im making a story! i showed it 2 my friend she said it could b a book!

its true i showed it to two of my friends and they said it could b a book! i didnt write the whole thing but im getting there..... i showed my best friend and she hated it! my best friend dissed me! she said shes gonna write a story 10 times better than mine! i read wat she wrote so far and heres the introduction.....

" i woke up. i got out of bed. went to the bathroom, then brushed my teeth..."


do u think thats a good story! i dont its horrible! if u want i can post my story if some ppl want 2 read it

 

O_O Wow, that's um....really...well, it's something?

 

If you mean good by "That introduction is awesome" then no

 

9/10!!! GOOD STORY but you need more edge

 

VERY no. INCREDIBY no, even.

 

that could be a book...if it had actors food and lights camera action!

 

*whispers*
Don't forget the editing. The edititng is VERY crucial.

 

trueness *reps*

 

UM....DO U PPL GET IT! I DIDNT POST MY STORY YET! THAT WAS MY FRIENDS STORY! SHE SUCKS AT WRITING!

i hav nothin better ta do so i might as well post wat i hav so far....but im warning u, its based on a dream i had after watching inuyasha! so inuyasha will b in it!