If I made you smile.

It's been a while since I've seen it,
A real one, I mean.
There have been many replicas,
But none with that gleam.

The spark in your eyes,
The crease in your cheeks,
It's so far away,
But still in my reach.

I needed to see it,
Before you were gone,
Your memory faded,
Not outlined for long,

I want to remember,
That curve that I've missed,
The one that I've longed for,
The one that I've kissed.

You know I still miss you
And wish you had stayed,
It could have been easy,
If it were displayed.

The heart of my passion,
The light in my dark,
Your smile should link us,
When we are apart

If I cant revive it,
Then find one who can,
Just soften your voice,
And give me your hand.

I've tried hard to help you,
Been all I could be,
I hope that she'll see it,
And make you happy.

I'll leave you alone now,
But think for a while,
Would it have been different,
If I made you smile?

 

that's a cute little poem. i really liked it.

 

Thanks a bunch =]

 

you're very welcome.

 

wow, it isnt exactly to my liking

but its so good

the riming was good too.....

 

Thanks...I think....Wait, wha? It's not to your liking, but it's good...? O.o;;

 

That was great. I loved it.

It flowed perfectly and the rhyming scheme was great. ^^

 

:glomp: Thanks ^^

 

Wow . . . that might be the most insightful thing I've seen on the site. It's perfect, I love it! Five Stars! It perfectly portrays the deep love one can have for another.

 

Wow. Big compliment. Thank you =D (hugs)