KH 2-3: Shards of Broken Destiny (Story Chapters)

Awe inspiring. Makes my drawing look like crap, not that I was ever too good but you know what I mean.

Edit: they're the same I didn't see the second one at first but surely enough it's the same thing twice.

 

nope, not at all the same, first one's a demon the second one looks like a giant fighting robot.

 

ahhhh
my drawings look like crap compared to that *kicks sketch book*
do you just like, draw it in pencil and then ouline it in marker or what?
my pics are always just pencil drawings, either shaded or just the outline....

anyway, back to SOBD. um...do you know when the next ch comin out?
OOO i bet 1,000,000 munny that my head wont blow off! anyone wanna match that bet??

luxord: OOO i will
dawn: of corse you will...

 

Um they show up as the same to me. Either my computer is wacky or the link is messed up. Or it could be something else. Whatevs. Oh I have good news (for me anyways) I just found out I have a scanner. It was in my basement but when I was cleaning I found it. This means you can all see my ineptitude second hand.


My head explodes at nothing, even when Scar died and Al became the Stone I was totally calm(except for the OMGs). The worst you can do is make me cry and I haven't cried for nearly a week. Before that it was nearly two months. No one can beat that.

 

I haven't cried for at least about two years....beat that.

 

You cold unfeeling monster. JK I'm girly despite my crazy strength(weird eh). Just so you guys know, I cried when I saw the season finale to Doctor Who(season 2) . It was sad. The time before that was when I saw Re:CoM. The end made me cry. I think before that I cried when I saw either KH1's ending or the movie AI.

 

Tell me can you see my pics now back on page 11?

 

Yeah I see 'em now. Again, great work, puts me and probably many others to shame. The dragon thingie is better though. You don't mind if I steal it for 'Reminiscence'? I'd like a name though, if it's okay with you and all. Answer me please.


Also, no one's said anything about Watergate. Get it, President Nixon?

 

Lol I just thought of the name for the knight nothing more...plus I couldn't think of anything else...it does have an "X" in it though.

the demon or "dragon" as you call it...is actually called; Zephner: The Iron Screamer...and you can use him...but tell the people where you got it from...me.

 

Of course I always credit those I steal from. I think I'll make it a major part. *lightbulb goes off in head* Pure genius. If you do wanna read it (Which I'm sure you won't) it'll be done by the end of the summer.

 

I just read the prolouge...kind witty if you ask me...but Genius none the less...A background story would go well with my "demon" but you'll get it later or you think of something for him.

 

The genius bit is where I already fit him into the story five seconds after I read his name. I'm thinking of making a trailer to go with the prologue... I suck at that stuff though.
Oh well, we really shouldn't be spammin' up this thread I'll find another way to talk if I can remember this conversation.

 

well I can probably make the intro if you give me the pics of Nox and the other characters...except mine...just tell me what song you want to add to it and what clips or pics I should use....sorry for the spam...forgive me.

 

Yay!! Third chapter!!!! Sora finally remembers to say thank you to Namine:).

Axel: Hello? Anyone remember me?
Me: Shut up!
**locks toilet door with keyblade**

 

Nixon: Aren't you a Keyblade?
Hexon: Yeah, Keyblades can't talk!
Me: ....idiots...-_-'...

 

Awsome, as usual. Keep up the great work. ^_^

 

i second that with my drawings. Your monsters are PWNFUL!!!!

I mostly cartoon :)

ha! I take that bet! ur head will TOTALLY explode!!!

and the next chapter...most likely tomorrow, but if i start now, i might get it done late tonight (i have to make a battle for this chapter, but its a short one)

okay then..if ur sure, lol :) i haven't cried for...about a month. maybe two. it just gave me a headache when i thought about it lol XD

lol thank you! :D Yeah, i wanted Sora to say thanks to Namine :D which was annoying in the regular game, cuz he never did!

YEEE!! Thank ya!

i cry seriously at the weirdest times.

i NEVER cry at sad movies, like Titanic or whatever. i laugh (???)

I dont cry at stuff in the news (????)

i dont cry at sad stuff (??????????)

last time i cried, it was at night to try something.

O-o

yeah, i'm weird. shoot me.

 

Awsome! This is the greatest!!! And um...that's all I can think of putting... You never cry during sad movies? I cried during a Walk to Remember. (That was a really sad movie :( ))

 

i dont remember the last time i cried from phisical pain, and um, i think the last time i cried from emotion was um....a few months ago? im not sure
I DONT CRY AT MOVIES EITHER!! ...but i dont laugh ...^^; the only movie i ever really broke down on was moulon ruge *cries*

AND IM STILL HOLDING OUT MY BET!!!!!!! *puts one million munny in safe* and its staying in there! i'll be happy to collect yours though ^^

 

Ch 4 wootness! :D:D:D

CHAPTER 4 WOOTNESS!!!

(Donald, Goofy, and Namine walk into the theater)

Sora: Hey! What took you all so long!
Donald: Long popcorn line.
Namine: Yep.
Xigbar: Fg when does the movie start? I'm bored!!!
Me: Aww, stop whining! It'll be up in a minute!
Xigbar: *pouts*
Violet: Hey, when is there going to be more violence?
Everonye: YEAH! VIOLENCE! VIOLENCE!
Me: Uhhh...Next chapter...
Demyx: But didn't you say there'd be a fight this chapter?
Me: Well, I lied.
Kairi: Lying isn't a good thing.
Me: Yeah well, I'm the writer so I'm allowed to lie.
Saix: So you promise next chapter?
Me: Yes, I promise; this chapter woulda been too long if there was a fight.

(Axel runs in)

Axel: START THE MOVIE START THE MOVIE!!!!
Me: Why?
Axel: Because they're coming after me!!
Me: Who?
Axel: NixonandHexen JUST START IT!!!!
Me: Okay okay! sheesh...

~Chapter 4~


“I had another dream about him last night.”

“Really? Another nightmare?”

“No, this time it was just a dream.”

“I see.”

“I still couldn’t hear his voice, but I got to see some of his friends, I think.”

“That’s good.”

“I also got to see what colors he was.”

“…R-really?”

“Yeah, he had blue eyes, and blonde hair and…are you ok?”

“Huh? Uh…yeah, I have to go now.”

“What for?”

“Nothing important, I’ll be back.”

“Okay.”

+++

“Gee Sora, Ahyuck! We sure missed a lot in the past year!”

Sora nodded and smiled at Goofy.
“But, what bugs me is how we got to sleeping in the first place.” He crossed his arms. “I mean we found Kairi, stopped Ansem, helped Riku and the King close the door…and that’s it, I think.” Donald rolled his eyes.
“It doesn’t matter!” he said. “Master Yen Sid told us everything we need to know, so let’s get going!” Goofy nodded.
“Yeah!” Sora smiled.
“We’re going to Hollow Bastion first, right?”

(A/N – By now, Sora has his new outfit, all right? Ok! Just so ya know :))

+++

“Woah!” Sora breathed, as he ran out of the Gummi ship and up to a nearby balcony. Donald and Goofy followed, equally as breathless. The three stared up at the castle that towered above them.
“The must have been doin’ some work while we we’re gone.” Goofy said. Donald turned to the two of them.
“I wonder how Leon and the gang have been doing.” Sora shrugged.
“Let’s go find out!” Donald then pointed up to a rooftop.
“Look!” he shouted. The other two turned around.

The party saw about four Soldier Heartless jumping around on the roof. Then, they disappeared.

“Heartless.” Sora hissed.
“We can take them!” Donald said, running off towards a set of stairs, with Goofy following. Sora took one last look around, and then ran off to meet up with the others.

+++

“Our little hero has arrived.”

“Is that so?”

“Perhaps we should greet him?”

“Of course! It’d only be polite to do so…”

“Where’s Number XIII?”

“Down at Hollow Bastion, why do you ask?”

“Do not let them meet. Understand? Number XIII and the Keyblade Bearer are NOT to meet.”

“Understood.”

+++

“Hey guys!”

Sora, Donald, and Goofy looked up to see a certain ninja with short black hair standing up on a wall, smiling and waving at them.
“Yuffie!” The three called, smiling. She laughed, and then jumped down from the wall and landed on the ground before them.
“Long time no see! Doing well, I can tell.” She said, smiling. Sora raised his arms up and placed them behind his head.
“Well, what did you expect?” he said. “You look like you’re doing ok too!” She chuckled.
“Well, what did YOU expect?” he said.
“Hey Yuffie,” Goofy said, looking over at her, “Have you seen the King and Riku?” She shook her head.
“Nope. Maybe Leon knows where they are.”
“Where is he?” Donald asked.
“He’s down at Merlin’s house with the rest of the gang. Why don’t you guys come along? We could use your help!”
“Sure!” Sora said excitedly. With that, the four friends ran off towards Merlin’s house.

+++

“So let me get this straight, guys: there’s a new group of enemies called Nobodies along with the Heartless. The Heartless are under the control of some guy named Pete, and the Nobodies are under the control of a group of Nobodies called Organization XIII?”

Sora, Donald, and Goofy nodded at Leon.
“Yeah, but we really don’t have to worry about Pete.” Goofy chimed in.
“Yeah, this Pete guy doesn’t look smart enough to tie his own shoes.” Sora said, fighting back a soft laugh. “The one we need to worry about is the Organization XIII.”

“Oh, you’re too kind.”

The four looked around to see where the voice had come from.

“This calls for a celebration…”

Suddenly, a number of Dusk Nobodies sprung up from the ground, and started closing in on Sora, Donald, goofy, and Leon. They all summoned their weapons.

“Let’s see what the Keyblade can do when it’s put to work.”

+++

After slaying the last Nobody, Sora sprinted out of the gate and towards the large wall.

“The Keyblade…a truly marvelous weapon…”

Donald, Goofy, and Leon ran out to meet Sora.

“…Were it only in more…capable hands…”

The four heard a chorus of laughter. Sora grit his teeth.

“Show yourself!” he shouted.

“Gladly.”

Just then, on top of the wall, 12 figures appeared through black portals. They all wore a long, black trench coat with the hoods up, concealing their faces.

“Is this the Organization XIII?” Leon asked Sora. Sora nodded. The figure in the center of the other figures laughed.
“So, our hero has arrived.” He said. Goofy raised an eyebrow.
“Hero? What do you mean?” he asked.
“The hero who will save us from the cruel fate we’re doomed to. The Keyblade Master.” Sora narrowed his eyebrows.
“Like we’re saving you from anything!” he scoffed. The lead figure shook his head.
“What a shame. And here I thought we could be friends.”
“Friends?! Yeah right!” Donald shouted angrily. The lead figure smirked under the shadows set upon his face. Without another word, the 12 figured vanished in their black portals.
“Hey! Wait!” Sora called after them, running down the stairs, hoping to catch up with where they were going. Just then, another portal opened in front of them, and one of the cloaked figures from before stepped out. Donald and Goofy ran up to where Sora was.
“Move it!” Donald yelled.
“Oopsi-Dasiy!” the figure said, his accent much like a surfer’s. “I think you got the wrong impression.” Sora grit his teeth and summoned his Keyblade.
“Move or we’ll make you move!” he shouted. The figure laughed.
“See, that would work if I were just any old dude.” He said, crossing his arms. “‘Cept I’m not. I’m with the Organization! Nothin’ ‘any old’ about me!” Sora rolled his eyes.
“Tough talk for someone who stood on the sidelines while his Nobodies flunkies did all the fighting!” he said angrily, glaring at him. The figure laughed.
“That’s right!” he exclaimed, still laughing. “He used to give me that same exact look!” Sora raised an eyebrow. The figure smirked under his hood. “You just better not let her see that look. She might catch on.” Sora narrowed his eyes.
“Are you done rambling?” he demanded. The figure rolled his eyes.
“Rambling? As if!” The four of them stood there in silence for a moment, before the figure waved.
“Be a good boy now!” he said, disappearing in a dark portal. Once he was gone, the three relaxed. Sora turned towards Donald and Goofy.
“Who did I remind him of?” he asked, utterly confused.
“Aww…I think he was just tryin’ to confuse ya!” Goofy said. Sora nodded, smiling.
“Yeah!” he agreed, placing his hands be hind his head. “So let’s get going!”
“To where?” Donald asked. Goofy shrugged.
“We should keep checking out this place for more Heartless and Nobodies.” He suggested.
“Yeah, and we should look for Riku here!” Sora said.
“And the King!” Donald piped in. The party nodded in agreement, and ran off to check Hollow Bastion out.

“Destiny calls,
For a Hero,
For a Savior,
For a Sacrifice,
Destiny calls,
Can’t you hear it?
So loud, so clear.
Destiny calls,

For—“

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Goofy: That was a good one!
Me: Thank you! :D
Riku: Hey, is Bring Me To Life up yet?
Me: Yup! Just put it up today!

HERE IS THE LINK TO BRING ME TO LIFE :

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=3608249&chapter=1

Me: Enjoy peoples! :D