In Love With You

You tell me I'm beautiful
in every way
like a delicate flower
in the middle of Spring

You embrace me in
Your gentle hug
and my eyes
meet yours

Gently pulling me closer
our faces become nearer
until our lips finally meet
in a kiss

Instantly my heart
shot up
and a smile crossed my lips
I'm so happy to be with you
and I know we will be
Together Forever
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another poem I wrote in class... enjoy! ;D​

 

Somehow it cheered me up a little, and I like it ^^.

 

*claps* bravo!!! You are a really good poet!

 

Thanks! XD Glad to see it cheered you up... :P

 

Wow, this is good...great job! I loved it, honey! :glomp:

 

Good job! DestinyStar, you just keep on cranking out the amazing poems.

I <3 you.

Nicely done.
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Thanks guys! I think I'll go write another one... O.o

 

Lovely!!! I love cheerfull poems because they make me smile. You indeed did.

Amazing <3

 

thanks! XD XD

 

amazing u r a really good poet

 

Good length.....good free verse.....good atmosphere....I liked it.....your a great poet.....continue to write great poems like your capable of Destiny.....

 

I LOVE IT! It reminds me of Garxena and Silax! ^.^

 

hehe... it reminds me of Zeke and Anna from Shaman King... O.o