Traditional Art Kairi Drawing !

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  1. Xigbar The Freeshooter

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    Just a little drawing I did for Rosey a while back. Yes, I know that the picture is a bit sideways, but that's my scanner's fault.

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    C & C please...
     
  2. Xarah_Memory_Weilder Moogle Assistant

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    Cute!

    Nice Xigbar! I know how u feel about ur scanner. My scanner hates me! -.-
     
  3. Xigbar The Freeshooter

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    Please C & C and if you don't know what that is check the rules for the Graphic Arts section. I'm not trying to be mean.
     
  4. HOSPITAL STAT! i knock tits

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    <_< Photoshop is meant for correcting minor mistakes of the like. Check out the Rotation Tool.

    Aw, it's cute. :3 Is it supposed to be half chibi? She looks all stubby and squishy, it's really cute.

    Her feet look relatively small, and the right eye looks somewhat smaller than the left. Also, alert triangle-looking boobie. >: Her bust in whole still lacks volume and shape, looks flattish compared to everything else.

    Still, cute in general~
     
  5. Solid Snake Kept you waiting, huh?

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    Thats rly good but her heads just a wee bit too big

    and the Paupo Fruit looks like it has a hole in the middle <_<

    overall its good :D
     
  6. khcrazy101 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OMG!!!THATS WICKEDLY AWSOME! I WOULD GIVE U 1ST PLACE IN A ART CONTEST!!!!

    all in all i would give it 10/10
     
  7. Xigbar The Freeshooter

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    You pretty much pointed out the 2 things I'm worst at: Boobs and eyes. XD

    Oh and yea, she's supposed to be chibi. ^.^

    Her head is supposed to be big because she's a chibi.

    Thank you very much. ^.^
     
  8. Dredica SNES was the best.

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    o_o I don't like to draw Kairi, so I don't have anything nice or mean to say about it. I only like to draw Riku, maybe I'll put up a picture I have drawn of him :\ sorry if that's kinda off topic.
     
  9. Darkcloud Word of advice: Let the wookie win. He's Chuck N

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    A rather impressive attempt, even with the problems you've had with the scanner. There's a slight problem I've noticed: I don't see any eyebrows on her (Is that on purpose? Sorry, I don't know much about chibis!). I'd work on the color a little bit more, make it just a shade darker next time.

    Seriously though, this is really good. If you put it through it's paces in photoshop, you'll have something really impressive!
     
  10. .Kairi. Kingdom Keeper

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    Ooh, it's cute! She doesn't have any eyebrows like darkcloud pointed out, maybe add those in, and move her left arm out so we can see it more. The left zipper on her dress is missing as well. The coloring looks great though, very nice =]
     
  11. Xigbar The Freeshooter

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    Thanks, and I definately would like to see some of your work. ^.^

    You're right, there isn't any eyebrows. o.O Thanks for pointing that out. ^.^; And I thought the skin tone was a bit too light.

    Yea, the zipper is there. You can see it just hanging, but you can't see the whole thing because it's on the other side of her.
     
  12. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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    This is a job well done. I personally don see any sideways issue anywhere. O_o My only suggestion would b to make the heart a little darker. (I kinda squinted in order to see it clearly so it's a bit TOO light)
     
  13. Xigbar The Freeshooter

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    I made the heart light on purpose because Kairi is supposed to be the center of attention.
     
  14. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    .... Not once did you mention anything about Xigbar's drawing. Why did you bother posting in this thread? This is concidered as spam which is a major no no - I'll keep an eye on you in the art section.


    ANYWHOO

    That's a very nice chibi style you've got going on there! Uberly adorable! There's something about the lineart that I'm quite fond of. :3 The left eye (her right) I think became too wide propotion wise, it's because we see her from the side which would affect the perspective - so maybe make it smaller the next time?

    The colours are OK, but compared to the fruit the rest of the picture seemed too weak. Try to keep the same pressure of the coloured pencils when you only aim to draw base colours.
     
  15. Falling Star Gummi Ship Junkie

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    It is a very good drawing, if you were to ask me. The only thing I would work on are the colors and the feet (like some people have posted before) but other then those minor issues I think it would get a 5/5. :3
     
  16. Xigbar The Freeshooter

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    Thanks I'll keep that in mind.

    Yea, I guess the feet are a bit small.
     
  17. Wulphie! Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Is it a chibi?

    Is it a Chibi?
     
  18. blah M Merlin's Housekeeper

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    wow.thats real good(:
    i wish i could draw like that.
     
  19. Shuhbooty moon child

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    It looks cute. but there's something that I can't really understand. It looks 'weird' to me. I don't know why, but it does. Im sorry, heh, but I think, it should be more chibish. That's what I think. xD
    But it's really good though. =D