Digital Art I Suck At Titles

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Fallen King, May 15, 2009.

  1. Fallen King Kingdom Keeper

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  2. Cody Chaser

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    The effects don't mesh very well, that's for sure.
     
  3. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    I actually like it. :3
    Sora himself looks rather well; but what looks like torn up Donald and Goofy is kinda not meshing.
    Maybe spreading it more.
    But the checker effect is a good touch. <3

    I like your avvy as well; hon. Nice job. :3
     
  4. Fallen King Kingdom Keeper

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    Bump, i finished, but i forgot to upload, so maybe today or tommorow it will be up, and @rissy i didn't make avatar, misty did


    added donald and goofy,
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  5. Ultimecia sorceress

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    imo it would look better without the checkered pattern, but I like what you're trying to do with it.
     
  6. Misty gimme kiss

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    I love the vine brush so much. o: Anyway, V1 looks better. Donald and Goofy just distract. I'd suggest cropping it around Sora's waist, and removing the checkerboard. The text isn't very good. Never use fancy fonts, they tend to look unprofessional. The bar is a nice touch sometimes, but I'm not feeling it in here. Add a Hue/Saturation filter, too. It's looking a little murky. Maybe some light, too. I think some nice C4Ds (the fractals by greentunic on Gimptalk get the good done), and maybe some displacement layers/more smudging.

    Keep going, I think this has potential.
     
  7. Fallen King Kingdom Keeper

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    Took Donald & Goofy out, Took Text Out, Cropped it, But I Forgot To Put C4D's
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  8. Misty gimme kiss

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    Make it a little wider, I meant cropping as in the height. xD; Sorry. Because if your tag is too small there's no room for negative space and it's hard to create any sort of depth; it just looks cramped.