Well, I have no title for my fic. I simply cannot think of one lol. So any suggestions? My fic beginning was under "Should I continue this?" There are views but little comments. So need a title and here it is again for those who haven't read it. Please help. LOL Chapter 1: “Things are finally back to normal,” Kairi thought to herself. She remembered of how awful it was without Sora and Riku. At one point she couldn’t even remember who Sora was let alone his name. She never wanted them to leave again for another journey, but if they absolutely had to she would go with them. There was no doubt in her mind that would even consider staying behind. Not after all she’s put both Sora and Riku through by staying behind and being vulnerable. “When and if that day comes we’ll go together, right?” she thought. This question boggled Kairi’s mind all the time when she thought of Sora or Riku leaving… especially Sora. Sora and Kairi shared a special bond; they always understood and knew what the other was feeling. Sora; the young brunette, key bearer that she secretly loved. “No,” she thought, “I’m not ready to tell him.” Kairi was enjoying his company too much to risk ruining their friendship in case he did not feel the same way. Yet maybe love is too strong of a word, maybe it was only lust or a mere crush that would pass on over time. No use risking a wonderful friendship over feelings you’re not even sure about? Kairi was brought back to reality from her deep, drifting thoughts by the sound of laughter. She looked up to now see Sora, Riku, and Roxas had abandoned their shoes and shirts to go for a swim. At just the sight of the three boys splashing each other wildly made her laugh. She just happened to be looking in Sora’s direction noticing his large biceps and rock hard abs. Catching herself she looked at the sand beneath her feet, only to look up seconds later at Riku practically throwing Sora across the water. When he recovered he came up out of the clear blue water with sand covering his face. This sight and the sound of her best friends’ voice made Kairi wrinkle her toes in the sand and bring a smile to her face. “Hey Kairi,” Namine softly said. “Hi Namine,” she said. “You haven’t told him yet, have you?” the blond haired girl earnestly asked. Kairi could feel her face starting to get warm. “No, and I don’t plan to, Namine.” Kairi sarcastically replied sticking out her tongue. “Well, you should,” Namine said. The soft spoken blond then lightly punch Kairi’s arm and started walking towards the pier, where she noticed the boys had finally come ashore from their swim. Questions, concerns, comments: post or PM me
Lust? O.o WTF?! It's a kid's game! Er...you should call it KairilikesSorabutistoomuchofanidiottosayittohim. Or, or, or, "Kairi's Dairy" or something to that affect.
Whats wrong with the word lust? lol. Not like some fics where Axel is in love with Roxas...or "The Game" was hillar I'll have to say but odd lol. Anyway, if people want I will put a rating on my fic this is just the first chapter. So whatever I guess PG-13 because their might be some language...and the word lust LOL ... I needed to explain Kairi's thoughts...can't tell you more though! *wink wink* *nudge nudge* Kairi's Diary is good but I"ve already seen one called that. Don't want to get blamed for stealing someones title. And no to the first one...
You should prolly explain why Roxas and Namine are not in their Other's. Title...hmmm, well, you've only given a bit of the story so it's quite difficult. 'Love's Explanation' maybe?
No yours is not stupid. Just busy sorry. I actually like yours. But I have a title in mind now after thinking for a bit. Yeah, I know its only 1 chapter I'm going to post chapter 2 today. The whole Roxas Namine thing just popped into my head one day, sad thing is I don't have the explaination for you now. It "should" be there in the near future. Plus I wanted to give Roxas and Namine some spotlight in this since in my opinion they didn't really get that much in the game. And the story is not all focused on Kairi's situation, but thanks for the idea. This is going to be adventure/ romance/ comedy.
Let's call it...'Love, lust or crush?' I dunno. Maybe if it has to do with the whole Kairi and Sora relation-ship than it would work.
I like that =] doesn't explain the entire story. But Thank you very much! I <3 it! Still taking suggestions, but now the title will be "The Pure of Heart" (may change) Those interested in the second chapter look for The Pure of Heart (Chapter 2). Going to post it right now then...enjoy :D
WOOTERZ! XDDD *smacked with a brick* *rubs head* Yeah, I know it was weird, it was supposed to be one that made people go, "O.o; WTF, MATE?! XD;" But, enough about my story... This is YOUR thread. XD And your title should be... ................ I dunno - I'm horrible with titles... ._.; Especially romance-type stories. DX But I'll keep thinking about it, savvy? =3
Thanks. Ok keep thinking. Right now the title is "The Pure of Heart" look for chapter 2 everyone! :D And your story made me laugh! Thanks for the laughs
XD; Thanks! ^-^; I have other... Much-less weird stories out there that are just as funny - if not funnier. Go check 'em out sometime! =3 *continues drafting up titles* Gawd, I suck at this... >.>; *chews pencil*
