KH 2-3: Shards of Broken Destiny (Story Chapters)

Can't wait until next chapter!

 

:D I'm uploading some things into Imovie, and while I wait, i think i'll work on the next chapter of BMTL :)

*starts typing*

 

*tilts head*

What happened to the "n" in Xaldin?
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It went 'n between Fish 'n Chips, Rock n' Roll, etc.

 

*mouth drops open*

*curses under breath*

NUTS!!!! This totally stinks! I'm so sorry, but I can't change his name back now...it'd ruin too many things...I'm sorry about that...

*kicks a random wall* IDIOT!!!

hehe :) But seriously, i forgot to add it in... ugh....ima idiot...

 

I was just watching Doctor Who(best show ever) and some guy came up with London Investigation 'n Detective Agency (LINDA) Those were the examples of "'n" being a word that he gave. I thought it was funny so I couldn't resist.

question that's even more off topic. You're good at writing epic stuff from what this work tells. How do you do it? I'm working on something without much success. I think and think but it always seems wrong to me. Anything you could do to help? I'm just kinda lost at this point.

 

Yay, awesome new chapter! ^_^

Quoted from her in Bad Moon Arising when I asked her XD :
"well....my way of thinking up stories is REALLY weird but here goes:

first, i get an idea, like the idea of making a sequal to The 14th Key and The Vampire Nobody. Then for weeks, while i work on another story, i think about the story. i draw out any characters so i can picture them in my head, and then i think about different events and scenes and fights until i can see them in my head, sorta like watching a cutscene in KH or watching a movie. then, when it comes time to type, i just type down what i see in my head.

trust me, you can tell when i write a chapter, whether or not i've thought about it. if i have, then it'll be good. if i haven't, it'll be bad.

Which is why i think my story Memory Break didn't turn out so good. I didn't take enough time to think about it."

...My strategy XD :
I blindfold myself and listen to music while i'm typing if i can't think of something to write...>_>

 

Thanks. I can't believe how far I'd gotten off track. I'm in it for fun. I gotta remember that. I think I'm getting a new idea. You know what this isn't over for me. I'm winning against this story. It's gonna be written whether it wants to be or not. Thanks Zaria. It was almost scary to see how far I was from myself at that point. I used to do just like you quoted and it worked out. Things are going to get better. I know they will.

 

lol, I've never heard of that show before, but i'll check it out sometime :)

Hmmm...well, I always add major drama in my stories (ex: someone dies, betrayal, etc.), which adds to the adventure and excitement, making it somewhat epic...?

ok, i honestly have no clue as to why my stories come out the way that they do. it's just that...when I think of the scenes in my stories, it's like watching a movie. And sometimes, I can see everything so perfectly, I wish i could hook my brain up to a TV, so everyone can watch my thoughts. I just type what i see, and hope that's good enough.

With your story, dont write down rough drafts. Just think about them, and visualize them. When you can see your story perfectly, and have everything thought out from the biggest aspects to the smallest details, THEN type/write them out.

Trust me, works wonders :)

*reads what i just wrote* Wow. Thats sounds sorta corny.... ;o_0

*points to Zaria*

Yeah, what they said!

And thats a cool method! I can't type w/o looking at the keyboard though, so...yeah...lol... *laughs nervously and smiles sheepishly*

 

Ok. *nods*

Lest just pretend that when you are a heartless and you have an "n" in your name, it isn't included becuase N....er....represents light?

*nods*

N now officially represents light. XDD

*hopes nobody will remember the N in Xehanort or Ansem*
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Well I finally read all of the chapter(s) that I missed so far...now just gotta wait for another one.

 

lol :) Okay!

Actually, i looked at my book that contained all of the names, and I realized that the name 'Aldix' was actually meant to be 'Naldix'.

My handwriting is SOOO messy its not even funny, so I must have thought the 'N' was scratched out, so i left it out.

XD hehe, I'll have to put this in the Random Facts :)

:) hope you liked em'!

i want to get another chapter out today, plus pics

 

greetings! I, DestinedToMemoriesCorrupt (aka Destined) have a [rather dpressing] message from my dear friend ~RoadToDawn~ (aka dawn). Sadly, dawn is unable to visit the forum from now on. *holds back tears*(as im sure dawn is also doing miles away) i would like to inform you that she will still be reading the story, as i will be sending her the chapters. I might even have to read up. What's another reading addiction? =D dawn is very sorry, as am i, that she will no longer be able to chat with any of you. it's very depressing, being she's the one who introduced me to the site. if any of you have any message for her, feel free to simply PM me. ^^ and i will send to to her. (don't worry, i wont be nosy if you really wish i wouldnt be) again, she is very sorry for not being able to visit the forum, and i am very sorry for having to share such sad news.

PS i really like the title of this story...(i like the word shard...and dont know why...)

 

Awww...that's so sad! Tell her I said it was perfectly fine, okay?

And also, can she get on Fanfiction.net? I'm putting the story up there as well, so maybe she can read it there :)

Thanks for letting me know :) Dawn's lucky to have a friend like you :)

Oh, and thanks for liking the title :) I like the word 'Shard' too :D

 

well you seem like a really nice person ^^ and i'll be sure to tell dawn! im not exactly sure why ~RoadToDawn~ cant visit the forum... i think her parents think she's on it too much... and i think it would make more sense for them to cut back on the time dawn is allowed to use the computer instead of banning dawn altogether... but it's not my place to say. i am ashamed. lol. (so i laugh about it?) anyways, like i said feel free to PM me and i'll deliver ANY messages right to ~RoadToDawn~ ! ^^ peace! :D

 

Woah, finally catched up on everything. Sorry I haven't been commenting lately. I've been busy at schhol **grins sheepishly**
Lol, I don't care much about Xaldin anyway, so you're welcome to kill him in anyway you like **evil smile**

Xaldin: Uh oh.......

 

:D Do'kay! Well, tell Dawn I said hi, and tell her I said that my parents think I spend too much time on the computer too, lol :)

Aww man, that stinks :( School, i mean :)

But I'm glad you've caught up! And I don't like Xaldin either! The dude had cool hair, but he's annoying. So i killed him :D

Man, i LOVE being the writer!!! *evil smile*

 

*No More Sarrow by Linkin' park plays*

Hexon: *Slashes at Xaldin*
Nixon: *Breaks Xaldin's back*
Me: *Grabs Popcorn*

 

Misxion: Horribly mannered thugs
Meat: Shut up. Stop your spammin'.
Misxion: Nox did not listen to you. Neither will I.
Meat: Go away. I'm waiting for the story.
Misxion: You're always reading other peoples stories. Write your own for once. Oh wait you are, but you're not doing anything about it.
Meat:... You got me there. But, I like this story better. This one is coherent and it like has regular updates.
Misxion: And whose fault is that?
Meat: Dammit.

 

Chapter 9!

WOOT CH 9!!!

Xemnas: 'bout time.
Me: Hey, I can kick all of yall' out of here anytime I want.
Everyone: ... YAY !
Me: Thought so :)

*Kuxir and Xoras walk in*

Xed: Ku! Xor! I saved your seats for you!
Riku and Roxas: The seats were for THEM!?!
Xed: Yea.
Riku and Roxas: >:P
Kuxir: We would've been here earkier, if SOMEONE hadn't shot open the popcorn machine *glares at Xoras*
Xoras: Hey! I'm an assassin, it's what I do; shoot things :)
Xigbar: Right on!
Xoras: YEAH!
Me: If you all don't mind, I'd like to start the new chapter.
Demyx: What about the big surprise?
Me: Chapter 10. If I put it at the end of this chapter, I'd have to make the chapter too long. Don't worry, it's worth the wait :)
Everyone: Awwww... :(
Me: But to make up for it, I put up another chapter of Bring Me To Life.
Everyone: WOOT!!

*Everyone gets quiet and movie starts*

Chapter 9

After checking on the situation with Leon and everyone else, Riku and King Mickey went for a short walk, to observe how the system was working, and to talk about what had just occurred.
“I…I still can’t believe it!” Riku said, a smile on his face. “Rae-I mean, Xed’s okay!” The King looked up and smiled at his friend, who continued. “I was sure that…” Riku’s expression dropped, his smile rapidly fading into a frown. He stopped walking and looked down at the ground.

“...I was sure that she was dead.”

The King could only look at his friend with concern and sympathy, although neither helped.
“But she’s not!” Mickey insisted, smiling up at his friend. He placed his hands on his hips. “She’s alive, and that’s all that matters. No need to dwell on the past that you can’t change.” Riku nodded slightly.
“I guess so…”

“My, my, Riku…haven’t we grown?”

Riku raised his head, and the two looking around wildly, in search of the source of the voice that had just spoken.
“Who’s there?” Riku shouted, narrowing his eyes. A light chuckle could be heard as a Corridor of Darkness opened up in front of him. Out stepped a cloaked figure, with his hood up, concealing his face. Riku grit his teeth.
“Who are you?” He demanded, summoning his Keyblade. The figure struck a thoughtful pose.
“You don’t remember me?” He asked, his tone void of emotion. He then shook his head sympathetically. “I suppose all that time in Castle Oblivion went to waste.”

The figure reached up, and pulled his hood down.

The figure was indeed a man, with slate-colored hair that covered the right side of his face. His face was a pale ivory color, and his visible eye was a deep indigo shade, reflecting a sense of deep intelligence and thoughtfulness.

Riku raised an eyebrow.

“You…you seem…familiar…” he stated, still looking at the man in front of him.

Zexion.

Huh?

Zexion. His name is Zexion. Remember?

“You’re…Zexion…”

The man smiled slightly, a hint of amusement and mockery on his lips.
“So you do remember me.” He said, his voice monotone. “Very good.”
“Wait a minute!” The King said, speaking for the first time in this conversation. “If you’re from Castle Oblivion…” The mouse King looked up at Riku. “Didn’t you kill him?” Riku nodded, confused slightly.
“I should’ve…” He then glared at Zexion. “I did!” He gripped his weapon tighter. “How did you live?” The Cloaked Schemer chuckled.
“First off, I am a Nobody. I never was ‘alive’ in a sense. All of the Organization XIII members are not ‘alive.”

Click.

Something came to Riku’s thoughts.

Xed was a Nobody.

He had been told that she was part of the Organization, but it never really hit him that she was a Nobody.

“And secondly, you never killed me.”

Riku and the King looked up at the man in disbelief.
“What?!” Riku exclaimed. The Nobody chuckled, crossing his arms.
“I suppose you hadn’t caught on.” He remarked snidely. “Yet again, we concealed it so well, I’m not surprised you didn’t know.”
“What are you talking about?” The Keyblade bearer loosened his grip a little. Zexion looked up into the sunset-tainted sky, and sighed, before looking back down towards the two.

“Everything, everything about Castle Oblivion, the plot, the Organization members there, even the Castle itself…”

He smiled slyly, twisting his lips into a rare, but cruel, smile.

“…Was all an illusion.”

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“Xed? Xed, are you in there?”

Sora said loudly, knocking on the door of the workshop. He, Donald, and Goofy had come back to where they met Xed before, in hopes of finding her and asking her if she knew where Riku and the King were. After a few knocks, and no one answering the door, Goofy sighed.
“Guess she’s not here.” Donald crossed his arms.
“Where are we going to look now? They could be anywhere!”
“We could go ask Leon.” Sora suggested.

“Naw, he doesn’t know.”

The trio looked behind them to see Xoras standing there, leaning against a wall, his arms crossed, a smirk set on his face.
“How do you know?” Donald quacked, placing his hands on his hips. Xoras shrugged.
“Call it…a hunch.”
“Well, do you know where King Mickey is?” Goofy asked, scratching his head. The Heartless chuckled.
“Oh, you mean that mouse guy?” He said, walking over towards the group. “Nope, haven’t seen them. But,” He sighed, looking up at the sky, “I heard they were heading towards the Great Maw.” The party smiled excitedly.
“Ok, thanks!” Sora said, as the three raced off. Xoras watched as they disappeared from sight.
“Oh, wait!” he called after them softly, an expression of fake concern spreading on his face. “I forgot to mention that the Organization is going to be there, and will most likely try to kill you.”

A devious smile set upon his face, along with a cruel laugh.

“Whoops.”

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Sora, Donald, and Goofy ran as fast as they could, until they reached the large expanse of land known as the Great Maw. They all fell to the ground, catching their breath.
“Well…” Goofy huffed, “It looks like we beat them here.” Sora nodded.
“Yeah…” he huffed back in response.

“Look who we have here…”

The three looked around frantically.

“Did you hear that?” they asked together in unison.

“Our Heroes…”

Suddenly, a dark portal opened up, and a tall, cloaked figure stepped out, his hood down, revealing his face. He had somewhat long silver hair, sort of spiky, tanned skin, and amber colored eyes. His face expressed intelligence, and amusement.

“Who’s that?” Donald asked. Goofy shook his head.
“I dunno…”
“What do you want, Nobody?” Sora demanded. The figure chuckled slightly, and crossed his arms.
“What I want…”

“Hey guys!”

The trio turned around to see Xed walking towards them, waving and smiling. They then turned back towards the Nobody in front of them, who was now smiling cruelly.

“…Is a test of her loyalty.”

“Hey Xemnas.” Xed said, walking up to the group. She cocked her head slightly. “What are you doing here?” The man looked over at her.
“Oh, just meeting these new ‘friends’ of yours.” He said simply, stressing the word ‘friends’ ever so slightly. Sora placed his hand out, causing Xed to back up.
“Stay away from him!” he commanded. “He’s with the Organization; he could attack us!” Xed raised an eyebrow.
“Umm…Sora, you know that—“
“We’ll get him!” Donald shouted, taking out his staff. Goofy took out his shield, Sora took out his Keyblade, and the three took a fighting stance. Xed just looked at the three in complete horror and confusion.
“Guys, stop!” she said, but no one was listening. Xemnas looked at Xed’s expression, and sensed her arising anger.

Sora raised his Keyblade, and charged towards Xemnas, who stood still, making no effort whatsoever to defend himself or attack back. Once he was close enough, the young Keyblader brought his weapon crashing down—

CLASH!!

Sora gasped softly, surprised that his attack had been stopped.

But not by Xemnas.

Sora looked up to see Xed standing between he and his target, a Keyblade blocking his previous attack and pressing against his own.

“Get…away…from…Xemnas…” She growled, causing Sora to jump back. Once he had backed away, Xed raised her Keyblade up in a threatening position. Xemnas smirked.

Perfect.

“B-but why?” Sora stuttered, still in disbelief. He then grit his teeth and pointed an accusing finger at Xemnas. “Why are you protecting that Nobody!?!?”

Xed narrowed her eyes, which were starting to flame up with anger.

“First, he has a name. His name is Xemnas.” She growled quietly. “He is leader of the Organization XIII, and my Superior. Therefore, I will do whatever it takes to protect him.”
“He’s a Nobody! A nothing!” Donald shouted in retaliation. “He’s not worth protecting!”
“Shut up!” Xed snapped, surprising even Xemnas at the sharpness of her words.

I knew she had a temper, but I never knew she was so…protective…

“You are to leave him alone!” she demanded, her expression becoming a little calmer. “Leave him and the rest of the Organization alone.” Goofy shook his head.
“We can’t do that! Master Yen Sid says we have to destroy Organization XIII!” He said. “We have to get rid of all the Heartless and Nobodies, so the worlds can be at peace again.”

Xed expression changed to realization, softening greatly. She dismissed her Keyblade, and crossed her arms.

“I see.” She said simply, nodding her head slowly. “In order for the worlds to be right again, all Heartless and Nobodies must die.” Sora nodded, loosening his grip on his weapon.
“Exactly.” Xed nodded.

“Alright. Go ahead, kill Organization XIII.”

Xemnas glanced down at her, confusion and anger dancing in his eyes.

What? What is she…?

The trio’s eyes widened at this. The girl who just yelled at them for attacking one of the Organization members just gave them permission to kill them.
“Really?” Sora asked. Xed nodded, and smiled.
“Yep. Of course, once you start, you can’t stop.” Donald nodded.
“We know.”
“You’d have to kill all of the Organization members.” Sora nodded, getting into a fighting stance once again.
“We know that! That’s the plan.” Xed smiled slyly.

“Well, if you are going to kill the Organization…”

She walked up to Sora, stopping only a few feet from him.

“I want to be first.”

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Bring Me To Life Chapter 4: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3608249/4/Bring_Me_To_Life

Larxene: OOO drama!!!
Axel: Wow Xed, such a temper!
Xed: Shut it, pyro. I don't have a temper.
Xoras: *cough*Yesyoudo*cough*
Xed: *takes out Keyblades* You wanna say that again?
Xoras: ... *stuffs face with popcorn*
Xed: :) Didn't think so.
Vexen: WHATS THE SURPRISE?
Me: I'm not telling! Next chapter, I promise.
Xaldin: You better...
Me: *takes out Toast Ray* I better WHAT?!!
Xaldin: ...nothing... *hides behind chair*
Me: :D I got the power :)