Digital Art Just a normal kid

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Boy Wonder, Sep 11, 2009.

  1. Boy Wonder Dark Phoenix in Training

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    I'm still disappointed with the text.
    Tried making it a lighter blue, didn't like it.
    Tried making it a dark red to match the background, it came out weird.
    So I left it as is.
    According to some words of wisdom, "If in doubt, go white."
    I'll use that next time lol
    Still experimenting with renders.
    Thanks to Shade Tail for the original background.




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  2. Misty gimme kiss

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    Well first of all the border is a bit... ugly. I'm not big on two-toned borders, especially ones that look like that. They're often used by people who are new to graphics, too, heh. The rule of thirds is something you should learn; I have a tutorial for it here. Not only is the stock not placed according to it, but it's separated from the main effects, leaving the eye wondering where the focal point should be. I like the red effects a lot too, and the render duplication isn't as cringe-worthy as they usually are.

    The color editing on the render is nice too, but the render itself is a bit low quality. Text isn't great, but it's better than before. Try to put some small effects over it to blend it a bit more, and always try white! It usually works nicely for me.

    You're improving. c: