If only you would love me, too.

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Xaale, Feb 22, 2009.

  1. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    I don't know what I would do
    If my life was without you
    You make my day,
    You lift my heart,
    If only you would love me, too.

    I wait for the day to come,
    To tell you that you're the only one
    Until that day,
    I hide my heart,
    If only you would love me, too.

    When the wave of depression left,
    A time that seems so hard to get,
    It was that day,
    I showed my heart,
    If only you would love me, too.

    I never knew the term "Broken Heart",
    Really felt exactly like that,
    I hate that day,
    It broke my heart,
    If only you would love me, too.

    Are you really taken, sir,
    When we talk it does occur,
    I feel the day,
    It heals the heart,
    If only you would love me, too.

    My time of joy is a wonder,
    Soon they'll be back under,
    It drowned those days,
    It saddens my heart,
    If only you would love me, too.

    You didn't even say goodbye,
    If only you would love me, too.
     
  2. Juicy Chaser

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    awwww Xaale <33

    This is really sweet, not to mention written lovely <3
    The repition wasn't annoying like it is in some poems D: It was just right.


    I love it <3
     
  3. Maka Albarn It's called love

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    Woooow... the first part of the poem reminded of me for a bit... XD Lovely job! I could really feel the emotion you put into the poem, Xaale. ^^