KH 2-3: Shards of Broken Destiny (Story Chapters)

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  1. keylbader_twilight Traverse Town Homebody

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    YAY!!! Awsome plot twist! *sings with RikuStalker* Riuk has a heartless! Riku has a heartless!!! Awsome chapter!!!
     
  2. Zaria Destiny Islands Resident

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    ZOMG O____O I haven't been on in a long time! XD

    I just read all the updates...... That was so good....*dies*

    Can't wait for the next chapter! X3
     
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    Me: *hits Sora* Stupid Sora!! If you weren't dumb enough to go into castle oblivion, you wouldn't have had to sleep for a year, and Riku could have walked down the twilight path with Xed's somebody!
    Sora: What?
    Me: *kicks*
    Sora: Ow! Stop that!
     
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  5. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    I JUST GOT FRIGGIN CAUGHT UP!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    I never would have guessed that Kuxir was Riku's Heartless!!!! AWESOME TWIST!!!! And once again, I praise that wicked outfit of Xed's. You have such a cool imagination!
     
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    I'm back! :D:D:D

    WOOTNESS!!! I'M BACK! AND CHAPTER 7 IS HERE!!!

    Riku: Sheesh! It's about time you came back!
    Me: Shut it >:P
    Demyx: Yay! Is Chapter 7 really here?
    Me: Yep!
    Everyone: YAY!!!!!
    Me: But I have to warn you, this is just the start of all the confusion...
    Xemnas: We can handle it!
    Nixon: Yeah, BRING IT ON!!!!
    Luxord: *throws popcorn at the screen* IT'S SNOWING!!!
    Everyone: o_0
    Luxord: Hehe, Sorry...
    Lexaeus: Any Boss fights?
    Me: Nope, but there is a fight in this chapter.
    Lexaeus: YAY!
    Me: Okay everyone, shut up so I can start the movie!!!

    (Everyone sits down and shuts up)

    ~Chapter 7~

    “HEARTLESS?!?!?!†Riku, The King, Sora, Donald, and Goofy shouted simultaneously, their expressions that of pure confusion, shock, and horror. Xed and Kuxir stood there, slightly amused by their reactions.
    “Yes, I’m a Heartless.†Kuxir said, looking over at Riku. “Your Heartless.†Riku shook his head.
    “I…I don’t understand…†He said. “How did this happen?!?†The Heartless crossed his arms and closed his arms.
    “The moment you stepped into the Darkness, your Heart started to pull away from you. The more you used the Darkness, and the more you trusted and walked through the Darkness, the more your Heart would lean towards it. When that witch Maleficent granted you access into the Darkness, your Heart truly belonged to the Darkness.†He explained, opening his eyes and glaring at Riku. “But that’s not when I was made.â€
    “Wait a minute!†Donald interrupted. “If Riku has a Heartless, does that mean he has a Nobody?â€
    “If you’d let me finish, I’d get to that.†Kuxir replied in an even, yet irritated tone. Donald crossed his arms and frowned. Kuxir looked up.

    “As I was saying, I was created when Riku gave himself up to, as you know him, Ansem. As soon as Ansem stole your body, your Heart was sent spiraling into Darkness, you along with it.

    “Since your Heart was torn from you, you technically ‘lost your Heart’. When a Heart is lost, a Heartless and a Nobody are created. Nobodies take longer to be created than Heartless. I was made immediately, and your Nobody was to come next.

    “But, you found your Heart that was expelled into Darkness, and united with it again. This halted the creation of your Nobody, and a full Heartless. Your Heart was released, but it was recovered quickly. Therefore, an incomplete Heartless was the only thing that was created. That would be me.â€

    “Incomplete?†Sora repeated, putting his hands on his hips. “What does that mean?†Kuxir rolled his eyes and smirked, looking over at the Keyblade Master.
    “Like you care.†He replied coldly. Riku’s eyes widened.

    Wait… he thought. If I have a Heartless…that means…

    “Y-you’re the Darkness in me!†Riku shouted, pointing an accusing finger at Kuxir. His Heartless chuckled and smiled, his smile somewhat dead.
    “Exactly.†Riku grit his teeth.
    “If I destroy you, then the Darkness will leave me alone forever…â€
    “You know, Riku, I’ve been wanting to meet you.â€
    “This ends NOW!†Riku shouted, throwing his arm out to his side and summoning his Keyblade. Kuxir scoffed, throwing his arm out to the side as well.

    “Then end it.â€

    In a flash of white, an intricate black Keyblade, seething with power, appeared in Kuxir’s hand.
    “Another Keyblade!?†Goofy exclaimed, in utter shock. Everyone else, except for Xed, was too shocked to speak. Kuxir scoffed.
    “What, you thought that Riku’s own Heartless wouldn’t have a Keyblade?†he said, assuming a fighting stance. Riku took a fighting stance as well. Xed, at this time, stepped forward.
    “Look you two, just stop this now! There’s a lot to be explained, and fighting will not help at all!†she said, becoming annoyed.
    “Stay out of this, Xed!†Riku shouted, never peeling his glare off of his opponent. “This doesn’t involve you!†Kuxir smirked ever so slightly.
    “Speak for yourself!†He shouted, rushing towards Riku, his weapon raised. Riku raised his own to block the attack. With the oncoming attack blocked, Riku swung his Keyblade around to hit Kuxir in his side. With a swift swing, Kuxir parried the attack with one of his own.
    “Stop it! Stop fighting!!!†Xed shouted, desperately trying to get the fighting to cease. But it was no use; they fought on as if no one else was there. They continued to exchange attacks, sometimes throwing each other into the walls, or the other equipment in the warehouse.
    “STOP FIGHTING YOU TWO ARE GOING TO BREAK SOMETHING!!!†She shouted again, becoming angry. She turned towards Sora and his friends.
    “Sora! Tell Riku to stop!!†She pleaded, but her plea went unnoticed; Sora, Donald, and Goofy had now started cheering Riku on, telling him to keep fighting and to not give up. King Mickey narrowed his eyes, running into the fight.
    “Alright, fellas! Break it up!†he shouted, placing himself in between the two Keybladers, trying to push them apart.
    “Get out of the way, your Majesty!†Kuxir shouted, pushing the Mouse King back, before attacking Riku again.

    “THAT’S IT!!!!â€

    Xed ran in between the two Keyblade Masters, her back faced to Riku, her face facing Kuxir. She put her hands up and out, creating a wall between them.
    “Kuxir…†Xed said, trying to keep an even tone. “If you want to attack him, you’ll have to attack me as well.†Kuxir was surprised at her words.
    “But…after what he did…â€
    “Forget what he did!†she shouted. “That was a year ago! I’ve let it pass, and you have to too!†She then lowered her arms and turned so she could see both of them. Xed crossed her arms and glared at the two.
    “First of all, you two ARE NOT going to fight in my workshop! There’s a lot of dangerous equipment in here that I don’t want broken!†Sora, Donald, and Goofy looked around to see that this warehouse was, in fact, a workshop. There were a lot machines around, and many weapon-like things were scattered neatly around.
    “And secondly,†she continued, her voice seeming a little more calm, “I don’t want neither of you hurt. You guys are two of my closest friends, and I want neither of you dead. Got it?â€
    “Got it…†Was the reply muttered from Kuxir and Riku. Xed nodded once and smiled.
    “Good.†She turned around to face the other four. “Sorry for all of that.†She apologized, raising a hand up and scratching the back of her head. “I just really wanted these two to meet. I didn’t think they’d take it so bad…†King Mickey smiled.
    “It’s alright.†His cheery expression then changed to confusion. “But, if you wouldn’t mind, would you explain what is going on?â€
    “Yeah, I think we’re missing something here…†Sora said, putting both of his hands behind his head. Xed chuckled lightly.
    “Sure; I don’t mind.†She said. “Well, for starters, I—“

    “Hey Xeddie!â€

    Just then, a white portal opened up a little way away from the group, and another white-cloaked figure walked out, with their hood up. By how their voice sounded, everyone could tell the figure was male. Kuxir dismissed his Keyblade, and crossed his arms.
    “Oh great. The insane one has joined us.†He said, a light laugh following after. The figure placed his hands on his hips.
    “Now Kuxir, is that a nice thing to say?†He scolded jokingly. He then walked over to Xed and wrapped his arms around Xed’s waist, placing his chin on her shoulder.
    “Girl, your feet must be tired, ‘cause you’ve been running through my mind all day!†he said, smiling under his hood. A light blush appeared on Xed’s face as Sora, Donald, and Goofy chuckled. Even Kuxir, Riku, and The King laughed softly. Xed pulled away the figure and crossed her arms.
    “Will you stop hitting on me already!†She hissed, annoyed. Kuxir laughed, turning towards Sora.
    “I feel so bad for you, Sora.†He said between laughs. Sora gave him a confused look.
    “What for?†The figure then looked up at the confused Keyblader.
    “So, you’re the famous Sora?†He said, walking towards Sora. “The famous protector of Light that all you Wholes count on?â€
    “Uhh…sure, I guess…†Sora replied, more confused than ever. “Who are you?â€
    “You don’t remember me?†he asked, his tone full of mock hurt. Xed rolled her eyes.
    “More like he doesn’t know you.†She said. “He’s never met you before.†The figure nodded.
    “That’s right!†the figure exclaimed. “We haven’t met!†Kuxir grunted.
    “Stop acting like such an idiot, Xor.†He said. “Sorry to have to do this to you, Sora.â€
    “Do what?†Donald quacked in curiosity.
    “Do you always have to interrupt me?†Kuxir snapped at the duck. He then looked back up at Sora.

    “Sora, this is Xoras…†He introduced, beckoning over to the cloaked figure standing next to him.

    “…Your Heartless.â€

    “WHAT?!†Sora shouted, nearly falling over. The figure laughed as he reached up to pull his hood down.

    The figure was indeed male, and looked exactly like Sora, with a few alterations. His hair was spiked out in all directions, just like Sora’s, but it was light golden-yellow color. And his eyes weren’t an ocean blue color, but a menacing gold color, much like Kuxir’s.

    “What’s going on here!?†Goofy shouted, totally confused. “Master Yen Sid said nothin’ about Heartless!â€
    “Aww, what does that old bag know about anything?†Xoras replied snidely, waving his hand. Donald stepped forward and grit his teeth.
    “Don’t you dare talk about Master Yen Sid like that!†he shouted. Xoras placed his hands on his hips and smirked.
    “Cool it, bird-brain.†He said, ignoring Donald’s demand. “But seriously, the dude doesn’t know anything.â€
    “Xoras, that’s not nice.†Xed said, crossing her arms. “But, it IS slightly true. He knows a lot, but there are some things that he doesn’t know.†Goofy shook his head.
    “That’s impossible! He knows everything! He taught the King everything about everything.â€
    “Everything that he knows.†Kuxir added. “There are some things that even he doesn’t know.†Riku crossed his arms.
    “And I suppose you do?†he questioned.
    “Yes.â€
    “Yeah, I’m officially confused.†Sora said, scratching his head. Xoras chuckled.
    “That doesn’t surprise me. You never were the sharpest tool in the shed.†Sora whipped around to face him, his fists clenched.
    “What’d you say?†he demanded angrily. Xoras just leaned in and smiled cruelly.
    “Oh, so your hearing stinks too?â€
    “That’s enough!†Xed shouted, stopping the two from saying any more. “I want no more fights in my workshop.â€
    “Okay, we’ll take this outside!†Sora said, narrowing his eyes. Xoras looked over at him.
    “Fine.†He said, beckoning towards the door. “Ladies first!â€
    “No!†Xed said angrily. “No more fights! Not in here, not outside.â€
    “Can you tell us what’s going on now, please?†King Mickey said, trying to change the subject. Xed nodded.
    “Great idea. Everyone shut up and listen.†She said. Xoras snickered. She glared at him. “That also includes you, idiot.†Xoras stopped snickering, and settled for smirking. Xed took a breath. “I’m going to give you the condensed version of what’s going on. No questions until the end.†Xoras then raised his hand.
    “Hey teacher, what happens if we ask a question?†he said, fighting back a chuckle. Xed smirked.
    “Hilarious. Try it again to find out.†Immediately, Xoras lowered his hand and shut up. Kuxir snickered softly. Xed smiled.
    “Thought so. So here is what’s going on: I trust you all know there is a group of Nobodies called Organization XIII, am I right?†Everyone nodded. “And I’m sure that everyone knows then when one loses their Heart, and Nobody and a Heartless are created, am I right?†Everyone nodded again. “The members of the Organization are no different. They too were once people with strong Hearts. When they lost their Heart, a Nobody was created. They had such strong Hearts that they kept their form. But even Master Yen Sid had forgotten one thing.
    “What’s that?†Goofy asked. Kuxir smirked.

    “That Heartless were made too.â€

    “These Heartless joined together, and formed an organization of their own.†Xed said.
    “It’s called Disorganization XIII, but it’s more commonly called The White Disorder, or The Disorder.†Xoras added in. Xed smiled.
    “So…we have another Organization to worry about.†Riku said, crossing his arms. “Great.â€
    “Actually, Kuxir is Number VI in The Disorder. He was taken in for his expertise in Darkness, and the power of the mind. His element is Dream, and he can control the dreams of people, nightmares too.†She said. Xoras’ mouth opened in shock.
    “Hey! What about me!! I’m in it too!!†he said, crossing his arms and pouting. Kuxir rolled his eyes.
    “Xoras was Number II in The Disorder.†He said. “He was brought in for his expertise in the art of assassins…†Xoras smiled proudly. Xed chuckled.
    “…And he was kicked out of The Disorder for attempted murder of The Disorder’s members.†She finished for him. Sora chuckled.
    “So…my Heartless is an assassin?†he asked. Xoras nodded.
    “The best there is!†he said. “Those Heartless were fools for kicking me out.†Xed looked over at her friend.
    “Xoras, you tried to kill them!†she said, exasperated, but it was clear that she was amused.
    “So? What’s your point?†he asked. Xed shook her head.
    “Xedramon, there’s still one thing I don’t get.†King Mickey said, crossing his arms. “How did Sora come to have a Heartless?†Xed opened her mouth to speak, but Xoras put his hand on her shoulder, silencing her.
    “I got this one.†He said, looking over at Sora. “Basically, when Sora used that Keyblade to unlock his Heart to give back Kairi’s Heart, his Heart was consumed by the Darkness. Unlike the whole Riku and Kuxir thing, Sora was in Darkness for a longer time. Therefore, a Nobody AND a Heartless were created, both complete. But, he somehow came back into the Light with his own body, and he was reunited with his Heart again.†Xoras tapped his chin. “Kinda cheesy if you think about it.†Sora raised an eyebrow.
    “I have a Nobody, too?†he asked, feeling confused again.
    “This is getting really confusing!†Goofy said. Donald nodded. Kuxir was about to say something when another portal, this time black, opened up and a figure cloaked in black stepped out. But this time, the figure’s hood was down.

    It was a tall well-built man with pale moon-blue hair that went past his shoulders. He had golden eyes, which glowed softly, and an X-shaped scar was marked across his forehead. He had a cool, calm demeanor, which made everyone else slightly uneasy.

    “Xedramon, Xemnas wishes to…†he started in a monotone voice, but then trailed off, noticing the seven other bodies in the workshop. Xed smiled up at him.
    “Oh hey, Saix!†She said cheerfully. “There are some people I’d like you to meet. Everyone, this is Saix. Saix, this is Sora, Donald, Goof—“
    “Come with me.†Saix said in such a way that it was more like a command. “Now.†He grabbed her arm and pulled her through tpen portal behind him.
    “Xed!†Riku said, stepping towards the portal. But the portal closed, leaving the seven in the workshop.
    “Oooooo…†Xoras said. “Someone’s in trou-ble!†Kuxir glared at him.
    “She’s not in trouble, idiot.†He said.
    “But…but the Organization just took her!†Sora said.
    “She’s a member of the Organization.†Kuxir said, leaning against a nearby workbench. Riku raised an eyebrow.
    “Really?†Kuxir nodded.
    “Yeah.â€
    “What number member is she?†Goofy asked. Xoras smiled.

    “Lucky Number XIII.â€

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Everyone: ...???????????
    Me: HA! Told ya you'd all be confused!
    Sora: I...have a Heartless too?
    Riku: HA!!
    Sora: *cries*
    Kairi: Baby...
    Sora: HOW WOULD YOU FEEL IF YOU JUST FOUND OUT YOU HAD A HEARTLESS???
    Roxas: I can't believe my Somebody is such a baby...
    Sora: *runs out of theater*
    Hexon: *sigh* I'll go get him... *leaves*
    Larxene: Ummm...Fg? Will any of this ever be explained?
    Me: Yeah, this chapter was really confusing, but everything will be explained at the end :) I promise!
    Xed: I hope so...
    Me: Oh, and I hope to have some pictures to put up next chapter! *starts drawing*
     
  7. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    :confused::confused::confused::confused: You really don't know how confused I am right now.. I'm like :bangbang: ! Seriously!!
    Anyway, great chapter, lots of plot twists and big!! I like big chapters!!
    Keep it up, this is getting fantastic!!


    First Postness! YAY!!
     
  8. Deadmages26 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    oooooo i think i know why she is the XIII member of the organization but i'll keep it to myself:stupid:
     
  9. AkuseruVIII Banned

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    Now that one wasn't expected. I mean duh, the white cloaked peeps thing wasn't a shocker but I was confused on the Riku/Kuxir explanation of things and I didn't think about sentient Heartless playing this kinda role. My head hurts more(No mindblow just yet) I just think I need some more time to think. I'm burnt all the hell out with Summer School Health, Reminiscence, One Over Ten, FM, His Story, and Windows Vista(damn you windows vista home operating system). God, I need to get to work. Continue with this I would advise some slight editing of grammar and such, other than a few instances of such issues this was well written. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter and wish I really had a clear idea of what was going on. Whatevs, seeya (figuratively speaking of course.)
     
  10. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Yay! Glad I'm confusing people :) Thanks for reading guys!

    And trust me, EVERYTHING will make sense at one part or another :)
     
  11. zerogit Destiny Islands Resident

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    hMMM, SO DOWS THIS TAKE PLACE BEFORE OR AFTER BMA and 14th Key, cause now you have the whole timeline in flux. At the end of BMA, Kuxir made Roxas dream that nightmare so that Xed could be happy with her true love.

    Roxas: I'm too young to have a true love!!
    Me: But didn't you and Xed erm...
    Roxas: what?
    Me: Forget it. You'll learn the birds and bee's later.
    Roxas: 0_o ooooooooookkkaaaaaaayyyyyyyyy!!! I still don't get it though.
    Me: I'm going in search of Monty Python movie, forget it.
     
  12. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    this story keeps getting better and better, cant wait for the next chapter
     
  13. Viroxor Traverse Town Homebody

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    Hm, I guess this is happening after Roxas left? Or Xed is somehow Roxas's replacement. Everything will come together eventually, I'm sure.
     
  14. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I told you that the person at the end of BMA was Kuxir before this story even came out :)
     
  15. RikuStalker Destiny Islands Resident

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    o.o My brain hurteth. GOOD JOB:D

    But srsly, what happened to Roxas? He was in the Org. while Xed was there......@_@ Ack, I think to much.
     
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    Maybe something happened to xed to get her put out of the organization?

    And then Roxas came in and something screwy happened with namine and they forgot about her?


    :0 IDK!
     
  17. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Hehe, hey peoples! Chapter 8 will tell what happened to Roxas!


    And as for the whole 'timeline thing', then thats REALLY complicated too. It'll be explained when i release more Random Facts, which sould be tonight.

    But thanks everone for reading! :D

    (I'm REALLY sorry i didn't get to mail everyone updates. It's just that i cleaned up around my computer, and ended up throwing away my list of people who'd like to be updated *cries* Don't worry though! I'll make a new one as son as i can :D)
     
  18. TAFKAA8 Banned

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    Oh, well if you're makin' a new list add me, I was AkuseruVIII until this morning. Change is good, no?
     
  19. Zaria Destiny Islands Resident

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    Yay, new chapter! ^_^ That was really good! But, I'm not confused one bit....which is completely new for me XDDD!!!

    Can't wait for the next chapter ;)
     
  20. >Keyblader< Traverse Town Homebody

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    I understand the whole part about sora's and riku's heartless....but what the smoof happenened to Roxas dang it !!!!!
    Lol, you did a great job confusing most guys or gals about.......:D
    **still waiting for an explanation in the next chapter**
     
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