Traditional Art I think this is better than last time....

HI PEOPLE!!!!!!!! This is my new drawing. I think this time i did better with proportions and drawing comeparded to last time. My other pictures from last time are here.

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=12647

Here is my new one!
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x287/AerithRoses/girlwithpurse.jpg

Please tell me what to work on!

 

It looks a lot better ^_^ umm it seems a bit plain =/ and the face well change that a tad bit. Besides that it looks fine.

 

Ya, cant go into amazing detail...stupid arm problem..... Thanks for the comment!

 

it looks good, if ya work on the face your fine

 

Thanks. And for the face what do i need to do? SHading? Porotions? The works?

 

Some of the features and the hair are a little off for the angle you have it set at.

I'll do a redline in a sec to show you what I mean. OpenCanvas is almost done downloading [You seriously don't want me to do it in MS Paint >.>....]

 

MS PAINT!!!!!!!!!! XD. MS Paint like hates me........ whats a redline????? I know, i feel so n00bish asking that......

 

wtf?? does she have six fingers???

 

*shakes head* It might look like that because the fingers wrap around into a fist sorta thing. Or mabye i just dont pay that close attention XD

 

I think the shoulder is too far back...and that the feet look odd, but hey, I even have trouble with feet.

 

Must kill feet! *stab* My MAJOR weakness, eyes, hand, feet. THEY MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The shoulder.........hum..........*goes of to examine*

 

!!!!!!! WHat was wrong with the other one?? BUT there both amazing!!! I drew a better picture of Akarui if you want to see it just look at my threads and it says New drawing but not New style

 

Okay dokey! *goes off to look* Is it other the other thread?

 

This is a redline. :3 Basically I just take your picture into Photoshop, Painter, or any other painting/photo manip. program with layers. I make a transperant layer, and kind of correct the flaws.



Okay, there were a few things that I found in the top. The angle you had her head tilted at was rather unnatural so I moved it downwards a bit a aligned the features with it. I tried to keep your style of eyes and such in there but I just couldn't keep the nose [sorry, you don't have to make it like that anyway :p]. It also seemed like you were trying to make her hair blow in the wind somewhat, but it appeared to be in one mass. Her hair didn't really look like...well, hair. I seperated strands and made it look a little more free.

As eastercat said, her shoulders were too far back. This is gonna bring up a lot of other anatomy problems in the torso and arm placing, but I'll help with that later. Her breast didn't seem to have any defining starting line so I made that clearer, and that's about it.

For the things I didn't correct, in comparison to her upper body and head her torso and below her pelvis are very foreshortened/small. They'll also be a bit out of position if you choose to change her shoulders, but I'll get to that tomorrow when I have the patch worked out Corel PainterX. Right now I have a corrupted patch going for oC, so I can't save anything. The above picture is just a screencap.

I hope this helps~

 

OOOOOOOO. IT PURTY!!!!! Sorry had to say that! But do you just do that by doing a transparant layer and than correcting the mistakes over it? Thats cool. Thanks for the advice. I have to draw pictures for a book that im doing, and this will really help. Thanks!

Wow, you had a long post....

 

yYeah its called New drawing but now new style i think

 

No problem, glad to help. :3

Yeah, I'm an intense perfectionist. ;_; Not the kind who like cries though when they get anything below Above average though. ^^;

 

Lol. I try to be. There was one time though when i got a C on my math final, and that made me mad being the school work perfectionest i am.......