So I want to make a set of Gfx based around K-ON. I already made Mio's, and I'm doing one of Yui soon =) if anyone has cnc on this, lemme know, k?
It's actually better than some past stuff you've done. And I think it serves it's purpose. I'm not loving the...Abusive Pencil text. It's not meant to be appreciated in such a small size, plus the text is too close to the white border, and they don't seem to match. Overall, decent. It's definitely a step up. You still seem somewhat shy regarding what you can do, and still rooted on something specific, it's best if you check some tuts for other things you can do.
I like the added light source. The biggest thing for me here is the text. It's much too flashy and it confuses the focal point if that makes sense.
It could use a little work, as in the text is too close to the border, and the effect on it makes it hard to read, but the rest of the image came together realy well, you could have positioned the person better, but other then that it was great.
