Is this story woth making?

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  1. sora awsome11/10 Traverse Town Homebody

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    I'm making a story with Xion,Namine,Roxas,Sora,Kairi,Riku And some new ppl.
    It about what happend IN Sora dreams while Namine was trying to put back his memories.
    So in the story he see's Kairi Riku Xion Roxas and new characters in the story i made.
    Sora is the same but a lill mean at time to time in the story.While Sora is sleeping Namine try to see if she can make Sora know Ventus,Aqua and Terra.But she failed cuz of Diz.
    Diz does not want Sora to know them just yet.Anyways.Sora met new ppl.
    He mets a girl name,Bell,Lost.She not to sweet.Nor to mean.She not to fat,Nor to skiny.She just right.She makes fun of the ppl she cares for.But go's a lill to far some times.
    Then we have Lee and Leo(The Twins)Sweet,Kind,Hot,Never lie,Try not to have a crush on Bell.
    Last we have,Hope(Nick name is Hopeless).He never back down from a fight.But always lose the fights,He the only one who would stay up.But he would always ending up falling.
    As for Sora.He still the same.Same hair.Same smile.Same Keyblade.Yep still hotie Sora :)
    The story takes place in Hollow bastion,New life,And ouran(Very lill of Ouran)
    Xion will be in Sora dreams,Sora will fall for Xion in the dream.But this is his dream.So not real.
    As Sora memories come in.Sora will not know who any of the ppl he met are.Like this.
    Say Sora has 4 cookies.And i gave him a cake.That one cake means he lose 1 cookie.
    But if i give him 5 cakes.And lose ALL His cookies.I'm not good at math.lol
    Sooooooo.Do you guys think this story is woth making Or should i just del it?
     
  2. Loxare Hollow Bastion Committee

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    the premise is interesting, and i personally would like to read it. id also like to know where these new people came from. his imagination? however id like to ask: are you able to write that story as well as keep up with the other ones you have posted? you dont seem to be stopping those any time soon. i know what its like to be juggling many stories at the same time, and frankly, it gets a bit confusing. but if youre fine with it, go ahead.
     
  3. Namin3 Destiny Islands Resident

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    Well, i say the words cake and cookie and i think you should write the story!
     
  4. sora awsome11/10 Traverse Town Homebody

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    I'm sure i can do all 3 of my storys and that Kiss me story is taking forever>...> my brother del it from the notepad so now i have to make it up but i'm sure i can do it! :)
     
  5. Amaury Chaser

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    I like how every paragraph gives in-depth detail, so I would say to definitely go for it.

    Remember! The best way to improve is by continuously writing stories.