I need to express. Randomly.

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Juicy, Oct 10, 2008.

  1. Juicy Chaser

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    Fly me to the moon, honey',
    This life's a coaster,
    I need your arms.
    Your shelter,
    A sanctuary from strife,
    Heart thudding,
    Arms shaking.
    I hold you there,
    You hold me too,
    I gaze upon your eyes so blue,
    It's true, you know,
    Your lips brush mine,
    My heart bursts from a feeling so divine.

    It's true, you know,
    You long to fly,
    A caged bird needs to be free,
    But you stay
    'Cause you care,
    And 'cause one day I know you'll take me there
    Fly me to the moon, honey'.



    I was just in that "needing to express" mood :3
    Tell me what you think.


    <3333
     
  2. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    Well, that was quite good!
    So? I'm a dude, and I like poetry, so what?:D
     
  3. P E A N U T ~*~Never Surrender~*~

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    It was very cute and sweet =). Good job. I always love your writing.
     
  4. Advent 【DRAGON BALLSY】

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    =O

    That was good! I liked it. =D
     
  5. Juicy Chaser

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    Thanks <33
    And of course guys can like poetry :3

    *Hugglesyou* I feel like we havent spoken in ages for some reason D=
    Thanks.... you like it...always..? Awesome! xD

    *glomps you*
    Yay
    Advent seal of approval = awesome!