KH 2-3: Shards of Broken Destiny (Story Chapters)

woa.....
thats about all i can say....woa
i liked the boss battle thingy! it was fun ^^. it made me wanna play it
and i liked the midnight thingy, it was cool how his reflection changed. me likie ^^:D

 

thank you! That's the idea :D

They're lines from the LSSP trailer? Which ones are you talking about?

yeah, i didn't mean for it to be so long, but if I were to split it, it wouldn't work so well :)

Oh, and enjoy no being confused for now, because things are gonna get crazier by the chapter! I promise you that :D

Hmmmm...i honestly didn't think of the name of it...

you'll find out what it is later (aka when i pick a name for it XD)

And thank you! :D

Thank you! Next chapter should be out tues or weds :)

thank you! :D lol, it was sorta funny, cuz i was thinking about the boss battle in the future chapters one night. Then, i went to sleep. and when i woke up, i told myself i was going to play the boss today. But then i remembered that it wasn't real XDDD

:D

 

'Don't be afraid'
'But what do you do'
'When time is up?'

Those are from the trailer, there are more too I think but I forgot which ones.

*watches amazing trailer again*

 

I LOVE how you did this!!! Riku needed his own game!!! ^-^

The whole bit where he's doing pretty much the same things as Sora from the first game was really inticing. You have no idea how much I enjoyed this!

 

I love this....even love the way you did the crature made from both a Twilight Side and A Dark side of the two largest beings with huge attacks.

 

FINALLY!!!! The long awaited chapter!!!! Raemond is Xed's somebody!!!! I've got proof!!! Look:
Xedramon - X = edramon
edramon = dream on OR raemond!!!!
Your drawing of Raemond further prooves my theory. The resemblence between Xed and Raemond is resemblance!!!
If this is the case then Kuxir is Riku nobody!!!!
Riku + X =Kuxir!!!!

Sora: Have you done rambling?
Me: Rambling? AS IF!!!!
Xigbar: My line!!!!!

 

They kind of look a like but not all that much. I was comparing them face to face. Though it's not a good Xed picture it still is her, but it is Xed form 1 (from the 14th key not bma)

 

They look a bit a like, but not much... Maybe if Xed was in colors we could tell the differences better... But I don't think their the same person..

 

Yeah, it was a quick pencil sketch that fg drew. I think they are the same person (nobody somebody) but I don't think that means they must look exactly alike.

I think that Raemond has the gray eyes that Xed was described as having.

400th post!

 

Yeah, now that I think of it Sora and Roxas were very different... Maybe your right..

451th post!!...............yeah, random moment......

 

I'm probably wrong. Because my school is out I can no longer bug fg into finding out stuff about the story or ask her a million questions.

She isn't one to make it predictable so she probably isn't Xed's somebody.

Actually you have 452 (I was just looking while you posted)

 

You 2 are in the same school? Cool!!
Actually now I have 454, but I only consider 453, cuz one of them was made by my little sister...wich one? I honestly don't remember..

 

We were in the same school but next year we wont be (:().

But I'm going to stop replying to this because it's getting very much off topic.

*waits for next chapter*

 

Great. I broke down and read it in spite of what I said before. I'm surprised you used the Heartbody(Heartless+Nobody (I call it that since I put them in Kingdom Hearts The Dark Realm: My Story a while back.)) A testament to your genius would have to be the boss battle. It was just like a strategy guide to an actual game. So far I'm impressed (not too hard but still a good thing) this is even better than usual. I've great expectations for this one.

 

i just remembered something
isnt that stain glass-y place called the dive to the heart?
....um...that makes me wonder....how could roxas have it if he has no heart?
OOO or mabey its something that is shared between a sombody/nobody!
wouldnt that make it so kuxir will have a dive to the heart too????
cuz rikus reflection thingy in the midnight place looked a lot like kuxir didnt it?
hmmmm....sorry just rambling some theories....

p.s. how exactly do you pronounce kuxir? is it like kuh-kser or is it like koo-kser, or is it something completely defferent and im just being weird?

YAY new ch tues or weds!:D

 

That was so good fg X3 I loved it! :D Can't wait for the next chapter! =D

 

Hmm...I wonder what'll happen next but I think maybe it's gonna be epic....or just the same as KH 2 for now but I have no idea about the third...hmmm, the mind boggles at the possibilities.

 

oh i see! :D

aww, you're too kind

YEEEE!! Thank ya! :D

Yeah, I wanted Riku to have a big part in my story, and trust me, he has a MAJOR part!

I thought it'd be interesting to have him go through what sora did, and see how e'd react.

ex:

Sora- runs away from the monster
Riku- stays and fights

you sorta see how they are, which is REALLY impportant later! :D trust me on that :D

Thank you! :D

lol, i had no idea what the thing Roxas fought was called, so i had to look it up.

I found out it was called Twilight Thorn.

0_o

????

That REALLY doesn't make sense...but w/e lol :)

I'm still not saying anything. You could be RIGHT, you could be WRONG.

You'll just haveta wait n seeeeee..... *she says in a singsong voice*

And thank you! :D

UCKCKCKCKCKCCK TAKE THAT PIC DOWN TAK THAT PIC DOWN TAKE THAT STINKIN PIC DOWN!!!!!!!

YUK I HATE THAT PIC I DREW!!!!!

 

Nope, it is staying up. That is what you get for that being the only picture of Xed beside the xed chibi that you let me see not on online.

 

Actually tell me you have a better pic of her?