Traditional Art I need a [Angel]

Another drawing~ How nice <3

This is probably the first drawing of a person that I actually TRIED at.
I drew it for my love, Rufus.... and boredom << >>
Yeah, I know, I screwed up on the cheek a bit. THat's what you get for using a crappy pen -.-'


I need a name for her :3

CnC?

 

Those wings are pretty good, they look nice :3
- The face line looks a little odd, a little bumpy
- Her chest is pretty good, but her arms could be a little bigger. Maybe lower the right one a tiny bit?
- Try making the dress a little more floating? That way it looks a little more real.
- This hair is much better than on your other drawing, try making this a little mroe floating to.
- More details on the shoes ? outline?
- And again your very nice, own style signature ^^
- The 'angel' text style looks pretty good work a little on it and make it more visible and it will look awsome.
- What name wouldn't be more fitting than 'Angel' or 'Saint' ? XD

 

I do believe it's "an angel", to be grammatically correct.

Anyway, the overall texture and depth of this piece is extremely flat and rough. Shade it a little?

Nice job.

 

I knew someone would say that~ <3
I like it better that way.

 

Call her Elina! :-D

Pretty nice attempt. Kairi makes some good points that you should follow up to. I'd also have to second what Darky said, about the shading. Make it look more 'volumous'...and I don't care if volumous ain't a word. You catch my drift :>

 

Then Elina she is!

Well, you just made a word... and yes, the draft is caught.

 

You know you just named her after what StupidA really is named =P

 

SHHHHHHH!! She wasn't supposed to know!

Yaayz!<3

...I was certain it was a word. Damn you, English. *writes 'Volumous' in the dictionary*