im making a story! i showed it 2 my friend she said it could b a book!

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  1. khcrazy101 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    its true i showed it to two of my friends and they said it could b a book! i didnt write the whole thing but im getting there..... i showed my best friend and she hated it! my best friend dissed me! she said shes gonna write a story 10 times better than mine! i read wat she wrote so far and heres the introduction.....

    " i woke up. i got out of bed. went to the bathroom, then brushed my teeth..."


    do u think thats a good story! i dont its horrible! if u want i can post my story if some ppl want 2 read it
     
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    O_O Wow, that's um....really...well, it's something?
     
  3. Sorax SPAAAAAAACCCCCEEEEEEEEEE is a triumph.

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    If you mean good by "That introduction is awesome" then no
     
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    9/10!!! GOOD STORY but you need more edge
     
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    VERY no. INCREDIBY no, even.
     
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    that could be a book...if it had actors food and lights camera action!
     
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    *whispers*
    Don't forget the editing. The edititng is VERY crucial.
     
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    trueness *reps*
     
  9. khcrazy101 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    UM....DO U PPL GET IT! I DIDNT POST MY STORY YET! THAT WAS MY FRIENDS STORY! SHE SUCKS AT WRITING!

    i hav nothin better ta do so i might as well post wat i hav so far....but im warning u, its based on a dream i had after watching inuyasha! so inuyasha will b in it!
     
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