Traditional Art I don't know if they belong here if they don't I'm sorry...

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Aura, Feb 16, 2008.

  1. Aura Goddess

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    These are my paintings I have drawings too but there are a lot.Tell me if you like them:)

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  2. *Hippie Jesus* "I get online and notice I have E-mail I click my

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    whoa thats really good and do u have more paintings?
     
  3. .Kairi. Kingdom Keeper

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    You need to work on the proportions and the shapes of the body parts in most of them. For example, the arm is too small for the rest of her body in the first picture. Also work on making them less stiff, don't be afraid to loosen up on areas like the hair and clothing.
    Otherwise, you have these colored very well. And I really like the drawings of Rikku and Donald, they look great.
     
  4. Aura Goddess

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    No I don't those are the only ones.But I have been wanting to paint more I just have to look at some of the pictures I have.If I paint another one I'll post it.
    And thank you for the comment:)
     
  5. *Hippie Jesus* "I get online and notice I have E-mail I click my

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    well your a much better artist then i am and i'm looking forward for more^^
     
  6. Aura Goddess

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    Thank you maybe you can pm me some of your drawings.I started to draw in 7th grade and now I'm in 10th so I've pretty much have been drawing and painting almost 4 years or so.But I would love to see your drawings too:)
     
  7. amythest Traverse Town Homebody

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    wow i think you are doing really good considering it is painted... i cnt paint XP... anyway i agree with .kairi. you should work on the proportions, the faces. i really like the rikku picture though i think it looks really good! keep it up!
     
  8. Wulphie! Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Um........How do I put this gently? I only liked Rikku and Donald.The rest of them need work. Sorry!
     
  9. Aura Goddess

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    The Donald one is my very first painting that I ever did.

    I'm glad a lot of people are liking the Rikku and Donald painting.

    The Donald painting took me like 3 hours to do so I guess it was worth it.
     
  10. Tootsie coquí

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    I'm going to CnC separately.


    First drawing of Kairi:The face seems okay to me but what you should probably fix is the hair,seems glued-like,more flow into it.As for the shoulders,it's way off and it's too thin and her chest is way to big,it's okay to draw big chests for a males body but the female's chest are thinner.


    Second drawing of Kairi:Chest too big and head too small.

    Donald:It's okay but his mouth its kind of big and it makes the face look all weird and not balanced.

    Ariel:The eyes are way off,try to draw a line with a rule before you draw the eyes so you can balance them.


    I like the Rikku one though,very simple and cute :3 hope I helped.
     
  11. Aura Goddess

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    the Ariel one I don't like it I messed it up and its my least favorite.
    But thank you for the tips:)
     
  12. Shuhbooty moon child

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    I like the first Kairi. But the second Kairi looks, really Big. But I lOVE RIKKU!!! So cute, awesome job. =3
    I love how you painted them. Looks really cute. You should keep practicing, with the drawing then the painting. Cause it'll look good! ;3
    But great job, lub the work!