I won´t let the past torture me

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  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Shadows of the past
    They always chasing me down
    They always damaged my heart
    But I won´t let them now

    Now that I already set me free
    I won´t let they trap me again
    I will fight with the shadows of my past
    I will beat them, I will watch the tommorow

    They can´t beat me down
    They won´t win me now
    They are like a million faces
    I´ve recognized them all

    Now I have something to love
    I won´t be afraid, so come on!
    I won´t cry, I won´t be scared
    I will fight and I will defeat them

    They can sneak up from behind
    But still I will crush them all
    They are like a monster
    That feeds with my sorrow

    I won´t let them trap me now
    I won´t let them make my heart hollow
    I am not scared of my past
    Now that I have something to care about

    They won´t chain me down
    I will destroy them all
    I will look at the future
    I won´t drown in my past

    I show everyone who I am
    So leave me for once at all!
    I will show them what I can do
    Prepare to dissapear in the oblivion!

    What I have in my two hands in enought for me
    I will end this now, I am not scared nor afraid anymore
    My heart will not be drown in my depression
    I will not be afraid, I will end victorious

    Time to fight
    So bring it on!
    I will end this once and for all
    I won´t let you torture me anymore!

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  2. clouddart100 Destiny Islands Resident

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    I like it, your a good poet
     
  3. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Lol i luv your poems i read most of them.There AWESOME :D
     
  4. Saintlikesgirls Chaser

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    heh some of your typing you might want to edit :P like this line: I won´t let they trap me again

    but this one is a little better but still dont like it(sorry bout being little mister johny-raincloud)
     
  5. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks.

    Thank you.

    :silence: Anybody can be a critic.
     
  6. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Yea i agree but the grammar doesn't really matter becuz you know what he is saying
     
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