I originally wrote this to be a one-shot, but I might add to it if I can think of another chapter. Background Info that I Never put into story form. So, with Namine and Roxas fused to Sora and Kairi again, Xion, after being killed 358/2 Days, comes back because of her connection to Kairi. The rest will hopefully explain itself as you read. “No. For all these years I thought I loved you. When the Organization had you. When you brought me back from the Darkness. But now, Kairi, it’s different. You aren’t the one I truly love. And you’re not destined for me anyway. Riku’s always been jealous of me. He loves you. Don’t take this the wrong way. I just can’t marry you. I love Xion.†Kairi took that last sentence the hardest. She could endure the rest. She could handle the fact that Sora didn’t love her. She could understand that he couldn’t marry her. But when he said that he loved someone else, that’s when the rage came. That’s when she finally snapped. Namine disappeared. Her heart turned to stone. One thought filled her head, “Why Xion? She was in Organization XIII. She even looks just like me! What does she have that I don’t?! A figure appeared in Kairi’s window. “You really want to know?†the figure said, summoning a Keyblade, “First, I have a Keyblade, just like him. Second, I’m still alive.†“What? No!†Kairi said. “Oh, yes. I’m getting you out of the way once and for all. Then I’ll have Sora to myself. For richer or poorer, for better or worse, in sickness and in health. It’s almost time. See, we’re connected you and me. Tell me, what’s tomorrow?†Xion said. Taken aback by this, Kairi quickly answered, “My birthday, but I don’t see why-“ “Bingo!†Xion said, cutting Kairi off, “If I kill you at midnight tonight, I inherit your heart. Oh, would you look at the time? 11:59, almost midnight.†Seconds ticked away on Kairi’s analog clock. Time she could use to run, to defend herself. Thoughts raced through here head on what to do next. Finally, she spotted her Thallassa Shell charm hanging on a shelf in her room. Remembering how Sora was able to use it as ea Keychain for his Keyblade, she dove for it in hopes that she could do the same. Sure enough, a white Keyblade with a pointed head and double body appeared in a flash of light, binding itself to her being as it did so. “Just try,†Kairi said as the hand on her clock ticked past the thirty-second mark, “Sora will still know that I was killed. He’d never marry you then.†“Oh, you underestimate me. How will he know that I killed you,†Xion said, “if it looks like suicide?†Fifteen seconds left. Kairi looked Xion in the eye and said, “No. You can’t. It’s not possible!†Midnight. Xion opened a dark portal and said, “Come Kairi. Let’s finish this where time will not interfere.†Kairi ran through the portal after Xion. Only milliseconds later did Kairi run out the other side of the portal onto a stained glass floor with an image of Xion in it. “Come on out Xion!†she cried out, “I’m not afraid of you!†“Oh, you will be,†Xion’s voice answered, “In this place, I’m at my most powerful. Here, anything that I can imagine becomes real. For example,†Kairi’s shadow peeled off of the floor, gaining depth. Kairi quickly slashed at it, causing it to melt into the lump of darkness that it really was. “You can’t beat me Xion! You know it’s true!†Kairi yelled at the top of her lungs. Just then, Xion appeared out of a dark portal. “Oh, I doubt that,†Xion said. She snapped her fingers. Two Creeper Nobodies appeared. Then four more. Eight. Sixteen. Their numbers continued to double, and Kairi could only watch in awe as they linked together to form a dragon underneath Xion. “Face it,†Xion said, “I’m better than you. Just give up and maybe I’ll spare you and just take your heart, leaving an empty shell like me. Oh right, I forgot. Your heart is pure light! You can’t become a Nobody! You’ll just become an Unbirth.†The dragon stepped closer. “Unbirth?†Kairi inquired, “What’s that?†Xion was quite frustrated by now. She said, “You don’t even know?! An Unbirth is the exact OPPOSITE of a person. You might want to take note of this, I would have become an Unbirth if it weren’t for Xehanort.†Xion’s voice echoed throughout the darkness. “Wait,†Kairi said, “what does Xehanort have to do with this?†“I used to be a beautiful young woman named Aqua. That was about ten years ago. I fought against the Unbirths, long before there was the distinction between Heartless and Nobodies. No, before there even were Heartless or Nobodies. My friends, Terra and Ven, were good ones. Then, Maleficent came into our lives, offering Terra power, threatening my life. I thought I had killed her, but then she came back. But she left us alone. So we thoght she had changed. But we were wrong. At this point, it would be easier for you to understand if you see it for your self.†Xion clicked her fingers. The floor shattered. The dragon disappeared into this realm’s equivalent to air. Kairi and Xion fell, as Xion broke into laughter at this, disappearing into the shadows.
Hmm... Not bad. One little eensy weensy thing though --- double line break. Those one space things drive me crazy! And two --- would this be a prologue? If not, maybe you should make it one, put some more story behind this particular part so we know what's going on. Other than that, I say you're good to go.
1. Thanks for being the first to reply to my story. 2. Originally, this was going to be a one-shot, ending where Kairi runs into the portal, then a full fanfic, then an interlude to a fanfic, then a prologue, and it finally came out as a oneshot again. So, yeah. My creative process is very complicated. Lol. 3. What's a double line break? 4. I may or may not put more story behind the SoraxXion part. That might come towards the end if I decide to make more chapters.
Wow, this totally makes me hate Xion! The writing wasn't bad, but as Forever Love said, use double line break. What is that, you ask? It's putting one blank line between paragraph. Like this. It makes the story much easier to read for most (if not all) people. But I'm guessing that since it's been two-three monthes since your first post, you're not continuing the story. Still, for future reference, you probably want to split your paragraphs like that. (If you ever write anthing else) =D
I have been trying to add to the story, but every time I finish a chapter, I forget to save it. Anyway, if I do update, the chapter order will go like this. Main Story: Sora tries to figure out how to make it up to Kairi. Interlude 1: Kairi's Vision of the Past Main Story: Sora preparing for the wedding. (Xiora for ever!) Interlude 2: Kairi's Vision of the Past Continues. And so on. Tell me if you like my plan. If you don't, PM me with ideas.
I really hate the way you made xion so evil how could you? she's misunderstood you actually made me hate kairi sorry to say i dont like it
Well, I didn't mean to make Xion evil. Just the antagonist. Don't worry, if I get around to the other chapters you'll get an explanation if why she seems evil. BTW, how'd you find this? It's over four months old.
