Digital Art I Found It

the stock laplace used in one of his sotw's
but CnC No Ratings At all
I actualy think this is pretty good for what i have been doing lately

Stock CLICK MEH

 

WAY TOO BRIGHT

And not much contrast or detail. Get rid all that white background.

 

i got rid of most of the white bg, darkend it up and raised the contrast a little

 

Better, but seriously. Get rid of all that white.

 

Stock was low quality to begin with, so I'll give you that, but do not settle for stocks with anything less than pristine quality. The stock sets the tone for the rest of the tag, and low quality stock means low quality tag. I can see that You tried to fix the quality in some places, but it honestly made it look a little worse. :/ Moving on, there really isn't much to the tag. The smudging is less than interesting, and cuts the arm. Try not to smudge the major parts of the tag so much to the point that it looks awkward. The vertical line does nothing for any chance of flow, and the small shot of her face just draws away from the focal. Contrast is too low in the first one, contrast is too high in the second one. Find a happy medium. Colors are boring, background is dull. The light is very off, too. :/ The cropping is better in the first one, but it is too centered. RULE OF THIRDS.

Go back to tuts; they help. ​

 

Well, its really...white. I dont mind the main picture but the line next to it and the little cropped bit is kinda annoying. the smudge looks like it dislocated the arm.

 

I do agree with you, next time dont be afraid to use color, but it is good i liked the way you designed it and all

 

read some smudge tutorials till you get the hang of it.