I Love You... But Do You Love Me...?

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  1. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    Every time I see you
    Beads of sweat run gently
    Down my forehead
    I feel nervous
    Should I talk to you?

    If I walk up to you
    What should I say?
    Maybe I could just
    Tell you how I feel
    But how would you react?

    I want to say
    How much I love you
    Keeping it a secret is
    Killing me inside
    Devouring me from within

    There's this constant pain
    Inside me
    In my chest
    In my soul
    In my heart

    There's a huge hole
    In my heart where
    Your love should be
    I need you to
    Make me complete

    I'm too afraid to tell you
    How I feel
    I don't even know
    Why I feel this way
    When I never even met you

    I want to meet you
    And get to know you
    And then I'll say
    "I love you"
    But do you love me...?
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    A sweet poem about love just because I'm in the valentine mood... and I just started thinking about a crush I have... and I thought I'd write about how I feel... I'm not sure if I should tell him because I don't think he likes me back... although I HAVE met him and we our friends... the poem is a little different than what I'm feeling...

    But I hope you like it anyways ^^
     
  2. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    nice!!! i did not see any spelling errors, you should enter it in this..
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=40933







    contest!!
     
  3. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    haha I just did XP

    I just wrote this in like... 5 minutes... so I'll probably end up writing another here in a bit... look for more! XD XD
     
  4. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    cool but be warned i am entering too!!!!!!!!!!!!
    so look out!!!!!!!
    a good friendly rivalry is just what we need. eye? lol!!!!!
    i am about 1/3 done with it for some reason, i need to speed up a little
     
  5. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    I write poems in like... 15 minutes at most... XD XD
     
  6. Falling Star Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Great work! Hope you or Jedininja wins! :)
     
  7. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    thanks! ^^