Digital Art If honey were just as sweet

YAY! I CAN FINALLY PENTOOL [somewhat]. CnC, no ratings, etc, etc.

STOOOOOOOOOOOOOOCK!

 

Work on flow

 

You havent done justice to such a lovely girl.

She looks too gravely. :v

also, Im pretty sure the whole of khv knows what her bathroom looks like by now lol

 

It's really bugging me how the smudging just seems to dissipate on the right to the point that it's obvious that it was a smudged photo. There really isn't much flow in this one, nice try though.

 

Holy ****, it was only when I clicked the link that I realised who it was. You made her look like an ugly man.

 

flow and compo need a little work. Pen tool is fun if you can get it going well.

Work a little more on it. I suggest working on some shapes + stock cutting to get a good hang of it, then start doing paths and such slowly and subtly. Paths can be hard to get the hang of. A good example of what I mean is that path on left side of the stock. It's just kind of... there, y'know?

Still, good job for a first. Probably better than my first.

 

O_o Quite a bit of hating right here.

I like the effects, the pentooling looks very nice to me. The background is simple but effective too. I would work on the flow like Cody said, though.

 

You picked a bad stock, not saying it's bad because of her. Just a bad one from the ones of her lol

anyways, too much sharpening. + sharpening isnt always the greatest. needs better color variations.

only thing i can say i like is the pentooling.