I don't know if this should be considered a poem or a short story... I just needed to write SOMETHING. Take it as you wish and move it as you please. ~~~ Once upon a time, In a land far away Jack and Diane used to play They’d bask in the warm, sunny weather And just chill together Wasting away their days But you see the boy was a fighter And along came spider And scared the girl away Alas she’d come back Stay for awhile But always in time for the new attack They went up the hill And down the hill Like a damn roller coaster Until it pushed her closer and closer In order to mess with his brain She first had to learn the game Once, Twice, Thrice times a lady. She came back Now on her own attack To her surprise The boy had tears in his eyes He was confused She felt used Never meaning to abuse But she lit the fuse I guess I lose Then she wrote a little ditty about Jack and Diane One. Two. Three strikes. I'm out. But some say life goes on.
I really liked this. Not only was it easy to read,but it wasn't dark and mysterious like some poems I've read. I liked how it's a short story but in a poem form, I enjoyed it. Now write more C:
Hah, it was amusing to read especially since you threw in random lyrics. Extremely disjointed, I guess you don't enjoy being formal at all. Reading it, it almost feels like you're ranting to somebody.
