I will set me free

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  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    First of all, I am talking about ALMOST everything, but I can´t write that so I writed Everything:

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    Everything at my side dies
    Everything wants me to cry
    Of this I can´t take no more
    That´s why I want to end this now

    What I did!?
    Why I deserve this!?
    I won´t allow this
    With my hands I´ll set me free

    I won´t suffer anymore
    Everything aside is torn
    But I won´t allow this
    I will stop my suffering

    I resisted over the time
    But everything trapped me from inside
    I will set me free now
    I won´t allow this anymore

    Try to take everything from me
    I won´t allow this
    Try to kill me from inside
    I won´t let this, I will step aside

    Everything wants me to suffer
    This shall be stopped
    I will fight for what I love
    So bring it on!

    I will take another try
    This time I will not lose
    Let me show you what I´m made of
    I will not lose, I will not be torn

    Try to damage me
    Try to take control of me
    I won´t let you
    I will show you what I´m made of

    Let me show you who I am
    And what I´m here for
    I won´t live in misery
    I won´t allow this

    My life will not be meaningless
    I will fight, I will not end lifeless
    This won´t end like before
    I will end this now

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  2. ShadowMancer King's Apprentice

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    *low whistle* Your a poet, and you don't know it, but your work shows it.
     
  3. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks for the comment ^^ :).
     
  4. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    O.o o.O omg real poet
     
  5. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Wow.

    You're an awesome poet!!!
     
  6. Saintlikesgirls Chaser

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    honestly no offense but i hate it, sorry
     
  7. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks.

    Thank you.

    Meh, is okay.
     
  8. Knightshade Hollow Bastion Committee

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    good job very cheerful:)
     
  9. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks for the comment ^^ :).
     
  10. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Your poems are cooler than mine geez.lol there REALLY good.
     
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