Traditional Art Kairi and Namine drawing

Well I drew this today, and I think I did a pretty good job...feedback please? I know the color isn't very good, but at this time my only rescources are colored pencils. Thanks!

http://kairiheartprincess.deviantart.com/art/Kairi-and-Namine-145651278

 

It's a cute idea for a drawing, and I can see you made a good attempt at it. Question- what did you use to color this in? I know you said pencils, but...o.O When zoomed in you can see how scratchy the texture is, like you used crayons. You even went out of the lines a few times, so maybe accuracy with coloring is the next step for you.

Kairi/Namine is also shorter than you've drawn her here, her limbs especially seem extremely long. I giggled when I saw her facial expression, it looks..odd. She's standing on an angle so take that into consideration when drawing her face.

Apart from that, can we keep spam down in here guys? If you want to chat, we have VMs and private messaging here.

 

Thanks for the critique, I use colored pencils for all my artwork simply because I don't have any other materials.

 

I really like the idea (:

And don't you just hate it when the colored pencils do that after scanning? Trust me, it's a total bummer. Happens to me most of the time, that's why I haven't done much colored drawings.

But anyway, like mentioned I really like your idea. I read the description when you mentioned she was fading. I would have liked to see some blend with the color - like her hair, to make her look more... fading-y. Just a suggestion.

Oh! but I have to give you credit for her shoes and body actually. It looks great, a little work on the hands to give her more detail but it came out really good. Especially her shoes, God, I can't even draw them right. EVER. A little more shape to the keyblade next time, maybe? Cause they kind of look a wee bit flat. Just the Kingdom Key actually, the yellow part of it.

You did a great job though, I personally like it.
Great idea (once again) and it's really cute
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Thanks very much you guys, I agree that it needs some facial work X3. I'm going to attempt to redraw it eventually.