS: You have to much evil laughs....
     
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    eh knew it was gonna happen.
     
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    Chapter 5

    Hooray for chapter 5! :D

    (Xed walks into the theater)

    Xed: Hi!

    (Riku and Roxas jump up from their seats)

    Riku: Sit next to me!
    Roxas: No, sit next to me!
    Riku: No! Me!
    Roxas: No! Me!
    Xed: Uhh...guys...?
    Riku: She should sit next to me! We spent time in the realm of Darkness together!
    Roxas: Oh yeah? Well, we were in two stories together!
    Riku: Oh really?
    Roxas: Yeah! We were in 'The 14th Key' and 'Bad moon Arising' together!
    Xed: Guys...?
    Riku: Oh yeah well...we spent time in the realm of Darkness together!!!
    Xed: GUYS SHUT UP AND LISTEN TO ME!!!!!!

    (Riku and Roxas shut up)

    Xed: I'm not sitting next to either one of you, because I'm saving two seats.
    Riku and Roxas: Why?
    Xed: For my friends coming later.
    Riku and Roxas: Oh....
    Me: HEY EVERYBODY IT'S ABOUT TO START!!!!

    (everyone sits down)

    ~Chapter 5~

    After about an hour, and with no luck in finding the Organization, Sora, Donald, and Goofy came back to the Hollow Bastion marketplace feeling defeated. Donald sighed.
    “Awww, phooey.â€
    “I can’t believe it!†Sora said, exasperated. “We spent all that time for nothing!†Goofy was about to say something, when he noticed something that caught his eye.
    “Hey fellers, look!†he exclaimed, pointing up to a nearby rooftop. Sora and Donald looked up to see what he was looking at.

    Sitting on top of the rooftop was a figure, in an Organization XIII coat. They were leaned over, as if they were reading or writing.

    “What do you think they’re doing?†Sora asked, raising an eyebrow. Donald shook his head.
    “Who knows, but let’s get em’!†he shouted. Sora and Goofy nodded, running off closer to the rooftop.

    +++

    Once reaching the rooftop, they took a look around, only to find that—

    “They’re GONE?!?!†The party shouted in unison, feeling more defeated than ever. Donald narrowed his eyes.
    “Phooey!!!†he said angrily. Goofy frowned.
    “I wonder where they went?†he asked aloud. Donald looked up at the two.
    “They couldn’t have gotten too far!†he said. Sora nodded.
    “Yeah!†he said, turning around and starting to run. “Maybe we can still catc—“

    WHACK!!!

    Sora, not paying attention to where he was going, whacked into someone, causing the person’s papers to fly everywhere. Clumsily, he started gathering up the papers.
    “Sorry about that…†he apologized.

    “It’s okay.â€

    Sora looked up to see that the other person kneeling before him and picking up papers…

    …Was the cloaked figure from before!

    “You!†Sora shouted, jumping to his feet, papers still in hand. Donald and Goofy ran up to where Sora was. The figure got up off the ground, and brushed themselves off. The party then got a better look at the figure.

    While they still had their cloak on, and the hood up, they had the hood on in such a way that it only covered their eyes and hair. Their mouth and nose was still visible, along with their neck. Around their neck, they wore a black and red choker necklace with a black ‘T’ on it. Around their waist, two red and black belts hung loosely, and they were wearing black and red shoes, unlike the other members, who only wore black shoes and nothing on the outside of their coat. On the figure’s hands were gloves with the fingers cut out of them, exposing their pale-peach colored skin. They were about the same height as Sora, and looked about the same age as him as well.

    The figure held one stack of papers in one arm, and extended their other hand out towards Sora.
    “Can I have my papers back, please?†they asked, rather politely. By how their voice sounded, the party could tell that the figure was female.
    “What are you doing here, Nobody?†Sora asked, more like demanded. The figure took her outstretched hand and placed in on her hip.
    “I could ask you the same thing, Whole.†She remarked. Donald grit his teeth.
    “Answer the question!†he shouted.
    “I’m here to enjoy the day, Duck. Why are you here?â€
    “Get lost!†Sora shouted.
    “Gladly; just give me my papers back.†Sora then looked down at the papers he still had in his hand.
    “What are these?†he asked, his eyes scanning the papers that had sentences scribbled on them in a neat script.
    “Hey!†the figure shouted, snatching the papers out of Sora’s hand before he could read any more. “Those are private!†With his hands free, Sora quickly summoned his Keyblade.
    “Who are you?†he demanded. The figure rolled her eyes.
    “I don’t give out my information to strangers.†She replied snidely.
    “Just tell us!†Donald said, taking out his weapon. Goofy followed suit. The figure chuckled.
    “Fine then, I’ll tell you, but you’ll have to fight me for it.†Then, the figure raised her hand, and a flash of white engulfed it. Once the light cleared, Sora, Goofy, ad Donald gasped in surprise.

    She was holding a Keyblade!

    “What, getting nervous?†she asked teasingly, seeing Sora’s shocked expression. Sora then narrowed his eyes.
    “Yeah right!†He gripped his Keyblade tighter. The figure then raised her hands up, and a wall of translucent white light appeared between Sora and herself, and Donald and Goofy.
    “Sorry, but this is a private fight.†She said, twirling her Keyblade around her fingers.
    “Sora!†Donald and Goofy shouted from outside the field. Sora turned to them.
    “I’ll be fine!†he reassured them, before turning back to face his opponent. The figure looked up at him.
    “Tell me something…Sora, is it?†she said, smirking at him. “Are you afraid of heights?†Sora raised an eyebrow.
    “No…†he said, wondering why she was asking him. She chuckled softly.

    “Good.â€

    Just then, the area they were standing on rose up, lifting the two Keybladers high into the sky. Once they stopped rising, Sora looked over the edge and gasped.

    He couldn’t even see Donald or Goofy anymore!

    “Now then…†the figure said, getting into a fighting stance.

    “Where were we?â€

    +++

    Boss Battle: http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=443369#post443369

    +++

    Sora fell to his knees, totally exhausted. He looked up at the figure. They seemed a little tired too, but not as tired as he was. The figure then took out a paper and a pen from her pocket, and scribbled something on the paper.
    “If you were to keep this, I might as well make it worth your while.†She flicked the paper as Sora, who caught it. She extended her hand out to him. “Need some help?†Normally, Sora would’ve pushed her hand away, but something about her made him trust her. He took her hand, and she pulled him up to his feet.

    “Fear is but an illusion of the Heart.†She whispered, smiling. “But it still exists.â€

    Everything started to spin around Sora.

    “As is this meeting of ours…â€

    +++

    “Sora! Sora, are you even listening to me?â€

    Sora blinked twice and looked around. He was still standing on the rooftop, along with Donald and Goofy. Goofy put his hand on his shoulder.
    “Sora, are you ok?†he asked with concern.
    “Wha…what just happened?†he asked. Goofy raised an eyebrow.
    “Well, I just suggested that we go to some other worlds to check for the Organization—“
    “No, I meant what just happened now!†Sora said, cutting his friend off. “The person! And, the fight! And, the papers and—“
    “What person?†Donald asked. “Oh, you mean the Organization member?†Sora nodded dumbly. “They got away, remember? We came up here and they were gone.â€
    “Gone…?†Goofy nodded.
    “Yup! That’s why we’re gonna go check out some of the other worlds to see if the Organization is there.†He said.
    “Oh. So…none of that happened?â€
    “Nope.†Donald quacked. “You must’ve imagined it.†Sora nodded.
    “C’mon, let’s go!†Goofy said excitedly. Donald nodded and began to walk away with Goofy. Sora stayed where he was.
    “Sora, are you coming?†Goofy asked.
    “Huh? Uh, yeah. I’ll be there in a sec.†He nodded, and continued to walk away. Sora sighed.

    So…none of that…happened?

    Sora the realized that he was holding something in his hand. He looked down to find that it was a folded-up piece of paper.

    The only she had given him!

    He unfolded it to find a poem written on it:

    Destiny calls,
    For a Hero,
    For a Sacrifice,
    For a Savior,
    Destiny calls,
    Can you hear it?
    So loud, so clear,
    Destiny calls,

    For you.


    There was also a signature on it that looked like a heart.

    “Sora!†Donald called impatiently. “Come on!!!†Sora nodded, stuffing the paper into his pocket.
    “Coming!†He shouted back, running off to meet up with his companions.

    +++

    “Can I ask you something?â€

    “Yes?â€

    “Who else has a Keyblade that I don’t know about?

    “…I don’tow…â€

    “Are you sure?â€

    “…Yes…I don’t know of anyone but you and your friends…â€


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    Axel: That was a good chapter!
    Xed: Yeah!

    (random person comes into the theater)

    Me: Who are you?
    ??????: Cilxae.
    Me: And you are here because...?
    Cilxae: I'm Xedarle's#1fangirl. *stares at Xed*
    Xemnas: You're Xed-what's what?
    Cilxae: OMG YOU ROCK SO MUCH XED!!!! *hugs Xed and runs away*
    Sora: o_0
    Xed: o_0 I have...a fangirl...
    Nixon: That's creepy...
    Xed: Yeah....

    XDDDDD

    A bit of randomness at the end, but...hey, what did you expect? ;)
     
  15. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    This Cilxae person sounds awesome.

    Great chapter, I still believe that it is Xed (the cloaked figure and unknown keyblader). But did any of it really happen?

    Awesome chapter!!
     
  16. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    lol XD yea, she is :)

    I'm not saying anything.
     
  17. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Are you saying yeah she is to Xed being the unknown key blader or that Cilxae is awesome.

    (if it's about Cilxae being awesome then *hugs*)
     
  18. keylbader_twilight Traverse Town Homebody

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    o.O Where'd Riku go!?! Nooooooo! He'll be back though, right? (Awsome chapter by the way!)
     
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    EEE the unknown was xed wasnt she!?!?!?!?!
    she even had her belts and her neclace! AND her 14 keyblades! *pokes xed*
    was xedarles#1fangirl dance??:D *pokes dance* in which case, is her name alice?
    *shrugs* sorry randomness...
    ROCK ON
    BMTL was awezome! *sigh* poor reamond....im guessing thats when she gets turned into xed, right?

    cant wait for more! when is the next ch out and when is the next part of BMTL out???
     
  20. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thank you!

    He's off with the king somewhere :) I think he comes back in the next chapter

    I'm not saying anything.

    lol thank you! :D I hope to release a few chapters of BMTL tomorrow :)

    The next ch of the LSSP will come out either Sun or Mon
     
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