Digital Art I listened to Sharp (spidey sig)

So i listened to sharp and followed a few tuts, mixing ideas. This si what i got (for the SotW at another site)

 

Its good. A improvement from your last one. Keep up the good work.

 

Well this one is very better and a good improvement from your last one.
It looks a little odd with his head not on the body and then hos body suddently appears without a head behind him.
Better job (:

 

thanks, i really like how the shaddowing came out on it

 

I really like it!!!!

 

Wow, this rocks. A major improvement if you ask me. Well done, man. 10/10

 

wow thanks!! now i just need sharps final approval. . .

 

Remove that aweful aweful aweful border.
Add Brightness-Contrast
Add More Saturation
Add more vibrancy

and then you will have a nice tag. Cause right now. This looks nowhere near finished.

 

okay i tried what you said but i dont know, which is better and what should i do ?

 

I think the first one and the last one are the best one's out of your tweaked versions. ^_^

 

lol, the first one is the origianl

 

That's probably why I liked it so much! ^_^' haha

 

waits for sharp. . .but im planning on getitng CS2 today!!!