This has a very 2008 feel to it haha. From what I've seen of your tags, one thing has stuck out: The compo. This is a very hard thing to learn, but there are tricks to make it easier such as being boring and making every tag you have use "flow". Other than identifying the problem, I have to say I cannot help you very much in the department of actually fixing it. Just try and make sure your stock is more of the focal and make sure your effects don't get in the way of this. There's more to it than that but try that and you'll be on the right track.
