I am still not good with graphics, especially text, but needed this for Digital Design class. Just wish my teacher knew what she was talking about... Cnc, advice? Mainly on text? Edit: On a different screen now then when I made it...It's like...really bright, isn't it?
Good idea with the text; execution not so much. Work with it and make sure that it's very readable and also blended(in this case). Contrast on the stock poor, but you know this so I'll assume it's there for style. If that's the case, then why not also make the lighter parts of the tag very bright as well...? The stock is also very lost in the background. Always try to make your stock the foreground(In a tag I mean. For other works, like a poster or something, you may do what is best for the piece but in a tag it's a good idea to keep to some guidelines). Keep at it :]
The text is fine but annoying since the color scheme is so plain and it almost totally blends into the background. Other than that, it's about average...
I think you should either try to add a little more color, or make the background a little more interesting. That color alone almost makes me feel like I'm watching a clip from a black and white movie.
The colours a bit...washed out looking,and the text is kinda to faded... But the overall effect is pretty good.
