I was bored. So, I did this piece, its short. but I guess it help me practice. Lately I haven't been feeling up to writing anything. I guess I wanted to try my hand at multiple characters, ect, deepness...it just came out all wrong. :/ “How can I look at things? They are rather presented strangely; but don’t classify me as an idiot…then again, I don’t really care anymore. Things have been going very smooth and normal is that a good thing? So everything is fine.†“You need mental help.†“Oh, and why?†“Well, having such constant suicidal thoughts is not normal!†“Well, to me it seems pretty normal.†“Why?†“Well…I’m not wasting my time explaining.†“I don’t know.†“See, then you DO need it.†“I don’t really care what you say…you can never understand.†“You have plans set out, ambitions to pursue; you’re perfect, unlike me. You actually have a future. How can you look at me with a straight face, and then laugh as if my situation was something funny…hypocrite.†“I’m sorry…I’ll try to help you.†“I don’t need your guilt or pity, live your life and I’ll live mine…If I don’t kill myself in the process.†“Don’t say such things, Al, things can change.†“Enough, John…Class is about to start.†“I don’t care…I really don’t…..I wish I could say those words and mean them. How can we see ourselves in the world? Is the future really that Important? Of course, it is. Then why haven’t I chosen anything? You’re afraid. Afraid of what? Wrong choices, decisions you might regret…salvation. What do I know? I know, because you know; deep down… Whatever, I should really stop talking to myself†=== “Why do I even bother? School, and everything else, there’s really no point.†“Don’t say that, Al, we need to get ready for our class presentation†“Which class? The one who is completely separated now? “ “We are united-“ “Yeah, by drama, lies and conflict….I guess, you could say we are.†“I guess we all grew up…and things change.†“Andrea, don’t tell me change does that to people…People will always be people, leave them be…†“You know what; I’ll feign happiness, for old time’s sake, okay?†“Al, I know what you mean, but can we really do anything about it?†“Well…Not about your gossiping mouth, you’ll probably tell everyone about this…I don’t know how you live with yourself.†“Things do change, everything is in constant change. I’m sick of sounding so smart. But you wish it reflected on your grades. I do. Then you have to work harder. Why should I? To hope, to accomplish. That is the only way. I wish I could leave and start over. I remember…†=== “I’m sorry, Val.†“You don’t have to be. It’s not your fault, it just happened.†“Either way, there was no chance…He’s straight.†“…Stupid, I know, I am. But I guess I sort of hate you…I saw him first.†“I don’t really think my father would approve, anyway. Either way, I’m not really a catch.†“Well, its okay, I accept you. I am your friend, I’ll always accept you.†“Thanks." "I wonder how much of that is true…everything changes…And pretty soon…just like everything, you’ll corrupt…and then, you will no longer accept me…†“In the end I always considered myself to be smarter than you, Val. Yet, in the end…You became the better person, while I drowned in stupidity.And yet…there are, sometimes in which I can see something, only for me. My own calling, waiting there, I’m just not sure if it’s an Illusion. “ === “Hahaha…Maybe we should, you know, strap DUCKS into motorcycles, because DUCKS are….blah, blah, blah.†“Andrew, no matter how much you try, that, ‘apparently smart’ brain of yours will never be, good enough…and of course, I hope you die, but not before you understand that not everything in life will go the way you want it, sincerely, I would normally care less, but if given the chance, I would teach you that myself; the hard way.†I don’t normally take pleasure in these things, but he hurt me, and it’s not revenge; its justice. Really, I thought you were a nice person? I am nice. Well what you just said doesn’t sound very nice? If you are I, then you know the answer to this. Of coanted to hear it from my own lips. I should really stop talking to myself…†“Hey there…†“Hello.†“Well?†“Hmm…Why don’t you speak, it always makes me tense…I can never tell what you’re thinking from the other side of the screen.†“Can we talk?†“Okay.†“What do you consider life to be?†“I don’t know.†“Oh? How so? “ “It just is.†“Really?†“Yes.†“Whatever.†“…â€
It's hard to write only in dialogue and thoughts. That said, this is very choppy and unclear. You should try to be very careful with context because it's very hard to tell what is going on simply by speech. Overall story is not such a problem, but I do have to say it went around a lot with no conclusion. You also made me feel as if you stalked my posts since the beginning when I saw this. Anything you have to say?
No, not really...I've said all I wanted to say. In any case I will do as I please, its not like you can prevent me. And seriously now, I don't really care what anyone thinks. Either way, I do not have to be giving you or anyone information regards to my actions. Take that as you will. Either way, yes, while I wanted to do something like this before, I really didn't know how, so when I saw your work, I began writing, it was just experimenting. Because your work helped me a lot. And if you're just joking, disregard the first part. I'm just a bit defensive. And you're probably joking, so forget about it....>.> so my message is directed towards anyone else who fits what I said. Which I think, its currently no one.
