I Feel Like I'm Dying...

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Heaven's Angel, Jan 18, 2008.

  1. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

    Joined:
    Sep 30, 2007
    Location:
    Making AMVs. :P
    124
    993
    I can feel the pain
    Rising inside of me
    I don't know what to do
    How do I stop this?
    I feel like I'm dying...

    I don't see blood
    I have no wounds
    But I still feel the pain
    How is this happening?
    I feel like I'm dying...

    There are hot tears
    Running down my face
    The wounds inside me
    Will they heal?
    I feel like I'm dying...

    You used to be there
    To watch over and
    Protect me
    But now that you're not here
    I feel like I'm dying...

    I don't know what to do
    What to say
    What to think
    You pierced my heart
    I feel like I'm dying...

    Even though I have no wounds
    And there's no blood
    I'm still in pain
    My heart is shattered
    And I know inside

    That I am dying...
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    just felt like writing it... >_> (my first poem with a lot of repetition... XD XD)
     
  2. Garxena Hollow Bastion Committee

    Joined:
    Aug 27, 2007
    Location:
    Berk
    150
    684
    I LOVE IT! I totally understand how you're feeling! *hugs*
     
  3. Doukuro Chaser

    Joined:
    Jun 29, 2007
    Gender:
    Female
    1,172
    That makes three
     
  4. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

    Joined:
    Sep 30, 2007
    Location:
    Making AMVs. :P
    124
    993
    *hugs both* glad to see someone does... ^^
     
  5. Gwen Farewell.

    Joined:
    Apr 7, 2007
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    tumblr
    242
    It explains exactly what I am feeling right now, as well.

    Great job, keep up the good work<3
     
  6. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

    Joined:
    Sep 30, 2007
    Location:
    Making AMVs. :P
    124
    993
    wow... everyone feels like that today... >_>

    well thanks ^^ glad you guys enjoy my poems XD