Made this for a sotw on another forum awhile back. So of course as you can see it's complete **** and so I lost. Now I didn't like that. At all. So I revised it yesterday: Meh...Slightly better. I can look at it without vomiting at least. ccncncncnc
its honestly funny i think of two different things just because of the color the top one reminds me of I am legend because that guy looks like one of the zombies, and he is gonna be hit by a car the bottom one is more .... i dunno but you should try moving the light more to the right, since it is literally in his face, and he still looks like he is gonna get hit by a car also, both of them are really cluttered i have no real Cnc
1. Too much going on to really have a focal point, and the colors are ugly. 2. A bit too dark, but much better with the lighting and focus. Still, can't tell what's going on.
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I can't exactly tell what you did with this tag, so from the things I can see I'll dismantle it into CnC slowly. The first one itself has a color that fits it nicely, but it looks like you used dodge and burn far too close to the stock, giving the impression of a blurry stock itself. The lighting is way too bad looking in that one, it only looks like it's serving to blur the image. The stock itself looks like a rotting person. The second one is an improvement, the color in itself makes it look deeper. The focal point can be seen better, and the lighting doesn't look like a blurry mess. The blending there is nice enough, and the car too. Maybe you could add some more brushing it, give a bit of lighting to the car, and also a bit more to the stock, I think this can be blended better. And did you sharpen the stock? Because maybe that's what makes it look a bit rotting.
