i need someone's advice on this....

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  1. MaM_1 Destiny Islands Resident

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    ok, so i have this idea to write a story about this 16 year old girl named raychel (ray for short) who get's kidnapped, then falls in love with her kidnapper...
    i need to know if it's a good idea, or if i should drop it and find something else to write about. and if i do write it, then i would probably post the story on here ever so often to make sure i can't lose it in case my computer crashes or something.
    sooo...tell me what you think!
    :D
    oh! and the book would be call A Messed Up Love Story
     
  2. king_mickey rule Destiny Islands Resident

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    As I said before, go for it! Nothing to lose y'know. The description of your story here is pretty basic but you can make it a very interesting story with ALOT of character development, which is good so in my opinion, write it :D
     
  3. MaM_1 Destiny Islands Resident

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    so what do you think of the title? i just thought of it like... .5 seconds ago, so i know it's not really good but it's something to call it for now.
    :)
     
  4. king_mickey rule Destiny Islands Resident

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    Hmmm well, the title is fitting for this story but I think you can do better, it's a good start though, but try to make like a title that can have f.e. different meanings or something.
     
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    alright.
    thanks for all the advice!
    :)
     
  6. Colby1234 Moogle Assistant

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    go for it will be good
     
  7. HellKitten Kingdom Keeper

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    Go for it. Stockholm's Syndrome always makes for an interesting story.
     
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    Oh, look, necrobump.
     
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    God I gotta start looking at dates of things before I post. -___-
     
  10. Misty gimme kiss

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    It's not really a necrobump, it's only been like two weeks. :|
     
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    How is this a necrobump? IT hasn't been that long.


    EDIT: Misty, that's like the second time in the last hour.
     
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    It's my goal to consistently outdo you guys.

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    Of course you kid. It can't be a goal if you've already succeeded.