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Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Laplace, Dec 3, 2008.

  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    First tag in a month or two, trying to get a hang of it again XD.

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  2. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    You expect Cnc these days???!?!! xD Awesome colors and flow V2 is much better, focal is more clear and it has better flow. GOOD JOB!!
     
  3. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    Both are about the same in the rating, but I really don't like either of them that much. Sorry, but the colors are too light so you can't tell who the the person is or what they are doing. The text is also nearly impossibe to read. 7/10 because I can tell you worked hard on it.
     
  4. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Not that much lol. And thanks.
    I didn´t want text to be that much readable XD, and I can see the stock very clearly o.o.

    Still, thanks <:.
     
  5. T A F F Y シ Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Well i think they're both beautiful ^^
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  6. Defame King's Apprentice

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    I like it. 8/10
    Who's the person you used in your sig?
     
  7. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Ooooh. O.O Pretty colors. ^^ *purrs* Nice job! :3
     
  8. Virtuoso Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Nice sig. I'm a sucker for tags that have colors that correspond and flow.

    The sprite is nice and goes with the flow of the bg but I rather prefer the first one since the pentool lines on the left are kinda distracting....

    and I can't read the text, what does it say? xD
     
  9. Bareri-San 私はポテトだ。

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    they're pretty good. I like the second one because the lines near the stock make it look like it has a lot more flow than the first one. Good job! ^-^​
     
  10. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    I'm really loving the gradients and the way they flow together and the blending you have with them. It has the same colors of a sunset. Although, the render may need sharpening and the text needs to be more readable. Even if you were aiming for the "unreadable" type of text, don't make it like this; try other styles. Anyways, this is a rediculously awesome tag.

    Keep up the good work and, please, make more tags. I miss seeing your work in this section. xD
     
  11. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Maybe they do, but I had the feeling it needed more FG there >:.

    And it says .Overflow, inverted XD.


    Tried sharpening, but the stock looked choppy xD, so I only sharpened the face in the second.

    Anyways, thanks, and maybe will do <.<.
     
  12. bttp9999 Destiny Islands Resident

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    Typography is horrible, get rid of it. Secondly, I can't even tell what the stock is. third, why is the transition between the warm/cool colours so sudden? God damn.