Hello everyone! This is the first poem I'll be posting, enjoy. By the way, please comment if I need improvements or if you like it. Just Remember The distance overwhelms the both of us now You want to see the world, but you don’t know how You can travel by car or take the last flight Just don’t forget to call me tonight Your only worry is where to go While behind four walls, time moves so slow Sitting by the corner, waiting all alone Just don’t forget that I’m waiting back home You call me one day, you keep rambling on About cultures, histories and times long gone You say you love to travel, you say you love it there Just don’t forget I’m still saying a prayer When you finally come back, you’ve already seen the world Though I’d love to listen, I still want to be heard I’m glad that you’re happy, but before you go Just don’t forget I still love you so
Wow, This is so beautiful its sheer simplicity is a beauty in itself. Its such a simple poem, but I think it depicted so much. I enjoyed the small moment I read it. Just goes to show, there's no need for fancy wording to make a heartwarming poem.
