I want to believe

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  1. Kairi9020 Traverse Town Homebody

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    I want to believe that you are still here
    Not rotting away in all of my fears
    I want to know if the light will reach you
    If it can't,
    I'll fade into darkness to be with you

    I'll give you all you need
    No matter how much the fee
    Please believe that I won't let my tears spill
    Into the sky we go again because this will be my will

    Underneath the moonlight sky
    And above the beauitful blue ocean
    This is more then a fantasy
    This is more then we can handle
    I truly believe, that this is passion

    The person in the past,
    The one I loved long ago
    Has come and now has to go
    Believe that we will meet again
    But this time, he's only a friend

    I'm swimming in deep rivers
    I'm walking long distances
    I'm dreaming wild dreams
    I'm turning my light into a powerful beam
    Before you know it,
    I'll shoot it into the sky
    And lose it forever

    Beautiful light
    Wonderful feeling
    I'm losing sight of it
    But it's something I'm willing to do
    I just want to be with you

    I'm told if I love something
    I have to let it go
    Why does it hurt?
    Your eyes barely notice me
    But your heart wants me to be by your side
    Please don't feel blue
    Because I'm always here for you​

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    I wrote another poem. I was bored so if it's not my best, you know why.
     
  2. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    wow that was good. i would gotten stuck b/c i would have added the word orange.
     
  3. Amber PLUR

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    That was really good. :)
     
  4. Kairi9020 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Thank you. ^^
     
  5. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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  6. Cherry Berry Chaser

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    Astoundingly amazing. I cannot put my finger into how that poem took me by the heart! I adored it!
     
  7. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thank you... For depressing me more, now I fell better, how much I love to be depressed.
     
  8. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Very nice poem, Kairi~!! *claps* I can't really find anything to critique, great job. :)
     
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