I've crossed the ultimate line of nerdiness. I wrote a poem about a video game, none the less one about Star Wars. xD Anyhoo, as some of you may know, Knights of the Old Republic is one of my favorite games ever and I wrote this poem in the perspective of the character Bastilla talking to the main character, Revan. (Whoops, I shouldn't have said that.) [There may be some spoilers. Not really.] I can't find the right words to say; Going against my morals... I'm not supposed to feel this way. I can't deny these feelings for you, but I still can't force myself to say adieu. The moment we shouldn't have shared was when I discovered you really cared. Your will is much stronger than my own; So why am I still given the title of teacher? I've gone against all the things I've ever known. You've saved me from my plunge into temptation, You've given me salvation. Everything he told me was untrue, And now, nothing could make me feel safer then to be loved by you.
You need to have more selfesteem... Though I do not blame you, for I though my writting sucked until people told me to write more :\
Yeah, same with me. except, no one told me to write. i gave up because of cramps. But doesn't mean you should give up! You rock at fanfics!