a really short poem i wrote... Sitting alone in a room no one to hold. My arms grow weak in the darkness I hate being alone. Seeing people together a tear goes down my cheek, wishing for a special moment i hate being alone. I can see her in the darkness she's near, and yet so far. I wanna make that dream a reality I hate being alone! seriously, i hate being single.
I liked it. The repitition at the end of each stanza was quite effective kind of made me sad reading it though.. I hate being single too ehehe
Eh, I'm all right with being single. Now, onto the poem. It was very good, and I enjoyed reading it. It hada nice flow to it. Like the user above me said, the repition of "I hate being alone" was very effective. Good job. ^-^
