KH 2-3: Shards of Broken Destiny (Story Chapters)

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  1. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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  2. RikuisthehottestdudeinKH2 Destiny Islands Resident

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    me: this is a good story
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  3. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Ch3 at last! :D

    HOORAY FOR CHAPTER 3!!!!

    (Nixon and Hexon walk into the theater)

    Sora: Who are you guys?
    Nixon: Nixon.
    Hexon: Hexon.
    Kairi: Hey Nixon, you're cute!
    Nixon: ...?
    Xaldin: Stop being such a flirt, Kairi.
    Kairi: Where's Namine?
    Riku: I don't know, why do you ask?
    Kairi: She said she'd be here.
    Xemnas: Oh well.
    Hexon: When does the movie start?
    Axel: Beats me.
    Hexon: You're ugly.
    Axel: WHAT?
    Nixon: He said you're ugly. I agree.
    Axel: Do you want me to fry you up?
    Me: Shut up everyone! The movie is starting!!!

    (everyone shuts up)

    ~Chapter 3~

    Falling…

    Falling…

    Falling…


    “Riku!â€

    Riku opened his eyes looked around. He found himself lying on the dirt ground of the courtyard in front of the Twilight Town Mansion. He quickly stood up. The dream –or whatever it was- had been so real! He honestly didn’t know what to think of the whole situation. Everything seemed logical –at least what the voice said was logical- but Riku still was confused. Who was the girl? The voice? And what about the reflection…

    “Riku!â€

    He turned around to see Namine running towards him, an excited smile spread upon her face.
    “Riku Sora is…†she started but then trailed off. She looked up at Riku with awe and amazement in her eyes. Riku raised an eyebrow.
    “What? What are you staring at?†he asked.
    “Riku, you’re—“
    “It’s Ansem.â€
    “No,†She breathed, “It’s Riku! You’re Riku again! Come, look!†Namine grabbed Riku’s hand and pulled him along to the side of the mansion, to one of the windows. Riku looked at the reflections and gasped.

    He WAS himself again!

    His hair was silver again, and his eyes were sea green again!

    “I-I-I can’t believe it!†he said, tugging at his hair to assure himself that what he was seeing was real. Namine looked up at him.
    “How’d you change back?†she asked. Riku shook his head.
    “I don’t know...†he said, his thoughts drifting back to the ‘dream’ or whatever that had just happened. He had changed back to himself in the ‘dream’ as well. Maybe, there was a connection?
    “Riku, I came out here to tell you that Sora will be awakening any moment now.†Namine said, excitedly. Riku smiled, happy that his friend would awaken, even though he didn’t have his Nobody with him…
    “Well, what are we waiting for?†Riku said, rather cheerfully. And with that, the two ran off inside the Mansion.

    +++

    “What’s taking so long?â€

    “His memories are just finishing coming back to him. Any second now, he should wake up.â€

    “I’ll stay here with him.â€

    “Okay. I’ll check on Donald and Goofy.â€

    “Alright.â€


    +++

    “C’mon Sora, you lazy bum. Wake up!â€

    “Kairi?â€

    “C’mon Sora! Wake up!â€

    “Okay.â€


    +++

    The Sleeping Pod started to move. Riku looked up to see the layers of it shifting, moving away to reveal Sora, who was floating, his eyes still closed. Riku couldn’t help but chuckle at how ridiculously small Sora’s clothes were on him now. Sora’s eyes opened slowly, letting them adjust to the bright light in the room he was in. He raised his arms and stretched, yawning loudly.

    “Sora!â€

    Sora looked out, to see a certain silver-haired boy standing a little ways away from whatever he was in.

    Riku.

    Sora smiled widely.

    “Riku!†He shouted, jumping down from the Pod he was in. He would’ve fallen over from lack of balance if Riku hadn’t run up to him and steadied him. Once regaining his balance, Sora threw his arms around Riku’s neck in a hug.
    “Riku! I’m so glad your ok!†He exclaimed happily. He truly was happy to see him alive and well. The last time he’d seen him was when they were closing the door to Kingdom Hearts, with Riku being trapped on the inside.
    “I’m glad to see you too, Sora.†Riku replied, gently pulling away from their slightly awkward hug. He smiled at hi friend. “You haven’t changed at all.†Sora crossed his arms.
    “And what’s that supposed to mean?†he said in mock anger, smiling. Riku chuckled. Sora was still the same Sora that he had known. Sora smiled wider. Riku was still the same Riku that he had known.

    “Sora!â€

    Sora and Riku looked over to where two excited voices had called for Sora. A duck clad in blue and a tall dog clad in green and yellow came running over to them.

    “Donald! Goofy!†Sora shouted running over to his two friends. Immediately, they all grasped each others hands in excitement, and started to jump around in a circle, laughing and grinning like idiots. But they didn’t mind. They were just so happy to see each other!

    “I see you two haven’t changed either.†Riku said, smiling over at Donald and Goofy. They all stopped jumping around as Donald and Goofy stared at Riku, who’d they’d just noticed was there.
    “Riku! You’re not trapped in the realm of Darkness anymore!†Donald quacked. Goofy smiled.
    “Ahyuck! You haven’t changed either!†he said. Riku smiled sadly.

    If you only knew…

    “I’m glad to see everyone’s doing well.â€

    Everyone turned to see a blonde haired blue-eyed girl in white walk into the room, smiling softly.
    “Who are you?†Donald asked. Namine giggled softly.
    “I’m Namine.†She replied. Goofy nodded his head and smiled.
    “We’re—“
    “Donald, Goofy, and Sora.†She finished for him. The three stared at her.
    “H-how did you know our names?†Donald asked. Namine only smiled. Sora struck a thoughtful pose.
    “Namine…have…have we met before?†he asked. Namine looked over at him.
    “Why do you ask?â€
    “I dunno…†Sora said, looking at her. “It just feels like…we’ve met before.†Namine shook her head, chuckling softly.
    “Nope. Never met before. And I know your names because Riku told me.â€
    “Ohhh…†the three chorused, nodding. Riku folded his arms.
    “I’ve got to go meet with the king, so you—“
    “THE KING?!?!†Donald and Goofy exclaimed in unison. Riku jumped back a bit by their sudden outburst.
    “You know where King Mickey is?†Goofy asked. Riku nodded.
    “Yeah he’s down in Hollow Bastion.†Donald smiled.
    “Let’s go seem him!†Sora and Goofy nodded excitedly. Riku put up his hands.
    “Woah, first of all, only I need to go see him right now. Secondly, you need to go see Yen Sid first.â€
    “Yen Sid?†Sora said, confused. “Who’s he?†Donald and Goofy looked at him in disbelief.
    “Who’s Yen Sid?†Donald repeated. “Master Yen Sid taught the King everything about everything!â€
    “Yeah, Ahyuck!†Goofy said. “He’s really powerful and really smart!†Riku nodded.
    “You’ve been asleep for a long time, so you need to catch up on what’s been going on. As the King has put it: ‘More trouble has been brewin’ up in the worlds, and we need to help out.’†The three nodded.
    “Master Yen Sid will help you know what you need to know.†Namine chimed in. She then turned to Riku. “I have to leave now. There’s something I need to take care of.†Riku nodded once. Sora turned towards her.
    “Nice meeting you, Namine!†he said, smiling. She smiled softly.
    “Nice meeting you too, Sora.†She then turned and started to walk away.

    “Namine!â€

    She turned back around to see that Sora had called for her.
    “Hm?â€
    “Thank you.†He said, somewhat shyly. She cocked her head.
    “For what?†she asked. He couldn’t possibly remember…could he? Sora crossed his arms.
    “Hmm…I don’t know what it was for. It just seems that I should say it.†Namine smiled.
    “In that case, you’re welcome.†And with that, she turned and left. Donald turned to Sora and Goofy.
    “Well, let’s get going guys!â€
    “Yeah, we’re gonna need to know a lot so we can help out in the worlds.†Goofy said. Sora nodded.
    “Okay then, let’s go!†Riku walked up to the three of them.
    “Here.†He said, handing them a small pouch. “There’s enough Munny in it for you three to take the train out of here. And, if you see anything, like Heartless or whatever, ignore and avoid them.†Goofy cocked his head.
    “What for?†he questioned. Riku shook his head.
    “Just do it.†Sora nodded.
    “Riku,†he said, “where’s Kairi?†Riku smiled.
    “She’s on the islands, waiting for us.†Sora chuckled, raising a hand and scratching the back of his head.
    “Boy, she’s gonna be real mad at us for making her wait like that.†Riku laughed.
    “Yeah, she always was impatient.†He remarked. They both laughed, before Sora turned away, and started walking away with the others. Once at the door, he turned back around to see Riku.
    “Well, be seeing ya.†He said, giving a small wave as he did. Riku nodded.
    “See ya.†With that, Donald, Goofy, and Sora left off to the train station.

    +++

    “What do you think has been going on in the worlds while we were sleeping?â€

    Sora shook his head at Donald.
    “Beats me.†He said simply, before turning back to the window. He watched as the train pulled away from the station and started moving. Sora sighed. Goofy raised an eyebrow.
    “What’s wrong, Sora?†he asked. Sora smiled and shook his head slightly.
    “Nothing. It’s just that…I feel like we’re never going back place.†Donald crossed his arms.
    “Why do you say that?†he asked. Sora shrugged.
    “I don’t know…†he turned back to the window. “I’m just going to miss this place.â€
    “Awww, it’s not like we’re leaving forever. We’ll come back!†Goofy said with a smile.
    “Yeah!†Donald agreed. Sora smiled softly.

    Why does this place seem so…familiar?

    +++

    Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZhXAeHUhCoQ

    “Another dream about him…â€


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    Demyx: Nice one!
    Me: Thanks!
    Roxas: Hey, guys? *looks around* Where's Axel?
    Me: *looks around* Hey, Nixon and Hexon are gone too!
    Riku: This can't be good....

    (somewhere in the girl's bathroom)

    Axel: HELPPPPP!!!! NIXON AND HEXON LOCKED ME IN HERE! LET ME OUT IT SMELLS LIKE PERFUME IN HERE!!!
    Nixon and Hexon: *laughs hysterically*
     
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    SPLEE first post! X3

    That was awesome; Nice twists ;)

    aww, poor Axel XD You really did make those three have a fight :D

    EDIT: Liked the video too; Xed's dream? ..hmmm.
     
  5. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    Alright! Chapter 3!!! I like that twist with begining of the KH2 story, it makes it seem so simple right now, but I'm sure things will get really complicated from now on.. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!!:D

    And again, the vid was definitely a nice touch!!:D
     
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    XDDDD HAHA AXEL GOT LOCKED IN THE GIRLS ROOM!!!!!! *high fives nixon and hexon*

    great chapter!!!!....hmmmm....was the video xed's dream???? *shrugs* YAY rikus normal again! EEEE CANT WAIT FOR MORE! *waits inpatiently* it was so wierd! you were'nt online when i was reading the new posts, but when i clicked to the last page, the new chapter was there and it said it had been posted two minutes ago! XDDD AWESOME! *is happy she didnt have to wait* :D
     
  7. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thank you! :D

    lol Axel is in for one movie experience XD

    Thanks! I'm not saying anything about the video.

    Thank ya! And trust me.

    Complicated later? Oh, you don't EVEN know the half of it!!!

    And thank you! :D

    lol yeah!

    Axel: HEY I'M STILL LOCKED IN HERE!!!
    Me: Oh shut up!
    Axel: WAHHHHH!!!!!! *cries*

    I'm not saying anything about the video.

    lol XD

    And thank you! :D
     
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    ahhh say stuff! give stuff away! RIUN IT FOR PEOPLE *laughs maniacly*

    axel: i changed my mind, keep me in here and safe from her
    dawn: *gasp* meanie! *kicks door*
     
  9. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    Oh, boy, I can't even imagine what your doing this time... :D:D
     
  10. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    ROTFL XDDDD

    nope. not saying a thing *evil smile*

    lol, neither can I!

    Last night, to help myself organize one of the more comlicated aspects of this story, i made a list. and boy, is it complicated or what!

    At the end, ima put up the list and an explaination about what went on and how everything connected.

    I WILL GIVE TEN COOKIES TO THE PERSON WHOSE HEAD DOESN'T EXPLODE!!!

    And ten cookies is ALOT of cookies! :3
     
  11. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    lol I love the way you made my characters lock axel in the Girls Bathroom...hmmm....

    Nixon: Annoyance much?
    Hexon: At least Axel is more stupid than ugly....I can't believe he thought that Larxene was in the girls bathroom waiting for him...what a maroon.
    Me: 0_0....you guys are sick and twisted....
     
  12. AkuseruVIII Banned

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    Hm... Altered beginning or wishful thinking. I wish I knew. I think I will. I can guarantee that my head will remain intact. I'll take my cookies in advance with extra chocolate chips, if you please. Now...

    Nox: What're you doing talking to yourself?
    Meat: Shut up and go back to the word processor!
    Nox: I don't like your new story it has no flare, I'd rather be in this.
    Meat: Shut your prematurely white haired head up, or I'll write you out.
    Nox: Whatever, I'm far too cool to be written out.
    Meat: I can change that.
    Nox: No you can not. I'm the only non-bishie in the story, I have non-bishonen immunity.
    Meat: I don't care, now go back to your story and stop your complaining.
    Nox: Never! I'll kill you.
    Meat: I'll kill you first!
    Nox: I'm gonna set out on my own and find my own story.
    Meat: I'll replace you! Insubordinate fool, I can create as many characters as I like.
     
  13. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    Nixon: ....
    Hexon: ....
    Me: ........Chirp......
     
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    Meat: What are you looking at?! Huh!?
    Nox: Someone's got mental issues.
    Meat: Go away!
    ........................................................................
     
  15. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    Nixon: *hits Nox over the head with his keyblade*
    Hexon : *hits Meat over the head with his keyblade*
    Me: *just sits back and watches.*
     
  16. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    lol thanks! :D told ya they'd torture Axel! And this is ONLY the beginning! *evil smile*

    MUAHAHAHA *cough*

    *starts to work on ch 4*

    I think there may be a boss battle in this chapter :)

    XDDDDDD

    Oh, i wouldn't go collecting just yet! Your head will explode (mine nearly did, but i kept it intact by reading the Peanuts comics :3)
     
  17. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    If you need a monster, I'm on it, I have made two already and I'm already on my third one. You wanna see 'em?
     
  18. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    oh trust me, i've got too many baddies for my own good :) But I'd love to see them!
     
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    Meat: Meat is me, the writer. Your characters have no respect for my greatness.
    Nox: Can't blame them... except now it's *** kicking time *****es.*pulls out steel whip and grins menacingly*
    Meat: No fighting!
    Nox: To hell with all of you! *Meat is being choked*
    Meat: get... ugh... off me... idiot.
    Nox: Well, I meant to hit the others but your big head was in the way.
    Meat: Show me some frickin' respect! All of you. Stop snickering behind my back!
    Nox: Nixon. Heh heh. Been to Watergate lately? Ha ha ha ha haha!
    Meat: Urgh!

    amendment: I'm slow aren't I? Was that even a question.
     
  20. Hell Kaiser Ryo Kingdom Keeper

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    All right here's the first one. [​IMG]

    and here's the other one. [​IMG]
     
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