Traditional Art InZane

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Xephos, Oct 26, 2008.

  1. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    The only thing is that his head is a little too narrow. Everything else is perfect.
     
  3. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Ah. Thank you! ^^
     
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    Where's he standing? It's kinda like he's floating in midair over the ground with only the toes of his shoes on the ground. If you're going to angle it be consistent. The right arm looks misshapen, like a birth defect or a horrendous accident. His upper body is too big and his legs are too short. No one is proportioned with llike that, well midgets, or little people, or whatever they call themselves are but he is not one of them. His face is flat and lacks dimension and his head is too long. It may look fine but these are all problem with the structure of your drawing.
     
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    Ah. THank you. :3
     
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    i love it! =]
    nice shading :)
    n i changed the link to my sketches u said u cannot see .. go check em out! =D​
     
  7. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    THanks! ^^ I'm gonna get the better version up soon.

    I saw them. Nice job! ^^