KH 2-3: Shards of Broken Destiny (Story Chapters)

lol thanks!

:D:D:D

I'm not saying anything about anyone.

XD Riku... XDDD

yeeee!!! Thank ya! :D

Thank you!

Theories? Cant wait to hear em' :)

yay! thanks! :D:D:D

 

It seems that you are getting alot of positive feedback from your many viewers.
+envious sigh+ it must be nice to have so many fans of your work.

I've got alot of theories and geusses, but I'll have to wait for more chapters to come out first before I can test the... my god, I'm sounding like Vexen. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! I don't want to be a cynical ugly guy.
+ hides in anti-Vexen zone+

 

yay yay yay love it so much, your stories always get better and better, i never find anything wrong with them. I also love your little convosations at the start and end, espcially where demyx asked for popcorn and got turned down hehe

 

lol, i'm surprised too. I was expecting at least one person would have something negative to say (doesnt that happen to every story? :))

OH NO VEXEN!!!!! *runs*

lol thank you!

I wanted to add the conversations for a bit off added humor in them, and to make it seem that your 'watching' the LSSP at a movie theater with everyone else :)

Trust me, these will get funnier and funnier!

Demyx: LUXORDCANIPLEASEHAVEMONEYFORPOPCORN!!!!!!!

Luxord: NO GOSH-DURNIT!!!!

 

Whoa. I've read almost all of your stories, but this is the one that's got me hooked:D -runs in squares-

*huggle-Squishes Riku*

Riku: GET OFF ME.
Me: NEVER!

 

*looks at thread above*
ha ha riku, now you have TWO crazy fangirls after you!

riku: NOOOOOOOOOOO
:D

 

lol thank you! :D

hehe I feel so bad for Riku XD

lol XDDDD Riku!!!

 

hmmmm, i wonder how xed gets turned into a nobody...
what if riku does it to her o.O
i like xed's somebody name, like i get how it fits to xedramon

riku: wow, you actually get something
dawn: hey! i get stuff! its just stuff that doesnt make sence to other poeple!
riku: you know what? that explains so much...
dawn >:P boob

cant wait fot the next ch! um...do you have a rough estimate as to shen BMTL starts?

 

soo.....we're in the movie theatre with everyone else?

.....*sly grin*

*huddles up next to Axel*

Me: I'm c-c-c-c-cold.....hug me :p
Axel: O.O

 

will any users actually appear in there? (just wondering)

will there be like interuptions in the middle or will they not interfere?

(sorry for the random questions)

 

Hmm...Wouldn't Sora be all confused at watching this? About Riku and all that and him sleeping?
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So, when is the next chapter coming out?

 

Thank you!

I'm NOT saying it's Xed's somebody name.

But thanks for the compliment. :D

:D Ch 2 will be out today (i gotta draw a few more things to go with the story first, but it'll be out soon cuz we're taking my dad out to dinner for Fathers day :D)

And I'd actually like to start BMTL today, once the drawings are done, and the LSSP chapter is up

yep!

HANDS OFF OF AXEL!!!!

Axel: ...I'd rather sit with her than you!

Me: *cries*

Demyx: Awww thats so mean Axel! *huggles fg* You can sit with me.

Me: Squeee!!! *huggles Demyx*

I'm not sure; just wait and see!

Well, its supposed to be totally random!

Whats the deal with Organization XIII being alive and watching this?

It's just like they made a movie, and now they're watching it. Think of it like that. :D

Oh, and trust me, this is ONLY the beginning of the randomness!

Today, maybe around...2 or 3 pm? (over here where i live). Thats in about... 1 to 2 hours. I have to finish drawing some pictures, and then upload them. After that, i can put up chapter 2! (i wrote all of it yesterday :3)

 

Riku doesn't mind rabid fangirls. do you Riku?

-holds duct tape-

Riku: Nope, not at all! And the fact that I have more than Sora makes it all worth it! ^^;;;

Sora: HEY!

Me: That's a good boy Riku:) -squish-

Riku: x.x

 

Cool!! We get pictures this time!! Can't wait for the update!! :D:D:D

Demyx: COULDYOUGIVEMEMONEYFORTHEPOPCORNS???
Me:.......................................................no...................
Demyx:OKAY!!
Me: *to Larxene* Is he hyper?
Larxene: Yeah, too much sugar in the morning..
Me: Oooohhhhhh!!! Ok.

 

Chapter 2!!!

WOOT FOR CHAPTER 2!!!!

Demyx: *eats popcorn*
Sora: Where'd you get the money for it?
Demyx: *shifty eyes* I found it...
Xigbar: *checks pockets* HEY!!! WHERE'S THE FIVE BUCKS I HAD IN MY POCKET???
Demyx: *sinks into seat*

(Violet and Rose come into the theater)

All Nobodies: VIOLET AND ROSE?!?!?
Axel: What are you guys doing here?!!?!?!?
Violet: We're here to see the movie; we're in it.
Riku: You're in the movie?
Rose: Yes.
Kairi: No you're not!
Violet: Yes, we are!
Marluxia: Hey fg, are these two in the movie?
Me: *checks script* Nope, they aren't in it.
Kairi: HA! Told ya!
Violet: *shows fangs*
Kairi: SORA!!! *clings to Sora*
Me: The movie's about to start!!!

(everyone takes a seat)

Me: Here we go!

~Chapter 2~

“Riku! Riku! Wake up, Riku!â€

Riku’s eyes opened rapidly and he sat up straight, nearly falling out of his chair. He was breathing hard and fast, sweat dousing his face. Taking a shaky breath, he leaned forward in his chair, burying his face -no, Ansem’s face- in his gloved hands. Namine, who had awaken Riku, looked down at her friend in concern.
“Riku…I mean, Ansem, are you alright?†she asked. Riku muffled some sort of reply, before standing up. He had seemed to calm down, but his eyes were still wide and wild with fear and pain.
“I’m going for a walk.†He said simply, striding towards the door on the quickstep, leaving the young blonde standing there, confused.

“Okay…â€

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The cool, moist air of the dawn was refreshing, the still-dark sky was soothing, helping Riku to relax. He took in a breath of frustration. This had been the fourth time this week that he’d had the same nightmare. And yet, he had no idea who the girl was. He knew parts of his dream were real: him being in Darkness with the King, him escaping, Castle Oblivion, leaving with DiZ to wake up Sora. But everything else was only part of the dream…

Wasn’t it…?

It had to be! He couldn’t recall a single person he’d ever known named Raemond. He never made a promise to walk the Twilight path…

Or did he…?

Riku grunted. All of this thinking was starting to give him a headache. Along with the sun. It was so bright, that he had to place his hand up to shield the sun.

Wait a minute…it was dawn…

The sun shouldn’t be up…and this bright…

Riku looked out at the scenery.

Now, he KNEW there was something wrong…

Instead of stepping out of the Twilight Town Mansion and into the small, gated courtyard in from of it—

—He had stepped out…into an ocean???

Riku quickly looked down to see that he was standing on top –yes, ON TOP- of the surface of what he presumed to be an ocean. The sun was up high in the all-blue, cloudless sky: the middle of the day. He looked out to see there was someone else on top of the water too, only two or three yards away from him. They were facing away from him, with their back to him.

A girl.

With short honey-brown hair.

With a white, knee-length dress.

Riku’s eyes widened.

It was her! The girl from the nightmares! He just knew it was her!

“Hey!†Riku called out to the girl, trying to get her attention. He had so many questions to ask her, so many answers he wished to receive. For months now he’d been having nightmares about her, and with each one, he missed her more and more, although he could’ve sworn that they’d never met before…scratch that, he WAS sure they’d never met before.

“Do you remember?â€

Riku looked back up at the girl. Had she spoken?

“You don’t remember.â€

“Y-yes, I do.†Riku said, taken back by how icy the words were, in comparison to how she spoke in his nightmares.

“You don’t remember her. You remember me.â€

“Huh?†he was confused now.

“Forget her. Only I matter. Remember me, Riku. Not her…

Just then, the girl started to turn around to face Riku. As she turned around, the sun began to sink into the sky. And as she turned, she began to change as well. Her white dress turned black. The sun was now nearing the horizon; a star or two could be seen. Her honey-brown hair turned into a dirty-blonde color. The sun was now gone, the sky pitch black, glittering with stars. She was now facing Riku, her expressionless and emotionless gray eyes fixed with his –no, Ansem’s- golden ones in an icy stare. Riku pulled away from her stare to look at the water he was standing on. Around the girl, the water was hardening, changing from water, to ice, to…glass? It spread, until Riku was standing on glass himself.

“Forget her Riku, remember me…â€

The glass beneath him shattered, and Riku started to fall…

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So much to do…

Riku opened his eyes. He was lying on something cold and hard. He pushed himself to his feet and looked around. He was in some dark place, standing on top of some clear glass platform.

So little time…

The voice came back. It wasn’t the voice of that girl, but a different one. Some how, it reminded him of his own voice…

Take your time…

“Take my time?†Riku said, aloud. “Doing what?â€

Don’t be afraid…

Riku crossed his arms.
“I’m not afraid…â€

But what do you do…

He felt a tingling sensation take over his body, and he began to glow and off-white color.

Riku…

The glowing stopped. Riku looked out, to find that everything looked darker. Did something happen to his vision? He brought his hand up to his eyes, and felt there was some type of cloth over his eyes. He pulled it off—

To see that it was his blindfold!
That hadn’t been a part of him since he had changed…
Riku looked down at the glass beneath him, and gasped softly.

He…looked like himself again!

He had his silver locks back, and his sea-green eyes!

When time is up?

The glass beneath him shattered once again, sending his falling into the dark abyss below. He landed with thud on another glass platform. This time it was a bright yellow color.

The roads that lie ahead are rough…
But you can face them…
After all, you’ve done it before…

Riku stood up and brushed himself off. He looked up to see a bright yellow light shine down from the darkness overhead.

Step forward…Can you do it?

He shrugged, and walked easily into the Light.

Very Good.

The glass underneath shattered yet again, and Riku fell into the black abyss yet again. This time, he landed on the next platform on his feet, with a softer and less painful thud. The glass platform this time was a dark purple color.

Sometimes, there is not always light…
We must sometimes rely on Darkness…

A little ways away, a dark purple light shone from the darkness above.

Step forward…Can you do it?

Riku took a step back. That light…it was the same exact light he had walked into when entering the Darkness the first time…he wasn’t going to walk back into it again…

Hesitant? You had no problem stepping into the Light before…

“That’s because the light didn’t betray me…†Riku muttered.

Why not the Darkness?

“It’ll pull me in!†Riku shouted to the Darkness. “It’ll control me again!â€

Put trust in the Darkness.
Put trust in yourself.

“Trust? In myself?â€

Riku gulped. He wasn’t sure about this. But, he felt like he needed to prove to someone…himself…that he could do this. That he could control it. That he could control himself.

He stepped forward into the Darkness.

Excellent.

Riku sighed, relieved.

Just then, the platform shattered, catching Riku off guard. He landed hard on the next platform. Standing up and looking around, he observed that this time, the platform was a milky white color.

Sometimes, Light and Darkness combine, to form Twilight…

“Twilight?â€

A white light shone down from the Darkness sky.

Now, Light and Darkness act as one.
Can you embrace both?

Seeing that he walked into the Light and Darkness before, both at the same time shouldn’t be too hard.

Riku walked forward into the Twilight.

He couldn’t help but think about that girl from his nightmares…what was her name again?

But, what happens…
When Light and Darkness rip away…
To reveal a void?

The glass shattered rapidly, once again surprising Riku. This time, he slammed down hard onto the next platform, with such strength that he wouldn’t have been shocked if it shattered again due to the force. Riku moaned aloud with pain and he slowly pulled himself to his feet. He looked around.

There was nothing. Only black…

Midnight arises.

Midnight…why did that sound so familiar?

In Midnight, our truths cannot be hidden.

Just then, at the other side of the platform, a mirror arose from the darkness. Then, more mirrors rose up from the ground, cutting off from the rest of the platform, creating a path for Riku to walk.

Go on, step forward towards the mirror.
Trust yourself.

With a soft breath, Riku began to walk forward, down the mirror path. As he walked towards the farthest mirror, he glanced at the other mirrors as he passed. It seemed that, as he walked further down the path, his reflections in the mirror became darker and darker; they became harder to see, until he could no longer see himself, for the Darkness clouded the mirrors.

As we step into Midnight…
We lose sight of who we are…

Riku reached the mirror at the end. With one last, nervous breath, he walked forward and looked into the mirror. He gasped, utterly shocked.

He could see a reflection…

…but it wasn’t his!

The person in the mirror looked just like him, with a few changes. His clothes were all black. His hair was not an illustrious sliver, but a raven black. His eyes weren’t a deep sea-green, but a menacing golden yellow. Riku jumped back.

T-t-that couldn’t be him!

We step into the bliss of nothingness…
And become nothingness ourselves…

The person in the mirror stepped out towards Riku. Riku jumped back again. He was starting to become freaked out. Suddenly, the person grew taller and wider, at least 20 times Riku’s size! He transformed into something that was a cross between a Heartless and a Nobody. His new form was now white and black, but those menacing eyes remained.

Riku’s eyes were wide with fear.

He started to back up slowly…

But don’t be afraid…

No.

Riku stopped backing up.

If this thing was…him…he had to face it. Now. Riku took a step forward towards the monstrous beast.

That’s it! Be strong.

Riku grit his teeth in fierce determination.

He summoned his Keyblade, the Way to Dawn.

He gripped the cool weapon’s handle, felt the weapon’s energy and magic flow through him.

Stay strong.

Boss Battle: http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=416523#post416523

The monster rose into the sky, and erupted into fiery white and black flames. The flames encircled Riku, trapping him. The platform shook, and then shattered.

Everything was spinning…

But don’t be afraid…

The Light, the Darkness, Twilight, Midnight…

You hold one of the mightiest weapons of all…

All mixing into one…

So do not forget…

Everything grew darker, if possible…

You are one of Four…

There were bright flashes of white in front of Riku. He was still falling…

Who will open the door…

Falling…falling…falling…

Into…

…what?

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Pictures: http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l281/artsyone3/MFB.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l281/artsyone3/Tranformation1.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l281/artsyone3/Transformation2.jpg


Luxord: My gosh, that was a long one!
Xaldin: Tell me about it!
Demyx: Luxord, can I--
Luxord: No!
Demyx: *pouts*
Sora: Hey! Riku went through like what I did with the platforms and the annoying voice!
Me: That's the idea :)

 

That's cool. The part with her turning around is like in chain of memories when namine turns around to revel Kairi.

Cool still!

They're the lines from the lssp trailer!

Great job!

*hates you for being so artistic*

 

Wow! That was a long chapter, but well worth it! Tings are starting to make sense now yay!

 

Awsome!!! Great chapter, long and very interesting!! What is this new type of enemy? A mix between Heartless and Nobodies.... It seems powerful and very dangerous, because both Heartless and Nobodies evolved to stronger and dangerous forms.. I can only imagine what evolutions this enemy will have..
Anyway, I can't wait for your next chapter!!

 

Awsome, can't wait to see next chapter.