Digital Art I'm Back

and here you go, CnC

and i cant really edit it, because to do this i had to flatten, and GIMP only lets me undo so far

 

It looks great, but a little too far on the fluffy side.

And I think you should dim the background a little.

I think its a great job, though.​

 

It's very cool but it's too orange i think it should be a little more red​

 

new one

 

The new one is awesome nicely done xD​

 

Contrast + Brightness. Tone them waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay down. The light is making the tag look like a colorful shirt put into spin cycle with a cup full of bleach on it.

Enough with the terrible jokes though. XD This could be better if you use the right effects and flow. Use the \ direction as your flow, and try to create some depth to your flow, c4d's would help a lot for that. And please, get rid of the all-encompassing light BEFORE you do anything else. :P

Also, this applies to the newer version as well. In fact it looks more monotone now than it did before. Though I like the color so...

 

Color looks great, it matches spiderman...

I'm not sure about the text though... Try placing it somewhere else...

Aside from that, you're quite the talented tag maker!!​

 

alright i have 2 new ones

 

You're improving =]

@ two new ones
v1 - Ew. Please, if you're going to put some part in back in white, do it on the whole thing
v2 - That's better, but there isn't enough dark and light spots in this one, lighting i important. Stock needs to be a bit redder and sharpened a bit.

I'd like to see text.

 

i knew i forgot to do something, i will fix that and edit my post, friday i can't work on it anymore, i am gonna be on a different comp
so much editing

 

Much better on v3. Also, I'd suggest sharpening the edges of the brush shapes you used to make the masks. Just a bit though.

I'd leave it textless, personally. I don't know how it might turn out if you put text on it. Doesn't really need it imo, either. Though if you do, I'd look best on the right side of spider man toward the lower portion of the tag.

 

Sharper Masks, and no text

 

Sorry, I didn't mean sharpen the image used inside the masks. I meant sharpen the actual shapes. lol

My mistake.

 

i will get that done tommorow if i can

 

Every time I look at the tag, it gets better by the minute!!

^^ Great job so far! Keep up the good work!​

 

thanks, and nobody else ask for any changes i cannot change it anymore, because i am going to update my GIMP to 2.4.6 or 2.5.1 if i can find the download

 

See, that's what you get from listening to CnC!
It looks like secks right now XD
Very good job making everything go to the focal point.