Illusion -Script- [KHV Members]

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Jayn, Jan 26, 2010.

  1. Magick ~Meaner then my demons~

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    Glad I was myself, for however short a time <3

    Good work.
     
  2. Jayn

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    XD Thank you.

    I'm gladdd. And don't worry, in a little while, your character becomes one of the more leading ones. You'll see~

    Thank you, dear~ And I don't think you'd die. xD You're tough. RAWR.
    Bwahaha, you shall see. c:


    You come back. xD It's alright.
    Thank you! ^^

    Updated~​


    Thank you!
    And someday, you won't walk away from him. c:
     
  3. Arch Mana Knight

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    Ohhh. That was nice. A death! 8D Really...the script format is working wonderfully for you. I dunno why but it's very...detailed and easy to picture. Maybe simplicity is the key. There's not much to say other than that small correction I pointed out earlier. I read through it rather fast and enjoyed it. :glomp:
     
  4. Aura Goddess

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    That was a bit sad. What was Albert going to say? Then again, I already have a feeling what it is.
    My mom always told me that when I was little. It never helped, to be honest. >>

    I'm assuming that should be "V" instead of "J", right?

    I liked it though. Ending was "aw" worthy, well to me, but it was good and interesting. Can't wait to read more.
     
  5. Janime6 the truest queen of them all

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    That was the best read so far, to me. <3

    Keep goingggg.

    I'm become more epic than I ever imagined now. Now I need to wait until you reveal that I'm the ultimate evil and blow up the house with my super charged mega blast--I mean, save everyone. :3

    But seriously, I really liked this scene. 8D​