Okay a little something I drawed not to long ago. It's okay, I should be drawing more often. I did not like her hair so well. But the rest I don't think is that bad. It's from the manga books. I wan't to dedicate it to my dear fairy : StupidAquarius!<3 It's Inoue Orihime from Bleach, CnC ? : Press here
Aww Elfy! <3 LOL that chick has big boobs. Did you inflate them or are they supposed to be like that? xD This's a REALLY good drawing for your stage! It's MUCH better compared to the other one (; The left eye looks slightly bigger than the right one though. The hair is way nice compared to the shirt. Coloring on the shirt and the belt is a little choppy, how did you go about coloring it?! Keep it up! <3
No she really have boobs like that xD In the anime to x3 Thank you n_n you think so ? I appriciate it :3 Yes I have been mocking myself for that I did it like 20 times D: Thanks n_n yeah I know the detalis were bad from the beggining so it turned out bad. I just used the paintbucket,the eraser and the magicwand xD Yeah and some blends on the flower ;3. I will try<3
Thank you I will try keeping it up n_n I am better on CnC to other drawing I mostly don't like my own D:. I hate the way her hair turned out xD
You think Orihime's are huge? you should see what other Soul Reapers are like... they look like pr0n stars. overall nice, considering the most i could do is sprite stuff...
Okay, I'm going to be ciritical here and completely disagree with everyone who's already posted...I don't feel like going into great detail about the anatomy problems, but since my tablet is being ******ed right now I can't examplify it for you with any sort redline corrections. First, Stolen pose is stolen. I've seen this picture before, and quite frankly it doesn't meet up to the original one. When you notice her waist is nearly as thin as her neck, you know there are some problems. D: Her organs cannot possible all fit in there, and I know anime style is exaggerated, but not this much. Besides her bust, she lacks normal curves that one would see. It's very triangular almost, making it seem bony and lacking of correct proportions. Note that her outstretched arm is significantly shorter than the rested one. The hair looks matted and teased...not really like hair at all. I'd put the effort into making round flows, because as of now they are horribly jagged. Spend time on individual strands of four or five pieces of hair, for a more natural feel. Her eyes are definitely not symmetrical, and one seems to be somewhat lopsided. Her mouth is just weird. >.>;;; You make the picture seem especially amateur in the way that you conveniently cut off her arms to a point at which you don't see her hands. I'm assuming this is on purpose due to the fact that you lack the ability to draw hands very well, but it's still better to draw them than to wuss out. Personally, I would completely start over because at my standards it's not really rescuable. <:3 Edited, because multiple people have agreed it would be a wise choice ((((((^-^; ). Upon exploring these parts of the forum more I've realized how few the number of people that actually draw is here. Most of the threads I see are just premade images manipulated with Photoshop or Painter. So while I didn't notice this before, I think it's rather admirable to be one of the only people here who actually draws there own stuff. It annoys me to no end when people think they have such artistic talent, yet they themselves use other artists work as the centerpiece of their own art. Cheap D:
hahah xD Thank you. You think so ? thanks n_n The colours on her shirt is for the french flag ;D Errrr... do you have a problem with me trying out ? seems so. First the pose is not stolen. It's from the manga and everyone that have read bleach manga would understand that pretty fast. so it's just a tryout from the manga. I'll post that on the top now. Have you ever watched bleach ?? it doesn't seem like it because then you would know what Orihime looked like. I know about the arms but I don't think they look that bad so I let them be (I have fixed it on the original). As I already said I don't like the hair myself, it's much nicer with out the colouring. She is supposed to be looking to a side , and I have said that before to and StupidAquarius have said it. Whut ?! I have said it before, it's a tryout from the manga. She isn't supposed to have anything more than from the manga pic! jeez, you can't make up fake conclusions just because MY picture isn't the way you wanted it to be! How the **** do you know if it is resuable or not! I am the artist I don't think it is that bad at all, I get good comments on it until you show up, and since I AM the artist I can fix on it and decide about it is resuable or not! that is not up to you in any way. That's just advertising your work, it doesn't give me an idea at all. If you wanted to give me a protion look of what Orihime look like , you should've drawn her like a teenager. Not like a child. Besides your drawing is nearly a chibi because of her eyes and stuff like that. The 'real' Orihime would have 'real' eyes. And I think you should work on her butt .(No offence at all.) And if you wanted to give me an idea you should have pm'ed me not advertised your work in my tread. You know many people draw good, and colour their work on their comp. That's one of the reasons I have a comp. And how can you be sure they have manipulated them so much ? you weren't there when they drawed it ,so how wold you know? And I coloured my drawing in photoshop for my 2 time or something just to try it out. - I edited because I misunderstood and was angry XD-
I agree with K a i r i, everyone has their own style of art and should be able to show it on the forum weither its a Fanart or just a random piece of paper with a small Chibi on it. Alice, i think you are slightly begining to Harrass aswell because saying her work is 'Cheap' is something i dont think anyone on this forum would do on a CnC board, it might be 'Comment n Critism' but thats Constructive Critism, not openly saying her works bad in your Opinion then trying to show off your work in her board. *At K a i r i, i Personaly like it, the flowers a Very nice touch and the expression on her face is quite convincing. Your quite good.
Wow, thanks for the support Hazzie<3 I appriciated that. Thank you so much, teh flower is just a little item there because the text says 'ichirin no hana' which means something like 'lonely flower' or something. You liked the expression ? that was unexpected n_n everyone had nagged about her eye (myself included) so I did not think anyone would like it ( it SUCKS). Thank you<3 Thanks again, I try and I am only in training<3
Alright, people, calm down. Don't make me summon the big guns. Alice, please find some actual evidence that K a i r i is stealing another artist's art. There is a reason why it is called 'fanart' so please how to debate and make a statement before making such a remark. Btw, if you want to promote your art/drawings, do it in your own topic. K a i r i , I can understand that you are upset but calm down. If this is going to result in a flame war because of some pretty serious accusations then the staff will have to do something about it. Do I make myself clear? *glares*
I already know, I wouldn't flame I just had to say that. She doesn't have any because I MADE IT D: I can take a pic from it in my room if you need more evidence than that. But like I have said before the original idea is from the manga. Sure *calmed down. No this will not result in a flamewar. - Edit by K a i r i- Yes , ma'm <3 Ops, I mean sir <3*don't glare me!*<3
Oh lawd, maybe I should have expected this. :| Okay, first of all, I never said anything about YOUR artwork being cheap. Please reread my post and you'll see I was actually saying I ADMIRED your work for being one of the few on here that aren't shopped sigs. *sigh* Secondly, I think you are taking this way too seriously. If you didn't want CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM you should have made that clear in your post. Obviously, you came here waiting for people to say "Oh that's so moe, she looks really nice!" And that's fine, but I would have appreciated it if you told me that beforehand. Sorry, but being a frequent poster on 4chan's /ic/ and the MT art forums, I'm used to people with a little tougher skin. Also, I'm not advertising. :| As I told you, my tablet is currently not functioning properly, therefore not adequate to make redline examples. BTW I'm aware that character is a loli, but I didn't say "Here make sure to compare the EYES" I suggested that you see the waist and arm proportioning. I don't watch Bleach, but I've seen more than enough screencaps to know what the character looks like. She definitely does not have triangular arms as you're implying. I don't care to get into inane intarweb arguments like such, but you do have to realize that in no way did I harass you. It's called a social shell. I'm sorry that I'm going to interpret your work seriously, unlike many others would on this forum. I only said such because I assume you want to improve. Perhaps not. :| lol, wut?
If that's your intetion I think you should have typed it better, I see that I wasn't the only one that misunderstood it.. Thanks for it if that's what you meant (: -Blarg! edited by K a i r i herself since she was so immature D:- It is advertinsing here at this forum when you post your work in other peoples treads >.> As I already told you I know about the arms. -Edit nr 2 by K a i r i- Hmh ,just look at the manga cover on book 3 and you will she that she actually have a very similar waist. I might have overdone it a tiny bit but not as you are saying. I know about the arms I have said it multiple times. It is harrasing the things you said like : the pose is stolen, she definitely not looks like that, you don't have thick enough skin,I bet you left out the hands because you can't make them,the pic is not rescuable, ... That's more than enough to harass. And no I don't have thin skin just so you know I id had that I wouldn't respond like I do. I have to be allowed making it more personal. IT'S NOT STOLEN, I have said it multiple times , it's from the manga ! it is supposed to be a remake , not a new individual IT IS A REMAKE. I am not going to take this any further. Please stop posting here if you don't intend to come with proper comments with good reasons. Which also means I am breaking this discussion up. I hope you take my advice and do the same (not wanting to flame). I hope this isn't offending. We have to listen to what DK said.
When I said I assumed that you left te hands out of the picture because you can't draw them well I didn't say "OMGLOL I BET YOU LEFT THE HANDS OUT CUZ YOU SUCCK AMIRITE GAIZ?!1" I said it because I merely thought that you were avoiding them, since usually when I cut that part of a picture out it's because I can't get the hand right. . I wasn't trying to be insulting. I apologize if you took it in such a way~ And when I say 'stolen' I don't mean to degrade you, because obviously a lot of people use the anatomy of another picture as reference for drawings, but I simply wanted you to know that it is better to create your own pose since I know I can look at a reference and draw almost twice as good as I can with just my mind and hand. A lot of famous artists us references for paintings, but I see that in a much different way than when I draw in anime style, since realism tends to be much more difficult. -and it's not offending at all. It would be pretty hypocritical of me to mention 'tougher skin' and then try to whine about you being mean, no? (￣▽￣)ノ
And remember I am still learning and training. Edit: I took it the wrong way sorry and thanks for the appology. And yes it's breaken up now. - Post edited for K a i r i's idiocy-
Whoa.... ...I *can't* believe you just said that. Seriously. Your rant as it was was tolerable to an extent (since it was a critic), but the f-cking end just fueled my fire. How the hell could you say that! Who the f-ck do you think you are?! What drives me up the wall is the way you don't consider the fact that a lot of the people here are growing drawers. LIKE KAIRI. She's still learning! And in an attempt to learn and improve, it is ENCOURAGED to copy, believe it or not. :/ It's a very normal way to start off drawing - I did, Kairi's doing it, and I can very well guess YOU did it. I seriously feel you're giving yourself a very bad, egocentric first impression miss. Calling yourself the only girl who 'actually draws their own stuff' was totally unnecessary and *really* unfair for those who are still trying to improve their drawing skills. What d'ya want, a bone? As an artist myself, I feel so annoyed about what you just said and I get the impression you look at others from an above-like, snobbish view. :/
WOW, thanks a bunch it's appriciated and I could not have been more agreeing with you. You are totally right <3 ( pwnage!) Thanks for the support and critique Fairy<3 *Breaks argument up* anyone got some other CnC? END EDIT BY K a i r i : Speaking of everything in this whole tread. I had an immature view at it and was pretty mad at times. Though some comments were a little harsh. I feel pretty stupid about this whole matter so pretty much I am trying to forget it all. It was just stupid ~~
