Justa poem I wrote

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  1. sorarulz Traverse Town Homebody

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    This may be a poem, but I don't know...

    Maybe I like being me, maybe I like being imperfect, and not following what everyone else is doing.
    Maybe, I like being boyish, and not girly like most girls.
    Maybe, I like wearing black in the middle of summer, and tank tops in winter.
    Maybe I like my clothes, even if they went out of style 2 or 3 years ago.
    Maybe, just maybe, I like my life, and like being what I am.
    Maybe, I’m just diffrent, and I like that.


    It really describes me, and i like it alot.. maybe I can submit it in a poem contest somewhere... hm...
     
  2. Shuhbooty moon child

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    Oh wow, I like this short poem! :3

    It's speaks alot about you. Like it's got a certain feeling to it, a good feel. x3

    (Feels like it talks about me too . . )
     
  3. Advent 【DRAGON BALLSY】

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    That's really nice; short but fairly deep. Good poem!
     
  4. sorarulz Traverse Town Homebody

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    Thanks, I'm not really good about writing poems, I more of a story writer, but I could actually relate to this. It got easier when I started out with; "May be I like being me, maybe I like being imperfect, and not following what everyone else is doing. Maybe, I like being me, and not someone else." On my Myspace. It then grew a little in a blog I posted, and then I added some more, like the winter and summer thing, and being boyish. It was fairly easy, becuz I actually do wear black in the middle of summer.
     
  5. Destined Working for WDW

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    I like the descriptions you've used and as long as you stay true to yourself, then no matter if you write poetry or stories, you will be happy.

    Only comments i'd make are you misspelled different, and the color font...maybe i just like everything to be a uniformed single color, but the line in yellow could be possibly different, but it's entirely up to you.

    Great poem.
     
  6. Sumi suicidé

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    ttly shweet dude!