Kairi's Choice (chapter ten)

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What should Kairi do when Sora and Riku tell her the plan?

  1. Silent treatment!

    2.8%
  2. kill them KILL THEM

    13.9%
  3. dump Roxas

    8.3%
  4. not believe them

    13.9%
  5. be confused

    13.9%
  6. talk to Roxas

    33.3%
  7. Forgive them

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    0.0%
  8. I.DONT.CARE.

    13.9%
  1. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Chapter ten is out! In this chapter we get to see Roxas tell the organization about his morning. What will happen? What will they think? Only reading this chapter will tell.


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    Chapter Ten


    On the Beach


    No one talked. They just stood there. Sora and Riku looked confused. Roxas and Kairi had stood up but were no longer holding hands or even touching. Roxas was scared. Were they going to kill him? Was he going to have to fight him self? By now the sun was up. Today was a nice day, the blue skies with light, white, fluffy, clouds. Too bad none of them would be able to enjoy it.

    After a long time of standing and staring, Roxas decided to talk. “I um erg need to go back to the Organization before they worry about me being gone. Come visit me sometime Kairi.†He started to turn around.

    “Yeah you better go!†Sora shouted.

    “Wait Roxas, maybe I would like to come with you now.†Kairi said.

    “No, Kairi, don’t go!†Sora and Riku shouted at the same time.

    “Well I really do have to get back.†Roxas said. “Bye Kairi.†He smiled at her and created a corridor of darkness.


    The Castle that Never Was


    Roxas stepped out of the corridor of darkness. He didn’t see any one around. He headed towards the kitchen. In there, all other twelve members of the organization we sitting eating breakfast. Roxas grabbed a bagel and sat next between Axel and Demyx. He started to chew on his bagel. Hey maybe I won’t have to talk about my morning. He thought.

    “So Roxas is back everyone!†Xemnas started. Great, Roxas thought. So much for not having to talk about it.

    “Did you kiss her?â€

    “Is she in love with you?â€

    “When’s she coming?â€

    “Did she reject you?â€

    So many questions were being thrown at him. He stopped trying to hear them. He couldn’t even tell who was saying them.

    “Every one!†Xemnas yelled. “Stop asking Roxas so many questions; let’s let him tell the story himself.â€

    Roxas sighed. He really didn’t want to tell them. He knew that he should and would have to sooner or later. “Well, at seven I woke her up so that we could watch the sunset together. Then we held hands and walked along the beach. We sat down and talked a bit and then I kissed her. And she kissed me back.†All of the organization members were aww-ing. “Wait but that’s not the end of it. Sora and Riku saw the kiss. I’m not sure what they said but it made Kairi want to come back with me, now.â€

    “Great job Roxas!†Xemnas shouted. “Okay everyone, meeting over, you can leave now. All we have to do now is wait. Wait for Kairi to fall right into our perfectly set up trap.†The organization members all got up and left. Axel and Roxas remained.

    “So, you kissed her.†Axel started.

    “Yeah, I did. I was totally relived that she didn’t push away.â€

    “I told you she wouldn’t. Roxas, did you, um, like it?†Axel asked sheepishly.

    “I did, a lot. I feel horrible doing this to her.â€

    “Well maybe if you visit her, you can convince her not to come.â€

    “Yeah, I guess I could do that. But for now I think I deserve a break.†Axel smiled at him. They both just sat there. Thinking and wondering, what will happen next.


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    Hope you liked it. You will have to wait till the next chapter to find out what happens between Sora, Riku, and Kairi.

    Please vote on the poll and comment :D
     
  2. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    I like it :) Good chapter! :D
     
  3. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    thanks

    I am working one chapter 11 but I can't writing any more until there are more votes on the poll :D
     
  4. DiZ The Wandering Soul Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I like this Chapter as well, Roxas feeling bad though.....kinda weird for a nobody to FEEL anything :p well, you're doing good, keep it up!


    2nd Comment! WOOOOHOOOO!!!!!...sorry, i'm done now ^_^;


    Also, if possible, when i'm done, maybe you can check out my fic? I just need some run way, and maybe a good author's opinon will help ^^
     
  5. Shuhbooty moon child

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    she should kill em
     
  6. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    thank you (and actually you are the third comment)


    Sure I'll go look at yours :)

    I can't have Kairi go out of character!

    now do you really think she would do that?
     
  7. DiZ The Wandering Soul Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I meant beside you -_-; but, your welcome ^^
     
  8. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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  9. BlackSun Moogle Assistant

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    How many chapters is Kairi's Choice going to have? I hope at least 20 cause I'm enjoying this!!
     
  10. khalidroxesnaruto Destiny Islands Resident

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    I loved it.I want roxes to tell her the truth.Also i want kairi still to fall in love with no matter wat the truth is!:D

    Same here!
     
  11. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Sorry it wont have more

    I have to go back to school tommorrow and it's hard to find more time to write with homework and clubs and stuff :(

    Well you will have to wait till either chapter 11 or 12 to find out what Roxas does (I might make chapter 11 short and save that for later)
     
  12. MasterKeyblade777 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Awsome dancecat!

    Awsome Story!:D Your story has me on the edge of my seat!:p PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESE don't stop wrighting!:)
     
  13. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I wont until the story is over

    thanks

    and chapter 11 should be out in a bit...

    and the poll has decided the out come of the next chapter
     
  14. Rosey Chaser

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    SAME!!!!!!!!!! I luff this! Keep up the good work!
     
  15. DiZ The Wandering Soul Merlin's Housekeeper

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    You're Awesome ^_^ Hope you like it ^^


    It's called "A Kiss, A Lie, and a Deception"
     
  16. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks

    people can expect chapter 11 in a few hours :D

    Thanks!

    I am sure your story will be awesome
     
  17. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    that was really good yay
     
  18. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    thanks :)

    chapter 11 might be out in half and hour to an hour :D
     
  19. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Another wonderful chapter, Fellow Writer! Well, I'm off to read the next chapter!

    Self: lalalalala
    ::skips to thread::
    ::trips::
    Self: OW!
     
  20. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    having fun? lol