KH 2-3: Shards of Broken Destiny (Story Chapters)

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  1. RikuStalker Destiny Islands Resident

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    -glues self to thread-

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    Are you going to make pics of your new charries? You're really good at it.
     
  2. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Oh, you'll see...*evil smile*

    and thank you! I take pride in being about to make other's brains fry :D

    *nod* Sure am! I drew out Xed and Raemond, and took pics of them. Unfortunately, Saix (my durn camera) is acting stupid again, and isn't working at the moment...but, i have an idea for the rest of the characters... *gets to work*

    And thank you! :D
     
  3. keylbader_twilight Traverse Town Homebody

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    Awsomeness!!! That is super good! I can't wait till the next chapter!
     
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    Yay, hope to see more drawings soon X3 they're really good.
     
  5. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thank ya :D
     
  6. zerogit Destiny Islands Resident

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    Ah!!!!!! I gotta keep this on the first page. ...............................Bump
     
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    sorry I've been gone what'd I miss?
     
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    Chapter 7 Xaren, go back a few pages you should find it... >.>

    Wow that was a great chapter. Though I missed a PM update mail thingy? >.< Can i start getting those again please?
     
  9. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Chapter 8 at LAST!!!

    CHAPTER 8 GOODNESS!!!

    Me: *apologizes a thousand times* I'm SOO SORRY for the late updates! I've been super busy lately, and I didn't get to work on them as much as I wanted to.
    Kairi: Is there new stuff today?
    Me: Yes.
    Everyone: *cheers*
    Me: Okay, to make up for what I've not done, we have an all-new chapter of Bring Me To Life.
    Everyone: Yay!
    Me: A new SOBD chapter, with a Boss Battle.
    Everyone: YAY!
    Me: And more Random Facts.
    Everyone: YAY!!
    Me: I'd have drawings, but my camera isn't working at the moment. *throws camera against wall*
    Namine: Ever thought about getting a new one?
    Me: Yeah, but I can't afford it right now.
    Nixon: I say steal one.
    Luxord: Gotta go with him on this one.
    Me: T_T; Everyone just watch the movie and enjoy.

    *Everyone gets quiet*

    ~Chapter 8~

    Saix took Xed through the portal and into a large castle somewhere in a dark city. Despite her protests for him to let go of her so she could walk on her own, he kept his grasp on her arm as he dragged her to a large, white room with very tall chairs in it, 14 chairs to be exact. Sitting on the chairs were 12 black-cloaked figures, their hoods down. The figure in the tallest chair, a man with long silver hair that was slightly spiked, and golden eyes glanced down at the two members who had just entered the room. He narrowed his eyes.
    “You two are late.†He stated simply, annoyance clear in his tone. Xed finally yanked away from Saix’s grip, and crossed her arms. Saix looked up at the man who had just spoken.
    “Superior, Number XIII has just met some new people.†He said. Another man, one who was well built with dark colored dreadlocks and cobalt eyes raised an eyebrow.
    “Who? And why does this concern us?†he questioned. Xed looked up at him, and the rest of the figures.
    “Well, their names are Sora, Donald, and Goofy, and—“ She stopped suddenly, as she noticed the surprised looks upon the other member’s faces.
    “Sora?†Another man, with flaming red hair, fiery emerald eyes, and diamond-shaped marks under his eyes, said. Xed nodded. A stiff silence followed after, and lasted a moment or two. The first man cleared his throat, shattering the deafening silence.
    “I see.†He said, keeping his voice calm. “Until further notice, I want you to not be around him, Xedramon.†Xed looked up at him, her mouth wide open.
    “Xemnas! That’s not fair!†she yelled.
    “It is perfectly fair, Number XIII.†The man named Xemnas said. Xed narrowed her eyes.
    “No, it’s not!â€
    “He may be dangerous, Xed.†Another man with bright blonde hair, shining blue eyes, and many ear piercings said, his accent thick and British-like.
    “He’s not dangerous!†She retorted. “Maybe he can help us—“
    “Enough!†Xemnas shouted, his expression reflecting anger. “Xedramon, it is an order for you to stay away from him. Do I make myself clear?†Xed muttered some sort of response, looking at the ground.

    “Pardon?â€

    “I said fine.â€

    “Good.†The Superior said, relaxing a bit in his chair. Xed sighed.
    “Can I go back to Hollow Bastion now? I’ve got stuff to do.â€
    “I’ll take ya.†Another man volunteered. He had long black hair, streaked with silver that was pulled into a ponytail. There was a scar marked onto his right cheek, and an eye patch over his left eye. Xed smiled.
    “Thanks Xigbar.†The man created a portal to get down from his chair, and appeared next to the girl. He then opened another portal, and the two walked through it. Once both were gone, Saix portaled to his own chair and took a seat.

    An uncomfortable silence followed.

    “So…she knows now.†Xemnas said, rubbing his temples with his hand.
    “What a mess…†The man with the dreadlocks commented.
    “Heh, doesn’t surprise me.†Another figure, a woman, with blonde hair and sea-green eyes said. She leaned back in her chair, a sly smile set on her face. “ ‘Bout time the brat found out.â€
    “Something tells me she doesn’t know everything.†Another man, whom was well built, had somewhat spiky orange hair, and clear blue eyes added in.
    “What do you mean, Lexaeus?†The man with the dreadlocks asked. Lexaeus crossed his arms.
    “I’m not sure; she just doesn’t seem to know. I mean, she would seem angrier with us if she were to know, wouldn’t she?â€
    “Well,†the man with the red hair from before said, “what now? How are we gonna save our butts this time?â€
    “We’ll do what we have been doing all this time.†Xemnas said, a sly smirk on his face. Another man with shoulder-length blonde hair and bright green eyes leaned forward in his chair, his face contorted in anger.
    “Xemnas, we can’t keep this up!†he said. “She’s going to find out sometime, and it’ll only be worse on both parts.â€
    “Vexen.†Xemnas boomed at the other man, sitting up a little straighter. “I’m sure it bothers all of us to have to lie to her—“
    “Not me.†The woman from before said.
    “Me neither.†Another man with pink hair and blue eye said.

    Xemnas glared at the two of them for a moment.
    “Anyways, MOST of us are bothered by us having to lie to her.†He continued. “But it is for the best.†Vexen glared up at him.
    “For the best? Xemnas, we’re depriving her of what she has the right to know! The other day she came to me and asked if I knew about any other Keyblade Masters—“
    “What did you say?†The man with the dreadlocks asked.
    “I said I knew no one else, Xaldin.â€
    “Then that’s perfect.†Xemnas said.
    “But Xem-“
    “Awww, come on, Vex!†The pink-haired man from before coaxed. “We won’t have to lie to her forever. Just until she’s dead.†An evil smirk crawled upon his face as he took on an expression of fake wonderment. “And when will that be, tomorrow? This afternoon?†Vexen grit his teeth, and narrowed his eyes.
    “Drop it, neophyte.â€
    “It’s just so hard to keep track of, what, with the days coming closer and closer…â€
    “That’s ENOUGH Marluxia!!†Vexen roared, glaring daggers at the pink-haired assassin. The man with the red hair scoffed.
    “I don’t see what makes Number IXV so special that you care so much about her, Vexen.†He remarked. The blue haired man from before looked over at him.
    “Axel, she’s Number XIII, not Number IXV.†He said. Axel crossed his arms and looked over on the ground.

    “Not in my eyes…â€

    +++

    Sometime after Xed’s departure with the man, the seven others remaining in her workshop went their separate ways: The King and Riku left to check on the situation in Hollow Bastion, Xoras and Kuxir left to somewhere unknown, and Sora, Donald, and Goofy left for Beast’s Castle once again, after having their Gummi ship fixed by Cid.

    +++

    “Hmmm…it seems like the Heartless really haven’t touched this place.†Sora remarked, looking at the main part of the castle. He and his friends had to take out a few Heartless outside, and one or two inside, but that was really it. They hadn’t seen any Nobodies, either.
    “Where do you think the Beast and Belle are?†Goofy asked, scratching his head. Donald just shrugged.
    “We would’ve heard them by now.†Sora said.

    RRRAAAAWWWWWWWWWRRRRRR!!!!!

    Suddenly, a loud roar echoed through the halls of the deserted castle. It shook the floor, and nearly caused the trio to fall over. Once to roar stopped, the three looked over to the other door opposite of the room.
    “I think it came from over there…†Donald said, sort of quietly. Sora turned around to them.
    “Well, c’mon!†he said, beckoning to them to follow after him as he ran towards the door. Donald and Goofy followed, somewhat hesitantly, and the three ran out the door, and into the back courtyard.

    +++

    “I told you to leave Xaldin!!!â€

    “Yea, I know…but it’s more fun to watch you all angry and stuff.â€

    The party ran out to see the Beast standing there, his teeth barred, and a silent snarl on his lips.
    “Hey, Beast, what’s going on?†Sora asked. The Beast turned his head to look over at Sora and his friends.
    “Nothing that concerns you.†He growled, turning back to the figure in front of him.
    “Hey guys, look! It’s one of those Organization guys!†Goofy said, pointing to the figure in front of Beast. Sora and Donald looked over at where Goofy was pointing.

    There was indeed a cloaked figure standing –more like hovering- there, but he wasn’t from the Organization.

    The man had a white cloak on, but his hood was down, giving the party a clear view of his face.

    His hair was bright blonde, and styled into many dreadlocks. He also had a pair of golden eyes that shined darkly in the night.

    He smirked at the trio.

    “Sorry kids, but this is a private fight.†He remarked snidely.
    “We’re not kids!†Donald shouted, pulling out his staff. Sora and Goofy followed suit. The man chuckled, totally amused. Sora narrowed his eyes.
    “What are you laughing at?†he demanded, gripping his Keyblade harder. The man shook his head.
    “It’s just that…I had something REALLY important to tell you…†he choked out, starting to laugh. “And now…I can’t remember what it was!†He then burst out in hysterical laughter.
    “Uhhh…?†Goofy said, confused. Donald crossed his arms.
    “Who is this nutcase?†he asked, watching the man nearly die with laughter. At his words, the man stopped himself from laughing, wiping the tears from his eyes.
    “Oh, I’m sorry, I forgot to introduce myself.†He said, standing up straight, an amused smile still on his face.

    “My name is Aldix…â€

    In a bright flash of white, six black lances appeared in his hand, and a strong wind blew, lifting him higher into the air. The trio, along with Beast, all got into fighting stances.

    Aldix looked down at them, a malevolent grin set upon his face.

    “…And I’m here to play…â€

    +++

    Boss Battle: http://kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=505908#post505908
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    Aldix fell to the ground breathing hard. His six lances fell down after him, creating a fence around him.
    “No…no….†he breathed, struggling to make the words. He lifted up his hands to his face. “I…I…NOO!!!!â€

    His body started to fade away, into white.

    “NOOOO!!!!!†He screamed, but his screams were fading faster than he was.

    In a matter of seconds, he was gone.

    Sora sighed, and called off his weapon.
    “What…was all THAT about?†he asked. Goofy shook his head.
    “I dunno.†He answered simply. Donald looked up at the two.
    “Maybe the King will know.†Goofy nodded.
    “Yeah, ahyuck!†The trio looked over at the Beast.
    “Hey, are you gonna be okay if we leave?†Sora asked. Beast looked over at him and nodded.
    “Yeah.†He then walked off, as if he had something else to do. The party just shrugged, and walked off towards the Gummi ship.

    +++

    “So…Aldix failed.â€

    “As expected.â€

    “What are we to do now?â€

    “Hmmm…the three probably don’t remember his name. Therefore, they won’t be sure if they killed Aldix or Xaldin.â€

    “And that helpsâ€

    “…Number IXV.â€

    “Yes?â€

    “Kill Xaldin.â€

    “May I ask why?â€

    “As to not raise suspicion. Now go.â€

    “Yes.â€


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    Bring Me To Life Chapter 3:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3608249/3/
    Random Facts: http://kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=16134


    Xed: Great chapter! But Marly's still a meanie-butt.
    Marluxia: What?!
    Xed: You heard me! You're a meanie-butt!!
    Marluxia: A few harmless jokes is all...
    Sora: I don't get what's going on...
    Riku: Hey, when did you get back?
    Sora: o-o
    Riku: ??
    Sora: o-o
    Riku: ...OKKKAAYYYY....
    Sora: So what's the deal with the death jokes?
    Xed: *crosses arms*
    Me: Oh, I HAVE A HUGE SURPRISE FOR CHAPTER 9!!!!

    I think you all will like it! :D
     
  10. RikuStalker Destiny Islands Resident

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    SQWEEEEEEEEE!!!

    I'm over at my friends house, so I had to read that really quick, but I still lub it:D

    And tell Saix to work or I'll personally take care of him.....-bucket of water-

    The camera, not the person XDDD
     
  11. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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    Woootz! But you just had to go and order the death of Xaldin?! ;-;

    Lolz
     
  12. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    lol thanks! :D

    I'll let my camera know....*evil smile*

    Camera: *gulp*

    Thanks!

    And yes, his death is actually sorta important. You'll see why later :)
     
  13. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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    But Xaldin is one of me favories! XD
     
  14. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    Awsomely, awsome chapter!!! As usual you made it sound like a real movie!!
    I loved the boss fight!! Your making me wanna "play the story" !!!
    Anyway, can't wait for your next chapter!
     
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    Squueee! I love reading your stories! I haven't been online for about a month so I've been catching up on all of them! (read Bad Moon Arising and SOBD all today). I love how you have the boss fights and the 'Bring Me to Life' intermixed!!Can't wait for the next chapter!:roll:
     
  16. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    lol, honestly, i never really liked the dude. But its important that he dies. You'll see why later :)

    :D Thank ya! And that's the idea of the Boss Battles! So, its working! WOOTNESS!!!

    Next chapter? I'm gonna start on it tomorrow. :)

    Thank you! :)
     
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    can't wait for the next chapter for both...sorry if I forgot what the story of this chapter was about but eh...got caught up in the other "Bring Me To Life" one.
     
  18. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    lol thats ok :) And thanks! :D
     
  19. TAFKAA8 Banned

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    When's the next chapters coming out. I'm really getting antsy all the theories and all the possible outcomes. Gosh! OH, Hi! XarenTheTwilitAngel haven't seen you for a bit. What happened exactly? I know I already asked but I'm so curious. I'm now a nosy person. I expect an increase in nose size by uuuuuh I'd say fifty percent.
     
  20. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    I'd like another chapter to come out tomorrow, hopefully :) and thanks. :D
     
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